for Past8/20/2012 c2 Guest
i enjoyed reading all three stories you posted on this. they are very good!
i enjoyed reading all three stories you posted on this. they are very good!
6/17/2011 c1 PrincessFuFU
I really like this idea, I've never seen any fic like it before! Know any other fics like this one?
I really like this idea, I've never seen any fic like it before! Know any other fics like this one?
6/13/2011 c1 
10Akua
This one shot gives a lot of room to continue, it really does. Like, how it all lead to this point, and what happens afterwards. I would like to know. It really has so much potential to being amazing.
As a oneshot, it's still amazing. Sasuke doesn't feel reformed so much as content. I can easily see him sliding in to a new life like this. He was destined to be a Police Man, wasn't he? If the Uchiha hadn't fallen in Konoha, he would have been one there, after all.
Naruto's character was well expressed over a few short words and Sasuke's memories. Naruto didn't have to be there to be a main character. That's just how he rolls.
This was an interesting one shot, and I really enjoyed it. Thanks for putting it up. :3
-Akua~
10AkuaThis one shot gives a lot of room to continue, it really does. Like, how it all lead to this point, and what happens afterwards. I would like to know. It really has so much potential to being amazing.
As a oneshot, it's still amazing. Sasuke doesn't feel reformed so much as content. I can easily see him sliding in to a new life like this. He was destined to be a Police Man, wasn't he? If the Uchiha hadn't fallen in Konoha, he would have been one there, after all.
Naruto's character was well expressed over a few short words and Sasuke's memories. Naruto didn't have to be there to be a main character. That's just how he rolls.
This was an interesting one shot, and I really enjoyed it. Thanks for putting it up. :3
-Akua~
5/21/2011 c1 1reader1writer1
Somehow I thought the wizards would be his past and Naruto would be the present. I had it all backward. well done
1reader1writer1Somehow I thought the wizards would be his past and Naruto would be the present. I had it all backward. well done
5/18/2011 c1 1XxLockexX
Please tell me you're righting more chapters? Please oh great one! If not, then at least say it's over so someone else can continue it! I want MORE!
1XxLockexXPlease tell me you're righting more chapters? Please oh great one! If not, then at least say it's over so someone else can continue it! I want MORE!
5/18/2011 c1 NoToLogins
Oh, wow! That is WONDERFUL! Like, wooow. Makes a mind to run away with ideas of "how that could have come to that" and "where is it going". Also writing style is very nice.
If you'll post next chapter I would like to read it very much.
Oh, wow! That is WONDERFUL! Like, wooow. Makes a mind to run away with ideas of "how that could have come to that" and "where is it going". Also writing style is very nice.
If you'll post next chapter I would like to read it very much.