for Freedom Force9/20/2012 c22 
16TammyHybrid21
Reference to Doctor Who with Mr Doctor and the whole thing with Bean's mother being a pink pony remided me of MLP:FiM. Same with Bean's doozy!
16TammyHybrid21Reference to Doctor Who with Mr Doctor and the whole thing with Bean's mother being a pink pony remided me of MLP:FiM. Same with Bean's doozy!
9/20/2012 c22 13Bigby the Big Bad Wolf
Sweet. Looks like Zombie Party Night has begun! Now where did I put my shotgun and chainsaw?
13Bigby the Big Bad WolfSweet. Looks like Zombie Party Night has begun! Now where did I put my shotgun and chainsaw?
9/20/2012 c22 1Drgyen
Only appreciate for the update, but this chapter still follows too much and then word for word from One Piece. Sorry to say, but there is no originality to shape anything different from the OP story (I read and know how the story already goes) beside throwing in new characters (which to be honest IS the whole point of your story, but you really do sometime liteally throw new characters into the story and just happened to be so), but no plot signifcance. So it doesn't stick out for me and acts as a re-run. Nor do I even care for the Kamen Rider character expys (not really a big fan of KR), and actually only going for more character interactions and (REAL) developments with the other non-KR characters.
1DrgyenOnly appreciate for the update, but this chapter still follows too much and then word for word from One Piece. Sorry to say, but there is no originality to shape anything different from the OP story (I read and know how the story already goes) beside throwing in new characters (which to be honest IS the whole point of your story, but you really do sometime liteally throw new characters into the story and just happened to be so), but no plot signifcance. So it doesn't stick out for me and acts as a re-run. Nor do I even care for the Kamen Rider character expys (not really a big fan of KR), and actually only going for more character interactions and (REAL) developments with the other non-KR characters.
9/20/2012 c22 2A5L
Wow, a hentai Yummy, guess that is a first time on for OOO. Awesome chapter, can't wait to see the next chapter.
2A5LWow, a hentai Yummy, guess that is a first time on for OOO. Awesome chapter, can't wait to see the next chapter.
8/10/2012 c21 6OverNerd02
Ahh this chapter was funny. i wonder what problems they'll have to deal with next chapter.
6OverNerd02Ahh this chapter was funny. i wonder what problems they'll have to deal with next chapter.
8/1/2012 c21 shy kid2
first of all ,let me say this series is amazing. i found myself reading some chapters over and over. and classic scene where the boys get beaten sensless . i hope you continue this story. i look forward to see what comes next
first of all ,let me say this series is amazing. i found myself reading some chapters over and over. and classic scene where the boys get beaten sensless . i hope you continue this story. i look forward to see what comes next
7/27/2012 c21 A Fan
Just asking are you planning to add any of the super sentai
Just asking are you planning to add any of the super sentai
7/25/2012 c21 A Fan
Just Asking which would you prefer in this story super sentai or power rangers
Just Asking which would you prefer in this story super sentai or power rangers
7/24/2012 c21 2A5L
Pretty awesome chapter, can't wait for the next one. Bad Luffy! You'll be going to jail for animal abouse!
2A5LPretty awesome chapter, can't wait for the next one. Bad Luffy! You'll be going to jail for animal abouse!
7/24/2012 c21 30GammaTron
Now this is an interesting upturn of surprises. They're afraid of candles! *laughs* Oh, and the comedy at the beginning and involving the group still going about the island was hilarious.
30GammaTronNow this is an interesting upturn of surprises. They're afraid of candles! *laughs* Oh, and the comedy at the beginning and involving the group still going about the island was hilarious.
6/30/2012 c20 Guest
Will there be twist in here
Will there be twist in here
6/18/2012 c20 a fan
Are you planing to add any of the super sentai
Are you planing to add any of the super sentai