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Nice work looking forward as to where this is going till then peace out
Nice work looking forward as to where this is going till then peace out
10/21/2012 c10 
1Heartflower
Love the whole Wybie's perspective thingy. Its an awesome twist that he had done everything to get rid of her instead of befriend her :P Keep up the awesometastic fantasmic writing .
1HeartflowerLove the whole Wybie's perspective thingy. Its an awesome twist that he had done everything to get rid of her instead of befriend her :P Keep up the awesometastic fantasmic writing .
3/22/2012 c10 CoraRoz
Like, zomg I have been waiting for this update forevaaaaaahh!
I laughed at the part where Wybie was complaining about the job where he had to help grandpa put his slippers on.
Wybie: All right, they should stay on your feet now, gramps.
Grandpa: Thank you, sporty. Now I've forgotton how to walk.
Wybie: Craptastic.
Mrs. Lovat, I am going to call Clark Howard on you for beating up an innocent little child! (For those who don't know, Clark Howard is the guy you call if you're being mistreated. I learned about him while watching my favorite reality TV show, The Real Housewives of Atlanta. Yep, I need to get out more).
And finally, HOW COULD YOU LOSE YOUR WYBIE OBSESSION? XD Well, to tell you the truth, I almost lost mine too! To Bruno Mars!(I love you Bruno and you have more talent than Bieber boy ever will) But it came back, cuz it alwys does. (I still think Bruno is hot, though)
Great chapter, Maria! Keep up the good work!
Like, zomg I have been waiting for this update forevaaaaaahh!
I laughed at the part where Wybie was complaining about the job where he had to help grandpa put his slippers on.
Wybie: All right, they should stay on your feet now, gramps.
Grandpa: Thank you, sporty. Now I've forgotton how to walk.
Wybie: Craptastic.
Mrs. Lovat, I am going to call Clark Howard on you for beating up an innocent little child! (For those who don't know, Clark Howard is the guy you call if you're being mistreated. I learned about him while watching my favorite reality TV show, The Real Housewives of Atlanta. Yep, I need to get out more).
And finally, HOW COULD YOU LOSE YOUR WYBIE OBSESSION? XD Well, to tell you the truth, I almost lost mine too! To Bruno Mars!(I love you Bruno and you have more talent than Bieber boy ever will) But it came back, cuz it alwys does. (I still think Bruno is hot, though)
Great chapter, Maria! Keep up the good work!
8/9/2011 c9 James Birdsong
Nice work
Nice work
8/6/2011 c9 CoraRoz
Ms. Lovat: Why is it that whenever I ask you to do something you do the exact opposite?
Me: It's all my fault. I showed him that SpongeBob episode where Squidward created "Opposite Day". I throw myself at mercy of the court! I deserve to be punished!
Ms. Lovat: Why is it that whenever I ask you to do something you do the exact opposite?
Me: It's all my fault. I showed him that SpongeBob episode where Squidward created "Opposite Day". I throw myself at mercy of the court! I deserve to be punished!
8/6/2011 c9 3Deedeedragonwolf
Aha! I never knew Wybie was so devious. X) Lol. Oh well. Hopefully he'll come to see that Coraline will be the bestest friend he'll ever have. ;)
3DeedeedragonwolfAha! I never knew Wybie was so devious. X) Lol. Oh well. Hopefully he'll come to see that Coraline will be the bestest friend he'll ever have. ;)
7/29/2011 c8 James Birdsong
Cool
Cool
7/29/2011 c8 3Deedeedragonwolf
Hahaha. xD Cute. I can't wait to see how Wybie's perspective changes on everything. :P Update sooooon! ^-^
3DeedeedragonwolfHahaha. xD Cute. I can't wait to see how Wybie's perspective changes on everything. :P Update sooooon! ^-^
7/29/2011 c1 Deedeedragonwolf
I said I was gonna read your story later, but I couldn't help myself. :D Aha! This is amazing, I love it! Can't wait to read more! ^-^
I said I was gonna read your story later, but I couldn't help myself. :D Aha! This is amazing, I love it! Can't wait to read more! ^-^
7/11/2011 c7 James Birdsong
Good seventh chapter
Good seventh chapter
7/11/2011 c6 James Birdsong
Same mistake but the fanfic as usual is good
Same mistake but the fanfic as usual is good