for Shadow of Your Heart11/16/2011 c1 
1Kuhlama
Jane murdered a man (that was not even RJ) and didn't give a damn ! It's always Lisbon that get's hurt! In the beginning of season 4 she looked so vulnerable and sad.
Sorry that's no proper story feedback, but it's what I think...
1KuhlamaJane murdered a man (that was not even RJ) and didn't give a damn ! It's always Lisbon that get's hurt! In the beginning of season 4 she looked so vulnerable and sad.
Sorry that's no proper story feedback, but it's what I think...
5/22/2011 c1 xxEMxx
I really really loved this! You caught the emotions so well. I think that they both were very in character and it was great! You should definatly continue this!
I really really loved this! You caught the emotions so well. I think that they both were very in character and it was great! You should definatly continue this!
5/21/2011 c1 AVG18
I think it was a very good attempt to start a follow-up of the season finale. Emotions will run deep from this moment on, and it gives a little bit of freedom to try and write about other aspects of these characters. I think you did good, especially with Lisbon, 'cause I have the feeling she'll feel responsible about this outcome somehow.
I think it was a very good attempt to start a follow-up of the season finale. Emotions will run deep from this moment on, and it gives a little bit of freedom to try and write about other aspects of these characters. I think you did good, especially with Lisbon, 'cause I have the feeling she'll feel responsible about this outcome somehow.
5/21/2011 c1 Anni
I'm happy you decided to write a Mentalist story. It is brilliant :) Just very very well done.
I'm happy you decided to write a Mentalist story. It is brilliant :) Just very very well done.
5/20/2011 c1 5justcrazy
REALLY like this, you've done a great job with their voices and I love how her reaction surprises him in more ways than one. Please keep going!
5justcrazyREALLY like this, you've done a great job with their voices and I love how her reaction surprises him in more ways than one. Please keep going!
5/20/2011 c1 justcrazy
REALLY like this, you've done a great job with their voices and I love how her reaction surprises him in more ways than one. Please keep going!
REALLY like this, you've done a great job with their voices and I love how her reaction surprises him in more ways than one. Please keep going!
5/20/2011 c1 Putu Mark
Please give me your version of season four and i think he should say it was in self defense cause he rj did have a gun and please pick up wherew they left off when jane was about to tell her he loved her.
Please give me your version of season four and i think he should say it was in self defense cause he rj did have a gun and please pick up wherew they left off when jane was about to tell her he loved her.
5/20/2011 c1 90oldmoviewatcher
I feel so, distraught? But, I don't think that word can even describe how your story made me feel. Your genre for the story was aptly put. Good job.
90oldmoviewatcherI feel so, distraught? But, I don't think that word can even describe how your story made me feel. Your genre for the story was aptly put. Good job.
5/20/2011 c1 4SpringBloom
I loved this, and I thought that you nailed the personalities of the characters. Great job! After watching the finale, I have to say that I have doubts that the man Jane killed really is Red John. Guess we'll just have to wait the ENTIRE summer to find out... *sigh* Can't wait for the next season!
XO - Spring
4SpringBloomI loved this, and I thought that you nailed the personalities of the characters. Great job! After watching the finale, I have to say that I have doubts that the man Jane killed really is Red John. Guess we'll just have to wait the ENTIRE summer to find out... *sigh* Can't wait for the next season!
XO - Spring