1/12 c1 Guest
Love this story!
My names holly too and i totally jumped when i saw your oc was called holly;) its the best name aye?!
Lovely writing anyway! Really enjoyable!
And yeah. Your oc has the best name of any girl in these kind of fics. Good choice ;)
hahahhaha keep it up!

6/16/2012 c6 Haeli Elizabeth
Ah that was a bit of a twist! This story is so good, I'm dying to know what's going to happen with Roger, Ralph, Holly, and Jack (well all of them actually)! I absolutely love Simon too, he's just too adorable and nice. Please update soon! Don't forget about this! It's too good to abandon :)

4/27/2012 c6 Sweetface
OMG PLZ WRITE MORE CHAPTERS AND UPDATE PLZ :):):)

4/25/2012 c6 Butterfly
Plz write more and update can't wait for new chapters and to see what happens next write more and update really good story.:)

4/23/2012 c6 Too lazy to sign in
So I absolutely love your story! Please update ASAP! And the same is with me, I also wasn't sure who I was rooting for in the beginning but now I'm rooting definitly for jack too for the same reason that Ralph may only be using holly since she reminds him of Maggie. But anyways, the story is great and please update(:

4/20/2012 c6 26Hammsters
Yay! You updated! Finally haha. This is still just as good as I remember it being too. Who's this Maggie person? Why she randomly hurting Ralphie's feelings with heroics? I'm not sure who I was rooting for before, but now I'm definitely rooting wholeheartedly for Jack! Cuz Ralph's probably just in love with the fact that she's like Maggie, not Holly herself, which isn't okay. Well, enough with my analysis, update soon!

2/11/2012 c5 Hey
Update please? Soon, love this LOTF fanfic.