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39Nibiru-Mul
Interesting story. I was going to add this to my favorites!
I actually thought when reading the title that this was going to be another "Feanor and Evil!Indis" story, but I was pleasantly surprised. Alquasar could learn a lesson on being a stepmother from Indis. (Well, I know Feanor hates her, but at least Indis tries to be nice.)
39Nibiru-MulInteresting story. I was going to add this to my favorites!
I actually thought when reading the title that this was going to be another "Feanor and Evil!Indis" story, but I was pleasantly surprised. Alquasar could learn a lesson on being a stepmother from Indis. (Well, I know Feanor hates her, but at least Indis tries to be nice.)
8/10/2012 c18 5Seryan Parks
Fine, you bullied me into leaving a review xD
I like how the story is progressing, and I especially liked the library scene a few chapters back. I do wish there was a bit more of Maitmo, but this is a Makalaure-centric fic after all. Overall I like it very much, and now I will wrap up this review because I want to get to the other chapters.
5Seryan ParksFine, you bullied me into leaving a review xD
I like how the story is progressing, and I especially liked the library scene a few chapters back. I do wish there was a bit more of Maitmo, but this is a Makalaure-centric fic after all. Overall I like it very much, and now I will wrap up this review because I want to get to the other chapters.
6/19/2012 c37 Rehtaeh
This is the fist reveiw I have ever written.
I am writing to tell you
WRITE MORE! DO NOT LEAVE US IN SUSPENSE!
This is the fist reveiw I have ever written.
I am writing to tell you
WRITE MORE! DO NOT LEAVE US IN SUSPENSE!
4/24/2012 c37 A-Nony-Mouse
Oh wow. This is very, very good. To good, in fact, to have been ignored and abused for about two months (sorry if you have in fact not been ignoring and abusing it, i'm just feeling overdramatic). I love that while you can see it is based upon Cinderella, it has so many twists and turns that (a Twisted Version of Cinderella anyone?) the original Cinderella plot is almost buried beneath other, funnier, more original and definetly better plot devices. Anyway this was supposed to be a praise review but it seems like i'm berating you instead so i'll just stop. Great story, Please update. Thankyou. :D
Oh wow. This is very, very good. To good, in fact, to have been ignored and abused for about two months (sorry if you have in fact not been ignoring and abusing it, i'm just feeling overdramatic). I love that while you can see it is based upon Cinderella, it has so many twists and turns that (a Twisted Version of Cinderella anyone?) the original Cinderella plot is almost buried beneath other, funnier, more original and definetly better plot devices. Anyway this was supposed to be a praise review but it seems like i'm berating you instead so i'll just stop. Great story, Please update. Thankyou. :D
1/21/2012 c37 27CrackinAndProudOfIt
Oh, you gave them SO much substance! That was fantastic! It just keeps getting more and more intense, and I absolutely cannot wait for the wedding; you're building up to it so amazingly! I also loved the description of Fëanáro and Silmalir's eyes; that was really powerful.
-Crackers
27CrackinAndProudOfItOh, you gave them SO much substance! That was fantastic! It just keeps getting more and more intense, and I absolutely cannot wait for the wedding; you're building up to it so amazingly! I also loved the description of Fëanáro and Silmalir's eyes; that was really powerful.
-Crackers
1/20/2012 c37 1Ferdinand Sutcliff
Thankyou for updating. :) So glad you did! This has to be my favourite story of all time. :)
The story is getting so complicated, poor Silmalir.
1Ferdinand SutcliffThankyou for updating. :) So glad you did! This has to be my favourite story of all time. :)
The story is getting so complicated, poor Silmalir.
1/13/2012 c36 Ferdinand Sutcliff
Pleasepleasepleaseplease update soon.
You haven't updated for nearly two months, I'm going through withdrawals. :S
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Pleasepleasepleaseplease update soon.
You haven't updated for nearly two months, I'm going through withdrawals. :S
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11/24/2011 c36 Anamia 1
Oh Sil...She is like a magnet for trouble. Still, wouldn't it add even MORE spice to everything if Indis of all people takes to like her and takes her under her personal protection. Considering her relationship with Feanor and everything that goes with it. God, I'm a scheme master!
Oh Sil...She is like a magnet for trouble. Still, wouldn't it add even MORE spice to everything if Indis of all people takes to like her and takes her under her personal protection. Considering her relationship with Feanor and everything that goes with it. God, I'm a scheme master!
11/21/2011 c36 27CrackinAndProudOfIt
Poor Silmalir...at last turning to the bottle, after all she's been through! ;) Hopefully she won't be hung over at the wedding, though I could see how she might just want to stay in bed! Update soon! :D
-Crackers
PS: I'm relieved to know you've never been intoxicated! ;)
27CrackinAndProudOfItPoor Silmalir...at last turning to the bottle, after all she's been through! ;) Hopefully she won't be hung over at the wedding, though I could see how she might just want to stay in bed! Update soon! :D
-Crackers
PS: I'm relieved to know you've never been intoxicated! ;)
11/20/2011 c36 TeddyFerdinand
Oh poor Silmalir, you need to give her a break :P
I wonder what Queen Indis thinks about this.. O.O
And update soon!
your updates are the highlight of my week! :)
Oh poor Silmalir, you need to give her a break :P
I wonder what Queen Indis thinks about this.. O.O
And update soon!
your updates are the highlight of my week! :)
11/6/2011 c35 CrackinAndProudOfIt
Oh, it's getting so intense! I can't wait to see what happens at the wedding! I love the motif of the mirror that you've introduced: It's really neat to contemplate the characters' views of themselves and their experiences with their own reflecitions. That's some seriously deep stuff! You HAVE to update soon! :)
-Crackers
Oh, it's getting so intense! I can't wait to see what happens at the wedding! I love the motif of the mirror that you've introduced: It's really neat to contemplate the characters' views of themselves and their experiences with their own reflecitions. That's some seriously deep stuff! You HAVE to update soon! :)
-Crackers
10/31/2011 c34 8Mighty Queen of Drama
This is wonderful - Silmalir standing up for the elflings. I hope she and Makalaure get their happy ending (I am a sucker for those ; ))
8Mighty Queen of DramaThis is wonderful - Silmalir standing up for the elflings. I hope she and Makalaure get their happy ending (I am a sucker for those ; ))