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9/1/2012 c1 2SasaRea
Haha! You should do another one of these for secret tunnel!
1/28/2012 c1 waterfall13
this song is easily one of the most emotional parts of ATLAS(cool acronym lol!). it definetly made me cry. i absolutly love this song, but no matter howmany times i listen, i cry. i always though that it should be longer though. ive been working on more verses for it myself. i really enjoyed yours though. just reading the lyrics makes me really emotional{but im almost always emotional lolX)} yours is one of the saddest i've read great job on it. keep writing!;)
9/21/2011 c1 8GaaraHinataWake
I think that was great, and if you really loved this song, then I have to recomend this youtube video that I have watched recently, that is an extention of this song, and if you are interested then here is the link :http:/www.youtube.com/watch?v=vo6h0yY-oA

these are the lyrics that she used as well :

Leaves from the vine

Falling so slow

Like fragile, tiny shells

Drifting in the foam

Little soldier boy

Come marching home

Brave soldier boy

Come marching home

Ash in the snow

Falling so slow

Like fragile, broken hearts

With no place to go

Little soldier boy

Come marching home

Brave soldier boy

Come marching home

He thought he knew

What he was fighting for

But the sight of blood

Made him wonder why there was war

Poor soldier boy

Cold and alone

Bombs fall like rain

He's all alone.

They're all alone.

Those leaves did grow

From branches overgrown

Drifting slowly down

Resting among the snow

Little soldier boy

Taken from home

Forced to fight a war

That's not his own.

Leaves from the vine

Changing so slow

Like empty, fallen souls

Looking for a home

Little soldier boy

Thought he could soar

Brave soldier boy

Died in their war

The video is all in piano but is a beatiful version of the song that I hope you will fall in love with. :D
7/28/2011 c1 24Justice333
Good songfic! I don't read those to often...
7/28/2011 c1 Justice333
Good songfic! I don't read those to often...
7/21/2011 c1 5Wei Tzu
This is an interesting variation of the actual song. It's much sadder, and even more ominous. The original song, of which only the first verse is shown in the series, us much more ambiguous and hopeful. This is much darker, and more final.
6/9/2011 c1 2MentalProdigy
This was fantastic, but sad as well. R.I.P Mako.
6/8/2011 c1 2ShadowJ95
Wow that was good, if I ever do a fan fiction would u mind if I put that in there
6/8/2011 c1 6FirePony16
Very beautiful, I even sang it out loud. It's flows. Mako will always be missed.
6/7/2011 c1 16SnoopyGirl213
So sweet Mako will always be Iroh to me

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