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11/13/2012 c7 2Tearful Reunion
I love this story!
10/11/2012 c7 Interested
Interesting take on the HP/GW crossover.
Final Nargle Invoker Luna is awesome.
But I'm kind of hoping that Harry's magic rubberbands itself back into him.
Dudley isn't meant for magic.
10/10/2012 c1 on the an
Hmmm... I suspected as much.
Just a few awkward phrases.
9/15/2012 c7 mabidiso
Oh, my. Just...wow. You sure know how to pack a whollop. Your Heero is everything I could have ever dreamed or wished for. His POV, his voice, his gestures and expressions, the way he moves, the way others perceive him, just everything is utterly perfect. I couldn't love the scene of Heero and Harry first meeting anymore than I do. Loved every bit of it. The details make it so incredible, like Heero's fleeting feeling of losing something when he killed those guards, like Harry noting the changing sounds and light as night fell, like all the colors, scents, sounds, and encounters with quirky people. LOVED Heero's encounter with the party girl, and then later Dorothy's attempt at distraction or whatever that was. Dorothy's comment to Harry, the softening of her eyes and Dudley's murmer of harems was spectacular. This is a truly magical chapter. Really, really like the different feelings and sensations Harry and Dudley have about magic. So, if Dudley really doesn't like having magic, can Harry take back his sharing, or is it a done deal and Harry will have to help Dudley acclimate? And for heaven's sake! If Heero doesn't believe in magic after witnessing a person appear out of thin air before his own eyes, and then being teleported himself to another location...sheesh. Can't WAIT to see what Harry's going to do to prove magic to Heero. Harry and Heero make a fun team. Thank you soooooo much for this new chapter.
9/2/2012 c7 7Cristalake
LOL! I never realised it befor ebut Fremch endearments really are weird! Mon choux, ma puce, mon poussin, petite crotte. HA! Translated, these really are midly offensive! ;p
9/2/2012 c7 15Annoying Little Twit
Getting Heero to believe in magic... Good luck *snort* :)

ALT
9/1/2012 c7 6killing u with umbrellas
Loved it. And Dorothy is crazy awesome :D
9/1/2012 c7 Guest
Every time Harry says or thinks 'Mum Petunia' I just wanna punch him in the guts so hard. :D He just *sounds* like he's saying 'Mummy' in a baby voice, I don't know why.
9/1/2012 c7 1TrenchcoatMan
OMG... The Heero Dorothy Kiss was magnificent.

Poor poor Heero, I get the feeling this trip will be good for him. Any Chance we'll be seeing more, or possibly all of the Gboys in this setting... Relena could really only make things better. After the kiss, I think Relena, Dorothy and Duo all in one room might be too much for the Soldier

-TCM
9/1/2012 c7 10Mystic 777
Ooh, I like the additions at the end. My sister is a nurse and she's told me all sorts of stories about doctors and their egos, I imagine a personal doctor for a rich woman could be even worse. Thanks for the update, I'll be quite interested to see Heero's thoughts on the apparation once he gets out of fight-or-flight mode (snicker)
9/1/2012 c7 DarkRavie
Another very good chapter. I can't wait to read what happens next in your fic.
9/1/2012 c7 2Marikalay
Well worth the wait.
5/3/2012 c6 Marikalay
I've enjoyed this story so far and I'm looking forward to your next update.
4/10/2012 c6 15Annoying Little Twit
I can tell you like writing totally oblivious people, lol! Loved this chapter, even though for /some/ odd reason all my favourite stories seemed to have vanished from my story alert... x_X

ALT
4/9/2012 c6 10Mystic 777
I can see you're setting up for some interesting action. ^_^ I wonder how Harry is going to deal with both Heero and saving Dudley. Will this weird magic sharing thing affect his ability to apparate? Splinching would *not* be a good idea... (shudder)
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