for My Skin7/29/2012 c17 
22JessicaStone134
Cor blimey what a corker of a chapter!
I have a god awful bad feeling about Maura's neighbours from hell! Especially to do with Elizabeth!
What an awful way for someone to be murdered, I'm sure Maura and Sam will be on the case and catch the bastard before its too late!
More please?
Jess xx
22JessicaStone134Cor blimey what a corker of a chapter!
I have a god awful bad feeling about Maura's neighbours from hell! Especially to do with Elizabeth!
What an awful way for someone to be murdered, I'm sure Maura and Sam will be on the case and catch the bastard before its too late!
More please?
Jess xx
5/26/2012 c16 JessicaStone134
Omg Hollie! That wait was worth is, what a corker of a chapter! So much going on!
I have a horrid feeling that the patriarch from across the road is the rapist that Maura is looking for, and if he is, it makes me fear for her safety!
Brilliant chapter missy, loved it!
Jess xx
Omg Hollie! That wait was worth is, what a corker of a chapter! So much going on!
I have a horrid feeling that the patriarch from across the road is the rapist that Maura is looking for, and if he is, it makes me fear for her safety!
Brilliant chapter missy, loved it!
Jess xx
12/26/2011 c14 22JessicaStone134
Ah, my Callum catching the bad guys as normal ;)
An excellent chapter Hol, especially with Smithy building Maura's confidence with boxing. Shame that she had to ruin it by not eating, and it was all going so well!
I really hope she overcomes this!
Jess xx
22JessicaStone134Ah, my Callum catching the bad guys as normal ;)
An excellent chapter Hol, especially with Smithy building Maura's confidence with boxing. Shame that she had to ruin it by not eating, and it was all going so well!
I really hope she overcomes this!
Jess xx
10/23/2011 c13 JessicaStone134
Jesus, safe to say I panicked a bit when Maura was going all crazy with knife on Smithy! What if it had been Max! I know she was ill and all, but that's extreme! thank God she's going for counselling!
Smithy is a bad boyfriend! Poor Maura going to all that trouble and him not appeciating it like he should!
Things better get better for them...I have a feeling it won't though!
Well done Hollie :)
Jess xx
Jesus, safe to say I panicked a bit when Maura was going all crazy with knife on Smithy! What if it had been Max! I know she was ill and all, but that's extreme! thank God she's going for counselling!
Smithy is a bad boyfriend! Poor Maura going to all that trouble and him not appeciating it like he should!
Things better get better for them...I have a feeling it won't though!
Well done Hollie :)
Jess xx
10/2/2011 c12 JessicaStone134
Poor Maura. Looks like the stress of everything has just piled up on her. I liked the counselling session bit, it gave us a real insight into why she's feeling the way she is.
I'm glad Smithy is there supporting her like he should be, but I feel bad that he has to see Maura suffering like that. And as for her dream about Vincent...premonition perhaps?
More more more!
Jess xx
Poor Maura. Looks like the stress of everything has just piled up on her. I liked the counselling session bit, it gave us a real insight into why she's feeling the way she is.
I'm glad Smithy is there supporting her like he should be, but I feel bad that he has to see Maura suffering like that. And as for her dream about Vincent...premonition perhaps?
More more more!
Jess xx
9/18/2011 c11 37H.A. Taylor
Great chapter, so glad that they're both okay and poor Maura (was just about to wirte Andrea then having just reviewed Hear in Atlantis) thinking that Smithy had stood her up.
It's good to see that things are starting to look up for the two of them. Wonder what his reaction's going to be when Smithy finds out who Michelle really is.
Can't wait for the next chapter :)
37H.A. TaylorGreat chapter, so glad that they're both okay and poor Maura (was just about to wirte Andrea then having just reviewed Hear in Atlantis) thinking that Smithy had stood her up.
It's good to see that things are starting to look up for the two of them. Wonder what his reaction's going to be when Smithy finds out who Michelle really is.
Can't wait for the next chapter :)
9/18/2011 c11 22JessicaStone134
Are you sure you struggled with this chapter? You can't tell at all!
I didn't care whether Smithy survived or not, I just wanted to make sure Callum was ok! And thank God he is, otherwise there'd be trouble Hollie! ;)
I loved it so much, what with Maura and Smithy both confessing things to the other while they slept, it was very cute. And Smithy with the children was heart melting!
Loved it!
More more more!
Jess xx
22JessicaStone134Are you sure you struggled with this chapter? You can't tell at all!
I didn't care whether Smithy survived or not, I just wanted to make sure Callum was ok! And thank God he is, otherwise there'd be trouble Hollie! ;)
I loved it so much, what with Maura and Smithy both confessing things to the other while they slept, it was very cute. And Smithy with the children was heart melting!
Loved it!
More more more!
Jess xx
9/12/2011 c10 37H.A. Taylor
It's good to see that she's talking about what's happened lately :)
Nice twist at the end of the chapter, can't wait to read the next chapter and find out if they're okay.
37H.A. TaylorIt's good to see that she's talking about what's happened lately :)
Nice twist at the end of the chapter, can't wait to read the next chapter and find out if they're okay.
9/10/2011 c10 22JessicaStone134
That Jessica sounds like a wise old person ;)
I don't like the way Smithy is treating Maura, but at the same time I totally understand why he's so angry. Hopefully though the fact that he wants to meet her means that things might work out for them.
If you hurt my Callum I will hurt your Smithy...ok? They better be alright missy! ;)
Jess xx
22JessicaStone134That Jessica sounds like a wise old person ;)
I don't like the way Smithy is treating Maura, but at the same time I totally understand why he's so angry. Hopefully though the fact that he wants to meet her means that things might work out for them.
If you hurt my Callum I will hurt your Smithy...ok? They better be alright missy! ;)
Jess xx
8/29/2011 c9 JessicaStone134
Oh God Hollie! Poor Maura and Smithy, what're you putting them through!
Such a brilliant chapter, very nicely written. I feel sorry for Maura but I also think she should have told Smithy she didn't want the baby.
I really hope she doesn't go mental on herself, she's got to think about her boys!
Jess xx
Oh God Hollie! Poor Maura and Smithy, what're you putting them through!
Such a brilliant chapter, very nicely written. I feel sorry for Maura but I also think she should have told Smithy she didn't want the baby.
I really hope she doesn't go mental on herself, she's got to think about her boys!
Jess xx
8/26/2011 c9 37H.A. Taylor
It was inevitable that Smithy'd find out what really happened.
P.S. Sorry for the short review, half asleep atm and don't have any other time to review :)
37H.A. TaylorIt was inevitable that Smithy'd find out what really happened.
P.S. Sorry for the short review, half asleep atm and don't have any other time to review :)
8/18/2011 c8 H.A. Taylor
O_O *blink* O_O
Love this chapter, it's well written and the balance is absolutely spot on.
I hope Maura's okay (aside from the obvious) and I hope there's no lasting effect on her relationship with Smithy.
O_O *blink* O_O
Love this chapter, it's well written and the balance is absolutely spot on.
I hope Maura's okay (aside from the obvious) and I hope there's no lasting effect on her relationship with Smithy.
8/16/2011 c1 69lederra
I like this chapter. It will be interesting to see how the relief will react to her when she goes to work. Seeing as they busted her front door down on a raid.
69lederraI like this chapter. It will be interesting to see how the relief will react to her when she goes to work. Seeing as they busted her front door down on a raid.
8/15/2011 c8 22JessicaStone134
Oh god, what an amazing chapter! So much drama and emotion, but not too much that it becomes unbelieveable.
They way you wrote Maura's thought process out about the abortion was brilliant. I don't think Maura is callous for going behind Smithy's back, I just think she was desperate and scared.
I'm assuming Maura will now miscarry naturally because of the crash, so Smithy won't even have any idea what actually happened.
I hope Maura starts to feel better soon!
UPDATE SOON! Writer's block isn't an excuse ;) (ignore that last bit, I've had writer's block so many times it's not even funny!)
Jess xx
22JessicaStone134Oh god, what an amazing chapter! So much drama and emotion, but not too much that it becomes unbelieveable.
They way you wrote Maura's thought process out about the abortion was brilliant. I don't think Maura is callous for going behind Smithy's back, I just think she was desperate and scared.
I'm assuming Maura will now miscarry naturally because of the crash, so Smithy won't even have any idea what actually happened.
I hope Maura starts to feel better soon!
UPDATE SOON! Writer's block isn't an excuse ;) (ignore that last bit, I've had writer's block so many times it's not even funny!)
Jess xx