for The Other Story7/11/2011 c5 James Birdsong
At end you said you're when you meant your
At end you said you're when you meant your
7/2/2011 c6 CoraRoz
I wish I could have been there to comfort him instead of that John guy. I wouldn't have laughed.
I wish I could have been there to comfort him instead of that John guy. I wouldn't have laughed.
6/26/2011 c5 CoraRoz
Isn't John Wybie's dad in Wybie's Kidnapper? LOL
BTW, Wybie's gramma sounds like Rochelle from Everybody Hates Chris, a little bit.
Isn't John Wybie's dad in Wybie's Kidnapper? LOL
BTW, Wybie's gramma sounds like Rochelle from Everybody Hates Chris, a little bit.
6/24/2011 c4 James Birdsong
Good
Good
6/21/2011 c4 CoraRoz
"My darling, I miss you more as every second passes by. I miss your soft breath running down my neck as we..."
Wybie: Oh my God!
Me: Are you disgusted?
Wybie: ...very much so.
Me: What? I think it's funny! And, seductive at the same time.
Wybie: You're a romantic, aren't you?
Me: I grew up watching Beauty and the Beast and Sleeping Beauty. What do you expect?
I must say, after reading that one sentence, I was begging for more to read.
"My darling, I miss you more as every second passes by. I miss your soft breath running down my neck as we..."
Wybie: Oh my God!
Me: Are you disgusted?
Wybie: ...very much so.
Me: What? I think it's funny! And, seductive at the same time.
Wybie: You're a romantic, aren't you?
Me: I grew up watching Beauty and the Beast and Sleeping Beauty. What do you expect?
I must say, after reading that one sentence, I was begging for more to read.
6/16/2011 c3 CoraRoz
His gramma seems nice... *shifty eyes*
His gramma seems nice... *shifty eyes*
6/14/2011 c2 CoraRoz
I live in Arizona, and my family critisizes the state for being "dry" and "hot", so I can relate to Wybie. Like, one hundred percent.
I love what you did with the chapter! And now I know for sure, this is going to be one hell of a battle of the sexes story.
I live in Arizona, and my family critisizes the state for being "dry" and "hot", so I can relate to Wybie. Like, one hundred percent.
I love what you did with the chapter! And now I know for sure, this is going to be one hell of a battle of the sexes story.

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