for Wake IT up4/15/2012 c4 
14bubbajack
Ok this chap was good but seriously you have gotta proof read these things before you put them up here! This story is great but the numerous spelling errors make it almost painful to read.
14bubbajackOk this chap was good but seriously you have gotta proof read these things before you put them up here! This story is great but the numerous spelling errors make it almost painful to read.
4/15/2012 c3 bubbajack
Nice chap once again but once again you need to work on spelling. I have a feeling this isn't gonna end well for BB for some reason...Dunno why.
Nice chap once again but once again you need to work on spelling. I have a feeling this isn't gonna end well for BB for some reason...Dunno why.
4/15/2012 c2 bubbajack
You did a great job on this chap plotline wise the spelling could use some work though. Other than that nice job!
You did a great job on this chap plotline wise the spelling could use some work though. Other than that nice job!
4/15/2012 c1 bubbajack
Wow Warpwind I'm impressed! This is certainly a good start to a fic so keep it up ok?
Wow Warpwind I'm impressed! This is certainly a good start to a fic so keep it up ok?
9/16/2011 c5 Specterman626
you need a beta to clean up your grammer. Otherwise a great story, keepup the good work
you need a beta to clean up your grammer. Otherwise a great story, keepup the good work
8/7/2011 c2 Guest
dude i dont consider that a rape scene ive read some really f'd stuff on this site but seriosly work on your grammar
dude i dont consider that a rape scene ive read some really f'd stuff on this site but seriosly work on your grammar
6/21/2011 c2 Truefortune
nice story and i hate rape scenes with a goth chick in it,let alone Jinx,but still good story so update soon.
nice story and i hate rape scenes with a goth chick in it,let alone Jinx,but still good story so update soon.
6/17/2011 c2 10WilsonWisdom25
Okay...Is it me or is beast treating Jinx like how most animals would a sick or injured mate?...HELL YEAH! Beasty/Beast Boy and Jinx is awesome. CONTINUE!
10WilsonWisdom25Okay...Is it me or is beast treating Jinx like how most animals would a sick or injured mate?...HELL YEAH! Beasty/Beast Boy and Jinx is awesome. CONTINUE!
6/15/2011 c2 Random Reader
Well me personally I don't like rape period so I kinda smiled when The Beast killed the thugs and also I think you did the characters practicably perfect so this is turning out to be a good story.
Oh and THANK YOU FOR POSTING ANOTHER CHAPTER
Well me personally I don't like rape period so I kinda smiled when The Beast killed the thugs and also I think you did the characters practicably perfect so this is turning out to be a good story.
Oh and THANK YOU FOR POSTING ANOTHER CHAPTER
5/26/2011 c1 Random Reader
Please finish this story because I really like BB/Jinx stories but there aren't that many so again please continue to write because so far this is F***ing awesome
Please finish this story because I really like BB/Jinx stories but there aren't that many so again please continue to write because so far this is F***ing awesome