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9Silvermoonlight GJ
I'm glad that Joey was able to be honest with Charlie and that they got some off the hurt out of the way in a big way. There is no denying that they love each other still but they both needed to get past the pain. They have both suffered and both taken hard hits I just hope that from here on in, that they can both heal fully.
9Silvermoonlight GJI'm glad that Joey was able to be honest with Charlie and that they got some off the hurt out of the way in a big way. There is no denying that they love each other still but they both needed to get past the pain. They have both suffered and both taken hard hits I just hope that from here on in, that they can both heal fully.
4/30 c49 Silvermoonlight GJ
Joey dreams are very intersting in that she feels trapped, I think it shows her inward increcutes which she won't let the rest of the world know. I feel bad for her as they are horrific dreams almost like night terrors, but they are understanable after everything she has been through, the more she can heal the better. That bit where she sung to storm at the end was very moving.
Joey dreams are very intersting in that she feels trapped, I think it shows her inward increcutes which she won't let the rest of the world know. I feel bad for her as they are horrific dreams almost like night terrors, but they are understanable after everything she has been through, the more she can heal the better. That bit where she sung to storm at the end was very moving.
4/30 c48 Silvermoonlight GJ
I think Geoff is going to be in for a hell of surprise when he finds out about Ruby and her new lover, I think it will be fun to see his jaw hit the floor. I can now see a connecting developing between Charlie, Storm and Joey. This is a difficult topic and I think your writing it really well :)
I think Geoff is going to be in for a hell of surprise when he finds out about Ruby and her new lover, I think it will be fun to see his jaw hit the floor. I can now see a connecting developing between Charlie, Storm and Joey. This is a difficult topic and I think your writing it really well :)
4/30 c47 Silvermoonlight GJ
It’s nice to see Ruby sharing some passion with Nicole more because I think she needs that in her life right now. I felt sorry for Charlie though covered in fish chum, I've never smelt that stuff but I have heard its enough to make you want to throw up, so it must be horrible to be covered in it.
It’s nice to see Ruby sharing some passion with Nicole more because I think she needs that in her life right now. I felt sorry for Charlie though covered in fish chum, I've never smelt that stuff but I have heard its enough to make you want to throw up, so it must be horrible to be covered in it.
4/26 c103 6xtr75
There certainly doesn't seem to be any hint of boundaries between any of them - anything goes, especially with what they say to each other.
Hope it's the start of Miles being back on track
6xtr75There certainly doesn't seem to be any hint of boundaries between any of them - anything goes, especially with what they say to each other.
Hope it's the start of Miles being back on track
4/24 c46 9Silvermoonlight GJ
I sometimes wish that Veronika would say things better because sometimes she comes across as blunt and unfeeling even if she is in part right about issues. Drugs sounds really bad I don't like idea of anyone doing that I mean itwill be bad for everyone around them.
9Silvermoonlight GJI sometimes wish that Veronika would say things better because sometimes she comes across as blunt and unfeeling even if she is in part right about issues. Drugs sounds really bad I don't like idea of anyone doing that I mean itwill be bad for everyone around them.
4/3 c102 5Michelle1017
Awwwww poor Miles, I hope he gets somewhere with Storm. Loved how Joey and Aden looked out for him.
Lol Joey are Charlie are still mad for one another all the time then, it's good.
I'm glad Ruby and Nicole made up, I really do like them together in this :-)
Looking forward to more :-)
5Michelle1017Awwwww poor Miles, I hope he gets somewhere with Storm. Loved how Joey and Aden looked out for him.
Lol Joey are Charlie are still mad for one another all the time then, it's good.
I'm glad Ruby and Nicole made up, I really do like them together in this :-)
Looking forward to more :-)
4/3 c102 1SkyeMary21
Another great Chapter, absolutely love this story (STILL) Loved the stuff between Nicole and Ruby I'm happy they sorted things out :-D . Also loved the conversation/relationship between Joey and Ruby it's good that they have a great connection
1SkyeMary21Another great Chapter, absolutely love this story (STILL) Loved the stuff between Nicole and Ruby I'm happy they sorted things out :-D . Also loved the conversation/relationship between Joey and Ruby it's good that they have a great connection
4/2 c102 6xtr75
And the puppy would drool all over her slippers and leave nice little surprises to be found by the unsuspecting bare foot. Hope Miles gets better soon. Feel kind of sorry for Xavier because of what his brother has done.
6xtr75And the puppy would drool all over her slippers and leave nice little surprises to be found by the unsuspecting bare foot. Hope Miles gets better soon. Feel kind of sorry for Xavier because of what his brother has done.
3/13 c97 Guest
You basically make out that Charlie and Joey and Jade and Storm are all in love with each other and want to fuck each other all the time- You are actually taking away the Charlie and Joey love - If Joey loved Charlie she wouldn't be wanting to fuck the other two all the time - Basically you want them to all move in together and fuck each other - It's disgusting - Writing about orgies and threesomes taking the LOVE away from a great couple like Charlie and Joey - It's sick and you are ruining them God only know's why - When you are in love you DO NOT WANT to share you body with another and your partner does not want to see you getting eaten out by your ex - What the hell is wrong with you
You basically make out that Charlie and Joey and Jade and Storm are all in love with each other and want to fuck each other all the time- You are actually taking away the Charlie and Joey love - If Joey loved Charlie she wouldn't be wanting to fuck the other two all the time - Basically you want them to all move in together and fuck each other - It's disgusting - Writing about orgies and threesomes taking the LOVE away from a great couple like Charlie and Joey - It's sick and you are ruining them God only know's why - When you are in love you DO NOT WANT to share you body with another and your partner does not want to see you getting eaten out by your ex - What the hell is wrong with you
3/10 c101 5Michelle1017
I have just caught up on this :-) loving it as usual.
Charlie certainly has a lot going on at work and she has some good ways of calming Joey down lol. Can completely understand why Joey wants to hurt Angelo, it's a shame Charlie won't let her lol (I think you are aware of my feelings towards Angelo)
Looking forward to more :-)
5Michelle1017I have just caught up on this :-) loving it as usual.
Charlie certainly has a lot going on at work and she has some good ways of calming Joey down lol. Can completely understand why Joey wants to hurt Angelo, it's a shame Charlie won't let her lol (I think you are aware of my feelings towards Angelo)
Looking forward to more :-)
3/9 c101 6xtr75
Joey now has a sure fire way to get rid of Aden whenever she needs to.
I like how Charlie and Joey have doppelgangers; they should stick around and have some confusing fun
6xtr75Joey now has a sure fire way to get rid of Aden whenever she needs to.
I like how Charlie and Joey have doppelgangers; they should stick around and have some confusing fun
2/15 c100 xtr75
Poor Charlie for copping what should have been a slap to Angelo's face.
If Charlie rubs her lioness the right way, it could be enjoyable for the both of them.
Wish Angelo would just leave; he still continues to cause trouble for others
Poor Charlie for copping what should have been a slap to Angelo's face.
If Charlie rubs her lioness the right way, it could be enjoyable for the both of them.
Wish Angelo would just leave; he still continues to cause trouble for others