for Blind Eyes and Fatal Mistakes5/8 c1 Guest
I think you should make one shots of everyone's reactions including Draco Snape and Dumbledore
I think you should make one shots of everyone's reactions including Draco Snape and Dumbledore
8/30/2012 c1 
2Terri-LeeMBK
GREAT! Got anymore stories like that? I loved it. Keep going with the great story lines. :)
2Terri-LeeMBKGREAT! Got anymore stories like that? I loved it. Keep going with the great story lines. :)
9/3/2011 c1 cookyc
WOW this was a strong story to bad you did make it a long one this is one I would love to read a strong girl Harry my fav
WOW this was a strong story to bad you did make it a long one this is one I would love to read a strong girl Harry my fav
9/1/2011 c1 6TheEscapeFromReality
You should definitely do a prequel or a continuation, I love the idea of it all!
6TheEscapeFromRealityYou should definitely do a prequel or a continuation, I love the idea of it all!
6/22/2011 c1 18Blue Roselette
I like your story. I think you should continue it though. Maybe something could happen that would change Snape's view of things? Anyway, I still like your story :D
18Blue RoseletteI like your story. I think you should continue it though. Maybe something could happen that would change Snape's view of things? Anyway, I still like your story :D
6/18/2011 c1 neutralshadowcat
That was intense for a one shot short story. Is there any chance of you expanding on the story with a sequel or a prologue story of some sort?
That was intense for a one shot short story. Is there any chance of you expanding on the story with a sequel or a prologue story of some sort?
6/11/2011 c1 Lily887787
i like it except i think you should get rid of the chapter in the beginning unless you are going to continue it...
i like it except i think you should get rid of the chapter in the beginning unless you are going to continue it...
6/11/2011 c1 adenoide
Sev has a big problem to grow up.
Sev has a big problem to grow up.
6/10/2011 c1 unique0987654321
This is a sweet story. It is well written and although it does very well as a stand alone, it can easily be made into a long drawn out multi-chaptered fic. Your writing style is something to be admired, it is smooth and fluent. The characters' emotions are well developed, and although there were some parts that border on cliche, this is a very good fic. I hope you continue writing.
This is a sweet story. It is well written and although it does very well as a stand alone, it can easily be made into a long drawn out multi-chaptered fic. Your writing style is something to be admired, it is smooth and fluent. The characters' emotions are well developed, and although there were some parts that border on cliche, this is a very good fic. I hope you continue writing.