for Fatal Fury 4: Legend of the Shicon1/20/2012 c4 CelticWitch18
oh god this is good , i like the way blend all the fighting animes together not alot of the stories i`ve do that right . but you r doing a great job so far an i kinda agree ya need to use spell check sometimes not to be mean or anything i use it myself when i need too.
oh god this is good , i like the way blend all the fighting animes together not alot of the stories i`ve do that right . but you r doing a great job so far an i kinda agree ya need to use spell check sometimes not to be mean or anything i use it myself when i need too.
7/23/2011 c4 KamehameGadoken
This a pretty good story. Having Fatal Fury and Inuyasha crossover is a very cool and unique idea. One complaint: spelling errors. You need to check your work before you post it up. On the positive side, I like the Fatal Fury movie references. Not many people I know even heard or even knew about the movies.
This a pretty good story. Having Fatal Fury and Inuyasha crossover is a very cool and unique idea. One complaint: spelling errors. You need to check your work before you post it up. On the positive side, I like the Fatal Fury movie references. Not many people I know even heard or even knew about the movies.
6/13/2011 c4 
7Sweet Lil Hellcat
Again, very good, but you may want a beta. There aren't many grammar issues, but there are still things like putting "mako" instead of "Miko". Mako can be a person's name, or the name of an animal, as in a Mako Shark. A Miko is what you'd refer to as a "Shrine maiden", "shaman woman", or priestess. Again, you're doing pretty good, and it's an interesting story, and not something I've really seen.
7Sweet Lil HellcatAgain, very good, but you may want a beta. There aren't many grammar issues, but there are still things like putting "mako" instead of "Miko". Mako can be a person's name, or the name of an animal, as in a Mako Shark. A Miko is what you'd refer to as a "Shrine maiden", "shaman woman", or priestess. Again, you're doing pretty good, and it's an interesting story, and not something I've really seen.
6/12/2011 c4 Rhianna224
Awesome story its nice to fund a crossover that hasn't been done before or alot of
Awesome story its nice to fund a crossover that hasn't been done before or alot of
6/5/2011 c1 Sweet Lil Hellcat
It's very interesting. There are some spelling errors with some names, like Sango, and Koga. Also, I think you mean "Miko" instead of "Mako". None the less it's pretty good.
It's very interesting. There are some spelling errors with some names, like Sango, and Koga. Also, I think you mean "Miko" instead of "Mako". None the less it's pretty good.