for Castle Walls9/19/2011 c18 Vienna98
So sad! Can't wait for the Shelby/Rachel talk! Please update as soon as you can.
So sad! Can't wait for the Shelby/Rachel talk! Please update as soon as you can.
9/14/2011 c17 Guest
Please update soon
Please update soon
9/6/2011 c17 non grata
I like this story so far. And, admittedly, I didn't expect that I would get past the first chapter after I noticed that you're 15 in your profile. Age shouldn't matter, really, but unfortunately while good writing is rare in fanfiction, it's exceedingly rare with writers below 18 or so. This story is great (in a dark way), though - my life used to be a lot like Rachel's is in this story, so stuff like this is cathartic. Anyway, nicely written. Thanks for sharing.
I like this story so far. And, admittedly, I didn't expect that I would get past the first chapter after I noticed that you're 15 in your profile. Age shouldn't matter, really, but unfortunately while good writing is rare in fanfiction, it's exceedingly rare with writers below 18 or so. This story is great (in a dark way), though - my life used to be a lot like Rachel's is in this story, so stuff like this is cathartic. Anyway, nicely written. Thanks for sharing.
9/6/2011 c17 SuperGleek18
JUST FOUND THIS STORY TODAY. KINDA DEPRESSING, OK REALLY DEPRESSING, BUT VERY GOOD TOO. I FEEL SO BAD FOR RACHEL AND I DONT WANT HER LIVING WITH SHELBY EITHER. IM NOT SURE WHY. BUT WHATEVER RACHEL THINKS I JUST WANNA AGREE WITH HER. SHE'S MY FAVE CHARACTER AND I HATE HOW PEOPLE TREAT HER. UPDATE SOON :D
JUST FOUND THIS STORY TODAY. KINDA DEPRESSING, OK REALLY DEPRESSING, BUT VERY GOOD TOO. I FEEL SO BAD FOR RACHEL AND I DONT WANT HER LIVING WITH SHELBY EITHER. IM NOT SURE WHY. BUT WHATEVER RACHEL THINKS I JUST WANNA AGREE WITH HER. SHE'S MY FAVE CHARACTER AND I HATE HOW PEOPLE TREAT HER. UPDATE SOON :D
9/6/2011 c17 karissa
Great chapter, look forward to rachel comming home next chapter hopefully and seeing how she adjusts to living with shelby. Update soon
Great chapter, look forward to rachel comming home next chapter hopefully and seeing how she adjusts to living with shelby. Update soon
9/6/2011 c17 Ellen
Great chapter! Update sooner!
Great chapter! Update sooner!
9/6/2011 c17 Guest
Rachel's reaction to hearing where she would be staying was perfect! I really feel for her She's been through so much and I can understand why she wouldn't want to stay with Shelby after everything that's happened. IT's going to be a rocky road. Of course I'll stick with you I'm enjoying the journey
Rachel's reaction to hearing where she would be staying was perfect! I really feel for her She's been through so much and I can understand why she wouldn't want to stay with Shelby after everything that's happened. IT's going to be a rocky road. Of course I'll stick with you I'm enjoying the journey
9/6/2011 c17 
4ajunebuga
Poor rachel. Glad to see that she's starting to get some comfort from her friendship with Quinn
4ajunebugaPoor rachel. Glad to see that she's starting to get some comfort from her friendship with Quinn
8/28/2011 c16 Karissa
Good chapter look forward to Rachel being discharged and living with with Shelby update soon
Good chapter look forward to Rachel being discharged and living with with Shelby update soon