for Returning to humanity11/14/2011 c1 parentswinton
very good start, well done
very good start, well done
10/12/2011 c9 jinxcrusher
i love it its very good and your welcome for the help and i will continue to help with all the other chapters (if you want and will let me too of course)
i love it its very good and your welcome for the help and i will continue to help with all the other chapters (if you want and will let me too of course)
9/17/2011 c1 Li
Your plot seems very nice and solid, and I think it would be greatly enhanced if you employed a beta to help you with grammar and sentence structure. I am not available at the moment to beta, but I recommend you look someone up. I would love to see this plot develop to its full potential.
Your plot seems very nice and solid, and I think it would be greatly enhanced if you employed a beta to help you with grammar and sentence structure. I am not available at the moment to beta, but I recommend you look someone up. I would love to see this plot develop to its full potential.
9/10/2011 c8 jinxcrusher
I love it just like i love all your stories it's fantastic i can't wait for the next one
I love it just like i love all your stories it's fantastic i can't wait for the next one
8/9/2011 c6 GoddessAnjanee
The exchange between Annika and the Doctor was amazing.
Names: Boy - William ; Ryan ; Tyler or Christopher
Names: Girl - Rebecca ; Kathleen ; or Heather
The exchange between Annika and the Doctor was amazing.
Names: Boy - William ; Ryan ; Tyler or Christopher
Names: Girl - Rebecca ; Kathleen ; or Heather
7/8/2011 c6
1Umino Akiko
Andrea, Alexis, Madison, David, Mathew, Benjamin. Well thats some good names. Also Iris or Damien. I have more. If you come up with a meaning or theme I can find a name that goes with it.
1Umino AkikoAndrea, Alexis, Madison, David, Mathew, Benjamin. Well thats some good names. Also Iris or Damien. I have more. If you come up with a meaning or theme I can find a name that goes with it.
7/7/2011 c6 Guest
i love it it's awesome i can't wait for the rest of it
i love it it's awesome i can't wait for the rest of it
7/1/2011 c5 Guest
i love it this is one of my favorite stories then again all of your stories are my favorite it shows how relationships can be humanity even to a borg and a hologram
i love it this is one of my favorite stories then again all of your stories are my favorite it shows how relationships can be humanity even to a borg and a hologram
