for 88 Miles Per Hour6/7 c2 
2Inara Seraph
ahhh and I was enjoying the story until you started bashing characters for no reason. I don't even care if your point is valid or not, it's just unprofessional. Don't go on an author tract, just tell your story.
2Inara Seraphahhh and I was enjoying the story until you started bashing characters for no reason. I don't even care if your point is valid or not, it's just unprofessional. Don't go on an author tract, just tell your story.
5/3 c10 10bearblue
First, just wanted to say I really enjoyed this. Second, as a writer going through a current slump, I feel you. Just keep in mind sometimes it's the psyche's way of refilling the well and be patient with yourself. When you restart, you'll be better than ever. :)
10bearblueFirst, just wanted to say I really enjoyed this. Second, as a writer going through a current slump, I feel you. Just keep in mind sometimes it's the psyche's way of refilling the well and be patient with yourself. When you restart, you'll be better than ever. :)
12/17/2012 c4 1Aliciaa
I really like this story, I just dont like the Buffy bashing. Its not Buffys fault that Zander and Willow never got together. Buffy never encouraged her to become a lesbian and she didn't encourage Zander to be with Cordy. If anything she tried to tell Willow to speak up to Zander. And just because willow is smarter then her dosent mean Buffy is not a hero. She died to save the world. Willow tried to destroy it. If anything Willows the reckless one when it comes to magic, again not Buffys fault.(sorry I love Buffy lol) But good story
1AliciaaI really like this story, I just dont like the Buffy bashing. Its not Buffys fault that Zander and Willow never got together. Buffy never encouraged her to become a lesbian and she didn't encourage Zander to be with Cordy. If anything she tried to tell Willow to speak up to Zander. And just because willow is smarter then her dosent mean Buffy is not a hero. She died to save the world. Willow tried to destroy it. If anything Willows the reckless one when it comes to magic, again not Buffys fault.(sorry I love Buffy lol) But good story
12/3/2012 c10 Richard3976
Jared
Nice story concept, letting you play in many different areas :)
I like your background pieces, I learnt more about Robotech reading this story than watching who knows how many hours of the show!
It’s also fun to speculate how this story may resolve, I think even a major demon might have problems with the wave motion gun. That’s of course if you let the tech work in their home universe?
Any way hope you feel like writing more soon on this and your other great stories
Thanks for sharing
Jared
Nice story concept, letting you play in many different areas :)
I like your background pieces, I learnt more about Robotech reading this story than watching who knows how many hours of the show!
It’s also fun to speculate how this story may resolve, I think even a major demon might have problems with the wave motion gun. That’s of course if you let the tech work in their home universe?
Any way hope you feel like writing more soon on this and your other great stories
Thanks for sharing
11/17/2012 c10 me
YAY! you scared me with the last author's notes! but i saw that there was still one more chapter, so i had hope. thank you for not giving up. i haven't read the other reviews yet, so i don't know what exactly was said, but take it from me, who loves alternate universe fics, buffy halloween fics, and time traveling to change a bad future fics, when i say that this is great by all three standards. it doesn't stagnate, and even when the characters go to universes with which i am unfamiliar there is enough description and explanation to get me up to speed without going overboard and boring me! keep it up, and don't let reviews get you down. in fact, let reviews be the wind beneath your wings :)
YAY! you scared me with the last author's notes! but i saw that there was still one more chapter, so i had hope. thank you for not giving up. i haven't read the other reviews yet, so i don't know what exactly was said, but take it from me, who loves alternate universe fics, buffy halloween fics, and time traveling to change a bad future fics, when i say that this is great by all three standards. it doesn't stagnate, and even when the characters go to universes with which i am unfamiliar there is enough description and explanation to get me up to speed without going overboard and boring me! keep it up, and don't let reviews get you down. in fact, let reviews be the wind beneath your wings :)
10/28/2012 c7 29Hawklan
Ch 6
rofl Doc got outsmarted by Xander and I was right with the Delorian being a decoy,but that was kinda obvious
and not to hard to guess :)
Ch7
uhhaa sometimes reading your chapter really makes my head hurt...just good Willow had the idea to check out
doc's future.
29HawklanCh 6
rofl Doc got outsmarted by Xander and I was right with the Delorian being a decoy,but that was kinda obvious
and not to hard to guess :)
Ch7
uhhaa sometimes reading your chapter really makes my head hurt...just good Willow had the idea to check out
doc's future.
9/26/2012 c10 1DragoonMaster11
I'd love to see you continue to work your way slowly but surely towards powering and equipping the main characters towards the goal of subverting the Musk invasion/getting revenge on the PTB. Especially the second part, considering the story-cannon(I can be vengeful at times). Though, what would happen if they stumbled upon a world with more interactive divine beings like Oh My Goddess!/A Megami-sama (off the top of my head)? I'm worried however, what might happen if they fall into Fullmetal Alchemist and run up against Truth, or find themselves in the Fate/ series(Gaia is supposed to erase unnatural things, after all).
1DragoonMaster11I'd love to see you continue to work your way slowly but surely towards powering and equipping the main characters towards the goal of subverting the Musk invasion/getting revenge on the PTB. Especially the second part, considering the story-cannon(I can be vengeful at times). Though, what would happen if they stumbled upon a world with more interactive divine beings like Oh My Goddess!/A Megami-sama (off the top of my head)? I'm worried however, what might happen if they fall into Fullmetal Alchemist and run up against Truth, or find themselves in the Fate/ series(Gaia is supposed to erase unnatural things, after all).
9/24/2012 c5 sparky555
Love the story, hope theres more some time! The obvious univese to go to for crazy martial arts is Dragon Ball. Insane power levels and good tech. But thats just to obvious, maybe something a little more obscure is called for? Don't know what, noting really jumps to mind that compares with the build up from maybe D ranked fignting to insane beyond Omegea death levels. Not to meantion the training possible with a gravity room.
Hope to see more!
Love the story, hope theres more some time! The obvious univese to go to for crazy martial arts is Dragon Ball. Insane power levels and good tech. But thats just to obvious, maybe something a little more obscure is called for? Don't know what, noting really jumps to mind that compares with the build up from maybe D ranked fignting to insane beyond Omegea death levels. Not to meantion the training possible with a gravity room.
Hope to see more!
8/29/2012 c7 2Deadzepplin
I recently watched an episode of Star trek where Picard was sent back in time by Q to fix a few things he didn't like with his life like getting stabbed in the heart and getting an artificial heart but when he returned to the present he was a boring man stuck in stellar cartography living with no passion or greatness and he decided that he would rather go back make it happen as it did and die as he was then live out his life like the dreary boring person he ended up as because of his meddling because it is not only the good that shapes us but the bad as well by changing this you have changed the entirety of the universe and the characters in the story completely
2DeadzepplinI recently watched an episode of Star trek where Picard was sent back in time by Q to fix a few things he didn't like with his life like getting stabbed in the heart and getting an artificial heart but when he returned to the present he was a boring man stuck in stellar cartography living with no passion or greatness and he decided that he would rather go back make it happen as it did and die as he was then live out his life like the dreary boring person he ended up as because of his meddling because it is not only the good that shapes us but the bad as well by changing this you have changed the entirety of the universe and the characters in the story completely
8/15/2012 c4 Hawklan
Ch1
quite the strange start, but most of your ideas are always crazy so I continue to read for a while :)
Ch2
ahh bringing a blind passenger with them...not good.
Ch3
Doc should learn to keep his mouth shut :)
lol nice how they took those Terminator Units out in the past :)
Ch 4
I would guess the Master won't be to grateful about sparing that information :)
Ch1
quite the strange start, but most of your ideas are always crazy so I continue to read for a while :)
Ch2
ahh bringing a blind passenger with them...not good.
Ch3
Doc should learn to keep his mouth shut :)
lol nice how they took those Terminator Units out in the past :)
Ch 4
I would guess the Master won't be to grateful about sparing that information :)
8/1/2012 c10 1lordamnesia
Wow, just wow. I took a small haitus from reading your stories so that I wasn't always so anxious for you to update, and had plenty of stuff to read, and then come back and find that you almost totally abandoned this story! I loved this story! Sliding AND Time Travel that is controlled is awesome to try and beat a future where the very beings that control you and those around you are against every move you make! Really, I hope you continue this especially since you said you had an outline for it. Keep up the being awesome and writing awesome stuff!
1lordamnesiaWow, just wow. I took a small haitus from reading your stories so that I wasn't always so anxious for you to update, and had plenty of stuff to read, and then come back and find that you almost totally abandoned this story! I loved this story! Sliding AND Time Travel that is controlled is awesome to try and beat a future where the very beings that control you and those around you are against every move you make! Really, I hope you continue this especially since you said you had an outline for it. Keep up the being awesome and writing awesome stuff!
7/17/2012 c10 CrossoversKittyKat
Your story on a whole reminds me of the good old days of Ranma 1/2 Fanfiction. The kinds I remembered Reading and even writing on Tannims Bridge or the kind that was Compiled on Rakhals Archive. I can safely say I remember quite a few days when I'd get out of school and spend hours browsing those stories and Feeling better about myself on a whole just reading the crazy things that Authors would come up with. I miss BlackDragon6 and Carrot Glace. I especially Enjoyed reading stories by you. I do believe at one point or another you wrote a massive Multi-crossover that was a ranma everything. Called Mirrors-Multiplied This story reminded me alot of that time in your writing career. it gave me hope that maybe the glory days of Ranma Fanfiction had returned. I'm sorry you got so many complaints or bad reviews. I still think this story deserves to be written out. I offer up my services as a sounding board if you'd like to bounce Ideas off of me. But I enjoyed reading this. Xander as Doc Brown from the back to the future series and Mallory Quinn. Brilliant just absolutely Brilliant. You have renewed my faith in fanfiction. I'm glad your still writing. Not to sound cliched skysaber. But Live long and prosper.
Ciao Kat
Your story on a whole reminds me of the good old days of Ranma 1/2 Fanfiction. The kinds I remembered Reading and even writing on Tannims Bridge or the kind that was Compiled on Rakhals Archive. I can safely say I remember quite a few days when I'd get out of school and spend hours browsing those stories and Feeling better about myself on a whole just reading the crazy things that Authors would come up with. I miss BlackDragon6 and Carrot Glace. I especially Enjoyed reading stories by you. I do believe at one point or another you wrote a massive Multi-crossover that was a ranma everything. Called Mirrors-Multiplied This story reminded me alot of that time in your writing career. it gave me hope that maybe the glory days of Ranma Fanfiction had returned. I'm sorry you got so many complaints or bad reviews. I still think this story deserves to be written out. I offer up my services as a sounding board if you'd like to bounce Ideas off of me. But I enjoyed reading this. Xander as Doc Brown from the back to the future series and Mallory Quinn. Brilliant just absolutely Brilliant. You have renewed my faith in fanfiction. I'm glad your still writing. Not to sound cliched skysaber. But Live long and prosper.
Ciao Kat