for Perfection6/29/2011 c1 
5PerditaX
I really liked this one. I can't remember reading a fic where someone cared about what Miya felt, and though it is short, it gives deep insight into her character. It must be truly devastating to compete with someone who just seems to be superhuman in each and every way, who is perfect like you will never be. And so it is almost natural that Miya did what she did, because it seems like the only way to get closer to Tomoe. In that way the two are very similar - they do whatever it takes to get closer to the object of their affection/obession.
And yay for the omake \o/ Although judging by the size of their foreheads alone, Miya would be the Brain XD
5PerditaXI really liked this one. I can't remember reading a fic where someone cared about what Miya felt, and though it is short, it gives deep insight into her character. It must be truly devastating to compete with someone who just seems to be superhuman in each and every way, who is perfect like you will never be. And so it is almost natural that Miya did what she did, because it seems like the only way to get closer to Tomoe. In that way the two are very similar - they do whatever it takes to get closer to the object of their affection/obession.
And yay for the omake \o/ Although judging by the size of their foreheads alone, Miya would be the Brain XD
5/28/2011 c1 14Ookami Z
Awww poor Miya! I toally agree though, Miya does not get enough credit! I hope you do write a Tomoe/Miya story :)
14Ookami ZAwww poor Miya! I toally agree though, Miya does not get enough credit! I hope you do write a Tomoe/Miya story :)
5/24/2011 c1 59Yuri-hime
Never seen anyone take on Miya's character before. I liked =3
It's a sad look at one-sided affection/love that seems to happen quite a bit in this series XD
Nicely written~ =3
59Yuri-himeNever seen anyone take on Miya's character before. I liked =3
It's a sad look at one-sided affection/love that seems to happen quite a bit in this series XD
Nicely written~ =3
5/24/2011 c1 9Icemera
I'd never read anything with this pairing before, and I find this small fic awesome, Demon :) It's the tiny, little thoughts here and there running around that made me smile at Miya's crush XD The narrative is concise and her thought feels real. I like this one a lot. Keep up the great work!
Also, yes, I don't think you have to italicize the last line. It stood out perfectly fine :) Oh, yeah, the omake was short and funny XD *thumbs up*
9IcemeraI'd never read anything with this pairing before, and I find this small fic awesome, Demon :) It's the tiny, little thoughts here and there running around that made me smile at Miya's crush XD The narrative is concise and her thought feels real. I like this one a lot. Keep up the great work!
Also, yes, I don't think you have to italicize the last line. It stood out perfectly fine :) Oh, yeah, the omake was short and funny XD *thumbs up*
5/24/2011 c1 14MadHattess
Humanity and sociopaths...
Anyway, it's a well written drabble, Demon. There's a good 'running thought process' feel to it which is always humanizing (zing!) especially when you haven't taken the easy way of first person.
BTW, the fact that Otome's version of Shizuru flirts with young girls does kind of creep me out...
14MadHattessHumanity and sociopaths...
Anyway, it's a well written drabble, Demon. There's a good 'running thought process' feel to it which is always humanizing (zing!) especially when you haven't taken the easy way of first person.
BTW, the fact that Otome's version of Shizuru flirts with young girls does kind of creep me out...
5/23/2011 c1 10RevalisPyross
I like. 83
Lol, really, the spin you've put on the Miya/Tomoe dynamic is excellent and it gives a better reason for Miya to do what Tomoe says rather than simply being scared, even if it does mean Miya's a bit masochistic. I particularly liked this line "She would do anything to get noticed…" and it really made me pity Miya. I don't think the italics at the end were particularly needed as the statement felt strong enough on it's own to me, but I get why. =3
And the omake was lol~
10RevalisPyrossI like. 83
Lol, really, the spin you've put on the Miya/Tomoe dynamic is excellent and it gives a better reason for Miya to do what Tomoe says rather than simply being scared, even if it does mean Miya's a bit masochistic. I particularly liked this line "She would do anything to get noticed…" and it really made me pity Miya. I don't think the italics at the end were particularly needed as the statement felt strong enough on it's own to me, but I get why. =3
And the omake was lol~