for No Giving Up3/25 c50 
7Mango Marbles
I wonder if it's bad I kind of hope that Light will crystallize completely. At least then she would at some point wake from the crystal and be free from it again.
A beautiful chapter full of thrills.
7Mango MarblesI wonder if it's bad I kind of hope that Light will crystallize completely. At least then she would at some point wake from the crystal and be free from it again.
A beautiful chapter full of thrills.
3/24 c50 3AeonLegacy
No! Lightning! Yuurei96, Lights not gonna die here, is she?! D: not like that, right!? Anyway I love your story, No giving up, it's really amazing by the way! Hope you can continue your stories!
3AeonLegacyNo! Lightning! Yuurei96, Lights not gonna die here, is she?! D: not like that, right!? Anyway I love your story, No giving up, it's really amazing by the way! Hope you can continue your stories!
3/24 c50 Raikik
Finally a new chapter! XD I was desesperate to see the next!
But man...that's worth the wait, even if I so want to tell you that I wanna see the next one now *-*
You can't help but make Lightning suffer XD! Evil! ...Me too, cause I love how you do that haha!
But what I appreciate the most is how Light (even badly wounded) can always stand up and fight her enemy. I can totally see her like that, real brave, a little crazy but a person that don't lost hope and know that she'll make it. She's just that perferct!
And finally Fang and Vanille arrive, yay! I love the moment that they say through the communicator that she can do it, that she was not alone and that they were on their way...so great. I love ya! *-*
Finally a new chapter! XD I was desesperate to see the next!
But man...that's worth the wait, even if I so want to tell you that I wanna see the next one now *-*
You can't help but make Lightning suffer XD! Evil! ...Me too, cause I love how you do that haha!
But what I appreciate the most is how Light (even badly wounded) can always stand up and fight her enemy. I can totally see her like that, real brave, a little crazy but a person that don't lost hope and know that she'll make it. She's just that perferct!
And finally Fang and Vanille arrive, yay! I love the moment that they say through the communicator that she can do it, that she was not alone and that they were on their way...so great. I love ya! *-*
3/23 c50 1Misomio
Thanks so much for the update It made my whole week (tells you a lot about how my week has been XD). Keep up the good work!
1MisomioThanks so much for the update It made my whole week (tells you a lot about how my week has been XD). Keep up the good work!
3/23 c50 Bad
Its been a long time I've been waiting forever for this story to update! Ideally miss you i really hope that u can update another one fast can't wait
Its been a long time I've been waiting forever for this story to update! Ideally miss you i really hope that u can update another one fast can't wait
3/23 c50 TooLazyToLogin
Hello! Thank you for finding the time to update through all your work A well-written long update too! :D
Hello! Thank you for finding the time to update through all your work A well-written long update too! :D
3/23 c50 2Joylinda
Noooooo lightning
Well that was a good chapter.
Stupid blood thirsty blade
Man I hope vanille nd the others ca n find away to save light
Update soon love ur story
2JoylindaNoooooo lightning
Well that was a good chapter.
Stupid blood thirsty blade
Man I hope vanille nd the others ca n find away to save light
Update soon love ur story
3/19 c49 Flynn
been awhile since the last update (
been awhile since the last update (
3/2 c49 lightning1997
Hi..! So what's up ? :)
Y'know.. actually, I've been so curious what will happen next.. I just want to ask, when are you gonna update ? Sorry for asking, it's not like I'm rude or what, I just want to say, if you're not too busy we really want to read what's next :3 It's been a month, and usually, you would at least update once a month..*_*
Oh yeah, I wanna ask you one more thing : How is your hand ? Is it healed ? :)
Hi..! So what's up ? :)
Y'know.. actually, I've been so curious what will happen next.. I just want to ask, when are you gonna update ? Sorry for asking, it's not like I'm rude or what, I just want to say, if you're not too busy we really want to read what's next :3 It's been a month, and usually, you would at least update once a month..*_*
Oh yeah, I wanna ask you one more thing : How is your hand ? Is it healed ? :)
3/1 c49 PrincyJessie
Hey hey ur back! I got a paragraph review yay! And I love love this chapter soo much keep making more I can't wait! This totally fill in my boring college hours!
Hey hey ur back! I got a paragraph review yay! And I love love this chapter soo much keep making more I can't wait! This totally fill in my boring college hours!
2/22 c49 votexLoc767
aahh.. Great Chapter.. Sorry for the late review. Been really busy as hell this past month.
Poor Lightning.. She is always the one that got hurt really badly :( I always think, what will happen if Serah is the one who got hurt really bad and nearly die LOL XD never mind.
BTW, the ending is really torturing me.. I'm dying to know what's next and what will happen to both sisters.. I'm waiting for the next one. Thank you so much for the chapter ! And stay awesome ! :)
aahh.. Great Chapter.. Sorry for the late review. Been really busy as hell this past month.
Poor Lightning.. She is always the one that got hurt really badly :( I always think, what will happen if Serah is the one who got hurt really bad and nearly die LOL XD never mind.
BTW, the ending is really torturing me.. I'm dying to know what's next and what will happen to both sisters.. I'm waiting for the next one. Thank you so much for the chapter ! And stay awesome ! :)