for Girl's Day Out3/19/2012 c1
4Percabethgirl2645
my god. they can never get a break, can they? forget voldemort, a house full of kids is terrifying.
4Percabethgirl2645my god. they can never get a break, can they? forget voldemort, a house full of kids is terrifying.
1/14/2012 c1 myhorserockyrocks
That was hilarious! I LOVED it! Fabulous job!
Horse
That was hilarious! I LOVED it! Fabulous job!
Horse
9/27/2011 c1 Guadalupe Ankatras
Hahahaha reread the story. Uhm, I must say, it's a little confusing. Points of view shift in and out with different characters. Lots of accidents and whatnot happening like every 3 minutes. The pacing is very quick. You definitely got the hectic mood though, fo' sho. Hahaha quite comical, I must say. :) Continue writing, m'dear. You are exceptional.
Hahahaha reread the story. Uhm, I must say, it's a little confusing. Points of view shift in and out with different characters. Lots of accidents and whatnot happening like every 3 minutes. The pacing is very quick. You definitely got the hectic mood though, fo' sho. Hahaha quite comical, I must say. :) Continue writing, m'dear. You are exceptional.
8/9/2011 c1
1513dramaqueen13
Haha, that was perfect! This was so cute and funny, and Bill and Fleur going to the Veela festival was hilarious! I loved Rose locking Teddy in the cabinet, and Lily and the lipstick. Poor Ron and Harry... :D
1513dramaqueen13Haha, that was perfect! This was so cute and funny, and Bill and Fleur going to the Veela festival was hilarious! I loved Rose locking Teddy in the cabinet, and Lily and the lipstick. Poor Ron and Harry... :D
