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5LilithSky
I found this song and read this chapter while listening to it. And I almost cried. It was so perfect. I think KC's scene was my favorite. Which is odd but true. This was the best chapter ever, it tied everything together so well and I was left breathless. This was amazing.!
5LilithSkyI found this song and read this chapter while listening to it. And I almost cried. It was so perfect. I think KC's scene was my favorite. Which is odd but true. This was the best chapter ever, it tied everything together so well and I was left breathless. This was amazing.!
7/18/2011 c47 LilithSky
This chapter made me cry. When liberty mentioned JT I got all teary! This season is real going to make me cry!
Have I mentioned I love this story.
This chapter made me cry. When liberty mentioned JT I got all teary! This season is real going to make me cry!
Have I mentioned I love this story.
7/8/2011 c32 5LilithSky
Oh My Goodness, So Imogen did have something to do with Julia's death,,,, Such a good twist. And the Jake's mom thing very nice as well. Didn't see that one comeing. And I feel so sad for Jenna, KC has always been stupid. Great chapter I can't wait for more... 9 more day!
5LilithSkyOh My Goodness, So Imogen did have something to do with Julia's death,,,, Such a good twist. And the Jake's mom thing very nice as well. Didn't see that one comeing. And I feel so sad for Jenna, KC has always been stupid. Great chapter I can't wait for more... 9 more day!
7/8/2011 c30 LilithSky
Both chapters...
chapter 29
Awwww that was kinda sweet between KC and Jenna!
Sad Awww about Anya and Sav but it happens, they weren't ment to be I don't think.
That wouldn't be good if she went straight back to Eli right after, but Jake needs to pay.
Adam always no how to walk away after saying hurtful things. Man I love him.
I love this story and I feel like everything will blow up soon. It's not Eli to just walk away. Once everything comes out everywhere things will be so perfect for everyone I just know it. Marasol and Jake will be locked up somewhere lol.
chapter 30
Fiona is just such a good person.
I got teary eyed at Clare's stubornness. I could just slap her.
No Adam needs to fight her too. But Adam knows best so I guess it's the waiting game now.
Both chapters...
chapter 29
Awwww that was kinda sweet between KC and Jenna!
Sad Awww about Anya and Sav but it happens, they weren't ment to be I don't think.
That wouldn't be good if she went straight back to Eli right after, but Jake needs to pay.
Adam always no how to walk away after saying hurtful things. Man I love him.
I love this story and I feel like everything will blow up soon. It's not Eli to just walk away. Once everything comes out everywhere things will be so perfect for everyone I just know it. Marasol and Jake will be locked up somewhere lol.
chapter 30
Fiona is just such a good person.
I got teary eyed at Clare's stubornness. I could just slap her.
No Adam needs to fight her too. But Adam knows best so I guess it's the waiting game now.
7/6/2011 c1 Guest
The way you portrayed Jake is as if he's manipulative, a player and just mean. He's exactly the opposite. I'll have to admit that it is interesting.
The way you portrayed Jake is as if he's manipulative, a player and just mean. He's exactly the opposite. I'll have to admit that it is interesting.