for A Library Collection of Stories1/24 c1 Kruen
I liked this chapter about half way, until I couldn't take the errors anymore. If you get a beta I would be willing to try to read more.
I liked this chapter about half way, until I couldn't take the errors anymore. If you get a beta I would be willing to try to read more.
4/16/2012 c3 
29917brat
I really love the first chapter of these stories ans I hope that either you or someone else decides to take it up because it is really brillint.
29917bratI really love the first chapter of these stories ans I hope that either you or someone else decides to take it up because it is really brillint.
6/11/2011 c1 Jay
This story short is good. I started reading and didn't want to stop. I love how you explained Dobby's background and how he has disguised himself as Potter. It is cool that the "Cops" noticed what was happening and started to bust up the rumors concerning Harry and Family around the neighborhood.
I really think that you should continue you this. I don't see you needing to rewrite this chapter, in fact this is perfect.
I want to find out what happens! How is Ragnok going to get out of this and what about the special forces?
Please continue this story it is too well written not to keep us in suspense.
This story short is good. I started reading and didn't want to stop. I love how you explained Dobby's background and how he has disguised himself as Potter. It is cool that the "Cops" noticed what was happening and started to bust up the rumors concerning Harry and Family around the neighborhood.
I really think that you should continue you this. I don't see you needing to rewrite this chapter, in fact this is perfect.
I want to find out what happens! How is Ragnok going to get out of this and what about the special forces?
Please continue this story it is too well written not to keep us in suspense.