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1Carmyn
wow, unexpected and nice :) too bad it's not longer... but then again it's just the right measure of words and all...
1Carmynwow, unexpected and nice :) too bad it's not longer... but then again it's just the right measure of words and all...
9/26/2012 c1 FallenLily
I really liked this. Short, sweet, simple to the point, but still emotional and moving, and I liked how Kushina and Minato were still mostly in character all things considering. Nice job )
I really liked this. Short, sweet, simple to the point, but still emotional and moving, and I liked how Kushina and Minato were still mostly in character all things considering. Nice job )
9/14/2012 c1 13Coffee Detective
I've found it! Finally! Eureka! It took me some time to find this story, since I read a long time ago and didn't have an account yet. I loved every bit of this story; so pieced well. I'd ask for sequel, but I know it's a one shot.
13Coffee DetectiveI've found it! Finally! Eureka! It took me some time to find this story, since I read a long time ago and didn't have an account yet. I loved every bit of this story; so pieced well. I'd ask for sequel, but I know it's a one shot.
3/2/2012 c1 L. D. Nicolescu
Wow. That was amazing. Really. Loved it.
Have you ever thought into converting this in a multi-chapter story? Or at least making a sequel? You know one where Minato and Kushina meet again, some time later after this one night. It would interesting to know how they would act around each other.
Wow. That was amazing. Really. Loved it.
Have you ever thought into converting this in a multi-chapter story? Or at least making a sequel? You know one where Minato and Kushina meet again, some time later after this one night. It would interesting to know how they would act around each other.
2/15/2012 c1 rah
please continue
please continue
1/27/2012 c1 8Ruka-x3
Oooh. I really liked this! I've never read anything like this before, I thought it was very original. Good job :)
8Ruka-x3Oooh. I really liked this! I've never read anything like this before, I thought it was very original. Good job :)
8/25/2011 c1 skatingandcruzing
WOW. I think I've read this at least three times already.
Please keep it up.
And even though you probably wanted to keep this as a oneshot, it feels like it could turn into a really good mulit chapter fic.
Good Work!
WOW. I think I've read this at least three times already.
Please keep it up.
And even though you probably wanted to keep this as a oneshot, it feels like it could turn into a really good mulit chapter fic.
Good Work!
7/17/2011 c1 4AaleXxXandrA
That was...interesting, for a lack of better word. Really, it was new, different, sexy. I loved it. You have a natural talent on making the reader picture the whole scene without trying too hard. Too bad it's a one-shot, the plot gives more to just a one story chapter.
4AaleXxXandrAThat was...interesting, for a lack of better word. Really, it was new, different, sexy. I loved it. You have a natural talent on making the reader picture the whole scene without trying too hard. Too bad it's a one-shot, the plot gives more to just a one story chapter.
6/11/2011 c1 18sunaprincess7
love love loved this story.
brilliantly written with so few words.
A pleasure to read!
Well done!
SP7 :)
18sunaprincess7love love loved this story.
brilliantly written with so few words.
A pleasure to read!
Well done!
SP7 :)
6/10/2011 c1 tokyo girl
It's great fic! Thank you for writing. I'd love to read this story from Minato's POV, too.
It's great fic! Thank you for writing. I'd love to read this story from Minato's POV, too.