for Kuwurasetai no1/28/2012 c2 
3Fellowship of Avengers
Oh dear. Atem! Stop being a jerk! Anzu is a **. HOLY RA! Niiiiice. XD they are gonna be sore in the morning.
3Fellowship of AvengersOh dear. Atem! Stop being a jerk! Anzu is a **. HOLY RA! Niiiiice. XD they are gonna be sore in the morning.
1/28/2012 c1 Fellowship of Avengers
HOLY RA! *drools and has a major nosebleed* *passes out from bloodloss*
HOLY RA! *drools and has a major nosebleed* *passes out from bloodloss*
8/18/2011 c1 1Angeldrkfire
This is one of my favorite all time lemons. Seeing Yugi drunk like that is so much fun! You did a wonderful job with it :)
1AngeldrkfireThis is one of my favorite all time lemons. Seeing Yugi drunk like that is so much fun! You did a wonderful job with it :)
5/30/2011 c2 1RyouSyki
loved it! u should should do somthing like that about ryou and bakura cause right now they're sooo my fav yaoi couple.
1RyouSykiloved it! u should should do somthing like that about ryou and bakura cause right now they're sooo my fav yaoi couple.
5/28/2011 c2 4angel61991
i have afew ideas... they havent done it against a wall, bent over a table yet, in the shower or tied ^. u can add toys 2. i can come ^ w/ a whole bunch of stuff... but thats only cause i read 2 much smut.
4angel61991i have afew ideas... they havent done it against a wall, bent over a table yet, in the shower or tied ^. u can add toys 2. i can come ^ w/ a whole bunch of stuff... but thats only cause i read 2 much smut.
5/27/2011 c2 15Madam Jokudaim of Black Butler
MAKE IT YUGI IT WOULD BE DEAD HILARIOUSE FOR HORMONES!LIKE THE 4 AM THING YA ROCK~~~!(^v^).
15Madam Jokudaim of Black ButlerMAKE IT YUGI IT WOULD BE DEAD HILARIOUSE FOR HORMONES!LIKE THE 4 AM THING YA ROCK~~~!(^v^).
5/23/2011 c2 6edvy8
Vy *nosebleed*: ** damn! THAT IS AN AWESOME LEMON AND STORY!"
Edward facepalms: Great! You gave the pervert ideas for his stories! Just great!
Envy smirks: I personally enjoyed it. Makes me want to do the same with chibi.
Edward blushes.
Vy: Please! Please! Do the idea! I love this story and I want to see the mpreg. Bring on the yaoi and family issiues! whoo!
6edvy8Vy *nosebleed*: ** damn! THAT IS AN AWESOME LEMON AND STORY!"
Edward facepalms: Great! You gave the pervert ideas for his stories! Just great!
Envy smirks: I personally enjoyed it. Makes me want to do the same with chibi.
Edward blushes.
Vy: Please! Please! Do the idea! I love this story and I want to see the mpreg. Bring on the yaoi and family issiues! whoo!
5/22/2011 c2 Coolaloo
AWESOME LEMON! :D Thank you for the up-date, these lemons are soooooo hot. ^-^ I hope you make that idea of yours come true! :D
AWESOME LEMON! :D Thank you for the up-date, these lemons are soooooo hot. ^-^ I hope you make that idea of yours come true! :D
5/22/2011 c2 8Gamer551
oh! I hope its a mpreg about these three because I find them so cute and adorable! XD
T^T Yugi scared me...
Yugi: Im sorry...
No! The damage has been done... T^T I never thought you would be so angry... DX YOU EVEN HURT ATEM AND YAMI!
Atem& Yami: *sniffles*
I loved this chapter! AMAZING! I cant wait for the next chapter, or your next story T^T Which ever your going to be working on...
Hehe You like making me hate Tea don't you... XD
8Gamer551oh! I hope its a mpreg about these three because I find them so cute and adorable! XD
T^T Yugi scared me...
Yugi: Im sorry...
No! The damage has been done... T^T I never thought you would be so angry... DX YOU EVEN HURT ATEM AND YAMI!
Atem& Yami: *sniffles*
I loved this chapter! AMAZING! I cant wait for the next chapter, or your next story T^T Which ever your going to be working on...
Hehe You like making me hate Tea don't you... XD
5/16/2011 c1 2Darkspine29
Let me start by saying your English is fantastic. Not only are you able to write normal English well, it seems you are also quite fluent in drunk English, a dialect I still have trouble with.
I love how Yami gets to be the focus in this chapter. Most Mobiumshipping stories I find tend to center mostly on Yugi, never really delving into the relationship between Atemu and Yami. This was certainly a breath of fresh air. Yami just makes such an adorable uke it's hard not to fall in love with him here.
One thing I did have a little trouble with was where and how they were positioned at certain points.(personally I think thats the hardest part of writing a threesome.)In your other story I had no trouble keeping track of them so I think it's just the extended length that gave me trouble.
I can't wait to see what you do with the boys next, chapter two can't come soon enough.
2Darkspine29Let me start by saying your English is fantastic. Not only are you able to write normal English well, it seems you are also quite fluent in drunk English, a dialect I still have trouble with.
I love how Yami gets to be the focus in this chapter. Most Mobiumshipping stories I find tend to center mostly on Yugi, never really delving into the relationship between Atemu and Yami. This was certainly a breath of fresh air. Yami just makes such an adorable uke it's hard not to fall in love with him here.
One thing I did have a little trouble with was where and how they were positioned at certain points.(personally I think thats the hardest part of writing a threesome.)In your other story I had no trouble keeping track of them so I think it's just the extended length that gave me trouble.
I can't wait to see what you do with the boys next, chapter two can't come soon enough.
5/15/2011 c1 8Gamer551
^^ You know... It seems like Yami is the one in the middle instead of Yugi... O^O It is so cute! XD Atem is still dominating! XD even as an Uke he still manages to be the dominating one... XD I'm mad at him though for making Yugi cry! DX This one is just as good as the last! AND LONGER! XD I love itttt!
8Gamer551^^ You know... It seems like Yami is the one in the middle instead of Yugi... O^O It is so cute! XD Atem is still dominating! XD even as an Uke he still manages to be the dominating one... XD I'm mad at him though for making Yugi cry! DX This one is just as good as the last! AND LONGER! XD I love itttt!