for Sick Day12/17/2012 c1 
6ZenyZootSuit
LOLING at the last sentence! What does she mean by that exactly? Thor or actually the maid (I'm thinking Thor)? Nice job!
6ZenyZootSuitLOLING at the last sentence! What does she mean by that exactly? Thor or actually the maid (I'm thinking Thor)? Nice job!
8/9/2012 c1 14mrmistoffelees
Nice one. Continue this one, just because. It's so cute. While I reading this-and I rarely do this with fanfiction-I was picturing it manga-style. If I could draw, I'd draw it out for you.
14mrmistoffeleesNice one. Continue this one, just because. It's so cute. While I reading this-and I rarely do this with fanfiction-I was picturing it manga-style. If I could draw, I'd draw it out for you.
6/26/2012 c1 6Oomara13
"You aren't going to die, are you? Oh no, please don't die on me little brother! Hey, if you die, can I have your slingshot and your bedroom?"
SO CUTE! i love it! keep going!
6Oomara13"You aren't going to die, are you? Oh no, please don't die on me little brother! Hey, if you die, can I have your slingshot and your bedroom?"
SO CUTE! i love it! keep going!
6/19/2012 c1 48Hellsleprechaun
Aww, this was so cute. I loved hyperactive Thor and exasperated Loki. It was sweet that Thor decided to stay with Loki and keep him company. It was nice, but quite sad, when Frigga found them and decided not to shout at them because she knew what would happen to them in the future.
48HellsleprechaunAww, this was so cute. I loved hyperactive Thor and exasperated Loki. It was sweet that Thor decided to stay with Loki and keep him company. It was nice, but quite sad, when Frigga found them and decided not to shout at them because she knew what would happen to them in the future.
3/23/2012 c1 9The M.H.T.of R
"The stronger, older brother was very strong and Loki was no match." That sentence was quite redundant. It helps if you read your stuff outloud before you post it. The rest was good though! :)
-Tsarina-
9The M.H.T.of R"The stronger, older brother was very strong and Loki was no match." That sentence was quite redundant. It helps if you read your stuff outloud before you post it. The rest was good though! :)
-Tsarina-
11/29/2011 c1 22The Phantom Dragon
*sniffles and tacklehuggs Loki* sooooooooooooooo cuuuuuute, why did u have to go darkside
22The Phantom Dragon*sniffles and tacklehuggs Loki* sooooooooooooooo cuuuuuute, why did u have to go darkside
9/14/2011 c1 Oya
Great fic
God bless u
Great fic
God bless u
7/14/2011 c1 4shimmerdragoness
That was incredibly adorable! I love how exuberant young Thor is. I can definitely picture him being like that as a boy. I also love the brotherly fluff aspect. I'm a sucker for stuff like that. Ha.
4shimmerdragonessThat was incredibly adorable! I love how exuberant young Thor is. I can definitely picture him being like that as a boy. I also love the brotherly fluff aspect. I'm a sucker for stuff like that. Ha.
7/13/2011 c1 17Enheduanna of Ur
Really cute! I love little kid versions of characters. And this was short, sweet, and to the point. Good work!
17Enheduanna of UrReally cute! I love little kid versions of characters. And this was short, sweet, and to the point. Good work!
5/27/2011 c1 106Kaline Bogard
Are not you going to die, are you? Oh no, please do not die on me little brother! Hey, if you die, Can I have your slingshot and your bedroom? "
Own
That was totally cute. And very, very funny!
I love this story!
I ate like a little chocolate!
I want to write more!
106Kaline BogardAre not you going to die, are you? Oh no, please do not die on me little brother! Hey, if you die, Can I have your slingshot and your bedroom? "
Own
That was totally cute. And very, very funny!
I love this story!
I ate like a little chocolate!
I want to write more!