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11/29/2011 c2 12Konoe3
Wow, that was interesting ;) Good job

Btw, I'n czech, so my language is phonetically, but in total aspect,similar to russian...and I can't help it, it just looks so funny. I tried to read thise transcriptions and I was like LOL ^^
11/29/2011 c1 12Croc'Sushi
Hello, I enjoyed the FrUK chapter a lot. Nicely written.

I would just like fixing the French if you allow me so ?
11/28/2011 c2 loserpalooza
This is fantastic! The back and forth between these two is absolutely brilliant-and the sex is wonderfully hot;)
8/28/2011 c1 hetalian
This is so brilliant, hot and funny at the same time.
6/22/2011 c1 11sleepy hippo
Wow, really well written - that was intense! I love FrUk so much and the build up and what was obviously left unsaid between them was really beautifully done, their loss of, eh...control was very absorbing heheh.

I loved the start of their tryst and the lack of passion and France commenting on the sex being boring. Magic!
6/20/2011 c1 1Readers-Section
Oh wow, this was REALLY good!
6/12/2011 c1 16Unshadowed Heart
This is adorable and sexy *¬*

Is there gonna be more? I really hope so :3

I'm not usually a huge FrUK fan, but this is just so perfect xD Most political decisions are settled between the sheets after all *wiggles eyebrows*

Yus I love this *glompsnugglesnuggle*

More? :3

~Shadow-chan sends love
5/31/2011 c1 alguien22792
Oh damn, I love this so freaking much!~

It started so funny and then it become so hot, I love how amazingly in character you managed to keep both of them even though they were having sex. Awesome job :D
5/16/2011 c1 Avadhuta
You are so FABULOUS! With the French and the story! And funny! HUZZAH INDEED! Double chocolate chunk baby! ;)

More! More! More!
5/16/2011 c1 2American Anaconda
Beautiful and very sexy! I love it. C:
5/15/2011 c1 1XxCapturetheLightxX
That was great! I really want more now, it's amazing so far! XD Please update soon!
5/15/2011 c1 27ultimatebishoujo21
Nice!
5/15/2011 c1 3Lily Canvas
Oh my God. I love it!

Please update soon!

xx
5/14/2011 c1 loserpalooza
This is excellent! so well written and snarky I love it! and the sex is super hot! yaya!:)
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