for A Dirty Secret4/29 c24 Jodie
Great story, I loved it all and have you done another story that will follow this
Ps fantastic story
Great story, I loved it all and have you done another story that will follow this
Ps fantastic story
4/22 c18 
15Anakinskywalkergo
This is really good. No, I don't think Padme's over.
The only thing that sort of bugs me is how tense Anakin is with Obi-Wan, but that's just because I'm a huge fan of their brother relationship. Besides that, great job! I'm really enjoying this...
15AnakinskywalkergoThis is really good. No, I don't think Padme's over.
The only thing that sort of bugs me is how tense Anakin is with Obi-Wan, but that's just because I'm a huge fan of their brother relationship. Besides that, great job! I'm really enjoying this...
4/22 c13 Anakinskywalkergo
Wow...Bane...oh wow...this is a really good story, I think you did good with Bane ;)
Wow...Bane...oh wow...this is a really good story, I think you did good with Bane ;)
3/10 c1 StarsOfTheNorth
I personally liked this story. You really took your liberties as a writer to explore the subject as for what it could be, which is what we do! The entire time I was reading this I kept thinking this is a great "what if "this is how these people were... Yes, the characters were almost completely opposite from how George Lucas created them. However you kept their personalities the same throughout the story so it worked well. This is a FanFiction, so it is meant to be changed however the fan would please it. I think you handled this extraordinarily well and I look forward to a sequel. Keep writing and know people will get angry or upset sometimes because the characters are not how they imagined them, but that's okay, because that's not necessarily the purpose of FanFiction.
I personally liked this story. You really took your liberties as a writer to explore the subject as for what it could be, which is what we do! The entire time I was reading this I kept thinking this is a great "what if "this is how these people were... Yes, the characters were almost completely opposite from how George Lucas created them. However you kept their personalities the same throughout the story so it worked well. This is a FanFiction, so it is meant to be changed however the fan would please it. I think you handled this extraordinarily well and I look forward to a sequel. Keep writing and know people will get angry or upset sometimes because the characters are not how they imagined them, but that's okay, because that's not necessarily the purpose of FanFiction.
2/6 c24 HaloFan200
I agree with Hedgehog. Please make some kind Of sequel.
I agree with Hedgehog. Please make some kind Of sequel.
2/1 c24 HaloFan200
This is more of a message to the Flame than a review. But great work. Can't wait for the sequal! Now onto the message. Dear Flame: exhibit A, why are you reading it if you don't like it? No one is forcing you to read it. Exhibit B: This is fanFICTION. People can do what they want with their stories. Who the f'ck do you think you are?! You tell people that you don't care about their feelings and that they can't hurt yours. You think so highly of yourself that it makes me wanna puke. Now exhibit c: you are a bully and a fool who thinks he can do what he wants and everyone else is a peasant. Stop b'tching about stories that you don't like. Everyone we have to stand up to people like this! Only together can we stop cyber bullying! The rebellion can only succeed if we unite! Alone, we are weak! Together we are strong! Unite and join the Resistance! And to the author: keep on writing and don't let anything slow you down! The sky is the limit!
Courtasy of... HaloFan200!
This is more of a message to the Flame than a review. But great work. Can't wait for the sequal! Now onto the message. Dear Flame: exhibit A, why are you reading it if you don't like it? No one is forcing you to read it. Exhibit B: This is fanFICTION. People can do what they want with their stories. Who the f'ck do you think you are?! You tell people that you don't care about their feelings and that they can't hurt yours. You think so highly of yourself that it makes me wanna puke. Now exhibit c: you are a bully and a fool who thinks he can do what he wants and everyone else is a peasant. Stop b'tching about stories that you don't like. Everyone we have to stand up to people like this! Only together can we stop cyber bullying! The rebellion can only succeed if we unite! Alone, we are weak! Together we are strong! Unite and join the Resistance! And to the author: keep on writing and don't let anything slow you down! The sky is the limit!
Courtasy of... HaloFan200!
1/16 c23 4Green Verde
Really enjoyable story, different from what many other authors would come up with. I do like many things about this story. Bane/Ahsoka wouldn't be a pairing I would think of ever, but it has it's moments. Some of the other reviewers have fair points about writing style and grammar. Still, the whole story is interesting. Nice to see an evil psychotic Padme for once.
4Green VerdeReally enjoyable story, different from what many other authors would come up with. I do like many things about this story. Bane/Ahsoka wouldn't be a pairing I would think of ever, but it has it's moments. Some of the other reviewers have fair points about writing style and grammar. Still, the whole story is interesting. Nice to see an evil psychotic Padme for once.
12/31/2012 c14 Bane
Love how you made bane sensetive and loving :D good job keep making the bad people good and maybe the good people bad like i would love to see a bad kenobi or yoda as a bad boy :)
Love how you made bane sensetive and loving :D good job keep making the bad people good and maybe the good people bad like i would love to see a bad kenobi or yoda as a bad boy :)
12/27/2012 c23 guest
cool it was very good ... any one know if he has the next one written yet if so what is it called
cool it was very good ... any one know if he has the next one written yet if so what is it called
12/25/2012 c24 Guest
Hey nice hob! Really liked it a lot just worried about the whole making love thing but nice story
Hey nice hob! Really liked it a lot just worried about the whole making love thing but nice story
11/3/2012 c20 conor
i hope that bully goes to f***ing hell that mother f***ing bitch that ass hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhooooooooooooo oollllllllllllllllllllllllll lleeeeeeeeeeeeeee! he's a prick ,bitch,d**k,ass,gayass,pervert and sexuale predator i hope he dies and goes to hell.
i hope that bully goes to f***ing hell that mother f***ing bitch that ass hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhooooooooooooo oollllllllllllllllllllllllll lleeeeeeeeeeeeeee! he's a prick ,bitch,d**k,ass,gayass,pervert and sexuale predator i hope he dies and goes to hell.