2/29/2012 c4 styler
when u gonna update next chap

6/12/2007 c4 Kurosaki Naruto
Now, it's been three years sense you've updated. Is that a long enough delay to put out the fifth chapter?

It's really good. Just update soon, this kind of story has to have an ending. It should NEVER have to stop in the middle of things. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I CAN'T PUT ENOUGH EMPHASIS ON THAT!

Ja Ne!

-KN

5/17/2004 c4 5Jay FicLover
THE DOUBLE G/B CHALLENGE
Question: What's better than a fic with an odd pairing?
Answer: A fic with *two* odd pairings, of course!
But not just *any* parings: they should be Goten/Bra and Goku/Bulma, both Son males falling for the Briefs women. Father and son sharing the same fantasy: hair and eyes as blue as the ocean...
I'm offering this challenge to every author that's already written a GK/Bul or a Gt/Br before. I know not all Goten/Bra fans like Goku/Bulma and not all Goku/Bulma lovers like Goten/Bra, but this isn't about the particular characters involved in the pairings: it's about writting an original, dramatic or good story.
For example, here's some suggestions for the possible plot:
1)AU. Goten is the youngest son that still lives with his father Goku, a long-time widower. He meets a beatiful new girl at school, and they start dating. The girl tells him her parents are just finished getting a divorce. At the same time, his father's started giving hints that he's dating someone also. The same night Goten plans to introduce his girlfriend, he's father informs him he's invited his *special someone* to have dinner. Bra and Bulma bump into each other in the living room only to stare at one another in disblief (the rest is yours).
2) Same plot as before, but Bulma's a widow too, and may be Goku's the one that's divorced.
3)AU. Goku and Bulma, separated/divorced/widow/ers (whatever) meet at work, fall inlove, and get married/move together, hoping it will be the beginning of a new happy and *peaceful* life... What a pity Goten and Bra, their children, had to ruin it by falling for each other... What are two caring and responsible parents to do when none of them is eager to send their child away?
4) Same plot as before, but Bra and Goten are dating in secret, with Gohan and Trunks knowing and covering up for them, or, not knowing and not suspecting a thing.
5) AU Goku falls for his second son's mother-in-law. The problem is... both of them are still married.
6) Not AU. After GT (Goku came back) Goku and Bulma have been secretly inlove with each other for years, never saying a word because of the age difference and the belief the other doesn't feel the same. But just when the saiyan prince and Bulma's marriage seems to be going down the toilet, and Goten and Bra are struggling for Vegeta's approval of their relationship, the two will team up to help their children get a chance at the love that, in their case, each of them think is forever lost and never will be... Not knowing fate may still have some surprises in store for them.
7) AU. Goten and Bra are dating and planning to get married, They organize a dinner to have their families meet. Strangely, Goku and Bulma seem surprised and nervous when seeing each other, and act like they are trying to hide the fact that they already knew each other somehow... Are Goten and Bra only imagining it? Later on, both parents seem to want to break their children apart. When the truth comes out, it turns out to be *very* painful: Goku and Bulma not only know each other already... but they also confess shamefully to their children that there's a chance that Goten and Bra are trully siblings... Leaving no choice to the unfortunate young couple but to wait for the DNA results... Will destiny give them the opportunity to keep their love for one another, or will it separate them forever, covering with shame and mysery the rest of their lives? Will they ever be able to forgive Goku and Bulma for keeping such a secret all these years only to reveal it now?
8) Bulma's Goten's teacher in highschool/university. Goten needs help with his student work. Bulma agrees to tutor him but, the day of their first reunion, which is ib Goten's house, Bulma has no other chance but to bring her teenage daughter Bra along... and sparks fly. Bulma, being the protective mather she is, doesn't like the fact that Goten, being so much older than Bra, should make moves on her, but both kids will be forgotten once Goten's father, Goku, finnaly arrives from work that night...
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Well, those were just examples. If you happen to like them, you are totally free to use them. If not, suit yourselves, but remember the only request is that both G/B couples show up sooner or later in the story.
Good luck, and let the games begin!

3/23/2004 c4 Prphecy
I like this fic I didn't know that Chichi was in love with Yamcha.Update Soon Please.

3/22/2004 c4 July
Yay! Another one of your fics you started updating! You are making me happier by the minute... (grins)
So Chichi´s dumped Goku for Yamcha? And just NOW that he´s actually getting married to Bulma? What is she up to? I KNOW she´s planning something... And, if she is, she´d better hurry up before Bulma succeeds on ruining her own life! What´s Goku gonna do now?

3/9/2004 c3 Drelf
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE

6/16/2003 c3 oliana
this was a really great story. i hope that you update soon. the suspense is really killing me. ok, that's all.