for Yet Again5/20 c8 FelixtheSax
One if the best apocalyptic type stories I've ever read. Please update. I love your style.
One if the best apocalyptic type stories I've ever read. Please update. I love your style.
5/16 c8 LilithL2
Picture this:
It's 1 a.m. and I'm in bed trying to sleep but I have a cold and I can't stop coughfing... I need to relax and I use one of my tricks... thinking in a story... doesn't matter what, just something unrelated to work and I can't keep my mind off your "universe" .
Harry seems too perfect, a gentelman with everybody, even when Lily and him fight she's still his mother. I think Harry needs to find somebody who challenges him. Any of the thralls are going to do it, they have been too conditioned and even if you find Ginny or Herms, they aren't going to keep him in line and fight him . His parner has to fight thim but at the same time knows him and lets him be "human", lets him crack, cry and laugh, and bother him at all times.
I think they should despise each other at the beginning... and at some point, Harry should ask for a time out, just left alone after something huge happens... (finding Luna or Herms as a thrall or dead or having to kill Ron because he's a Empire soldier could be a good reason) and then Harry losing it... starting to punch something and crying at the same time...
you need more emotion in this story... I loved it but sometimes it's too lineal. The bad people are bad and the good are good. You could mention The reasons of Dumbledork becoming bad... or have Lily explode one day and explain some of the horrors she experienced it.
This shouldn't be just a fight for survival but a fight to have a life, to live...
as you can see... Your story let me relax but I was still awake at 1:30 a.m. xD
Congratulations again. Amazing story. :)
Picture this:
It's 1 a.m. and I'm in bed trying to sleep but I have a cold and I can't stop coughfing... I need to relax and I use one of my tricks... thinking in a story... doesn't matter what, just something unrelated to work and I can't keep my mind off your "universe" .
Harry seems too perfect, a gentelman with everybody, even when Lily and him fight she's still his mother. I think Harry needs to find somebody who challenges him. Any of the thralls are going to do it, they have been too conditioned and even if you find Ginny or Herms, they aren't going to keep him in line and fight him . His parner has to fight thim but at the same time knows him and lets him be "human", lets him crack, cry and laugh, and bother him at all times.
I think they should despise each other at the beginning... and at some point, Harry should ask for a time out, just left alone after something huge happens... (finding Luna or Herms as a thrall or dead or having to kill Ron because he's a Empire soldier could be a good reason) and then Harry losing it... starting to punch something and crying at the same time...
you need more emotion in this story... I loved it but sometimes it's too lineal. The bad people are bad and the good are good. You could mention The reasons of Dumbledork becoming bad... or have Lily explode one day and explain some of the horrors she experienced it.
This shouldn't be just a fight for survival but a fight to have a life, to live...
as you can see... Your story let me relax but I was still awake at 1:30 a.m. xD
Congratulations again. Amazing story. :)
5/15 c7 LilithL2
really nice story. It's a shame that you can't finish it.
congratulations anyway.
:)
really nice story. It's a shame that you can't finish it.
congratulations anyway.
:)
5/12 c8 
7Maxennce
Great series you've got going on here, I'm loving Harry's character, and although he seems somewhat powerful and altruistic, hes still a man, and makes no faults about that. I'm really looking forward to seeing how this unfolds and what Harry, as headmaster of Hogwarts, does to change the events unfolding in this reality
Kind regards
Max
7MaxennceGreat series you've got going on here, I'm loving Harry's character, and although he seems somewhat powerful and altruistic, hes still a man, and makes no faults about that. I'm really looking forward to seeing how this unfolds and what Harry, as headmaster of Hogwarts, does to change the events unfolding in this reality
Kind regards
Max
5/1 c8 1MayaStormborn
Please please please finish this! It's so good! It's got elements of lots of stories (I LOVE the psychic paper by the way!) but the way you two have put it together makes it something unique and brilliant and I really really want to see how it's resolved!
1MayaStormbornPlease please please finish this! It's so good! It's got elements of lots of stories (I LOVE the psychic paper by the way!) but the way you two have put it together makes it something unique and brilliant and I really really want to see how it's resolved!
4/17 c8 MusicInStillMotion
I am really enjoying this story. I find it inovative and creative and I very much hope that you will consider posting more of it as I would love to know what happens next.
I am really enjoying this story. I find it inovative and creative and I very much hope that you will consider posting more of it as I would love to know what happens next.
4/17 c8 impatientuser
I would love to see this continued one day but I have enjoyed rereading what there is.
I would love to see this continued one day but I have enjoyed rereading what there is.
4/10 c8 4Anhkmorpork
Plot seams a little rushed, like you are telling the story to fast, but I do the same, some of us just aren't meant to write war and peace. Needs continuing.
4AnhkmorporkPlot seams a little rushed, like you are telling the story to fast, but I do the same, some of us just aren't meant to write war and peace. Needs continuing.
4/5 c8 Detlef
it is a good varation to the potter universum.
But I think Umbridge isnt necessary. Perhaps you develeop the story without including all Characters of the original one. Maybe in this way the story will go straight to aim.
On the Plus site Iget a new chapter.
Greetings from germany
it is a good varation to the potter universum.
But I think Umbridge isnt necessary. Perhaps you develeop the story without including all Characters of the original one. Maybe in this way the story will go straight to aim.
On the Plus site Iget a new chapter.
Greetings from germany
4/4 c8 Pyrane
Great. And now I can't help but want to know what will happen next...
PLEASE ! I need my DOSE ! *rire*
Thanks !
***Pyrane***
Great. And now I can't help but want to know what will happen next...
PLEASE ! I need my DOSE ! *rire*
Thanks !
***Pyrane***
4/4 c8 Canuto-90
So I just read both this ff and it's prequel. It seems that you haven't updated this since last year. Could you please consider continuing this story pretty please? :P
I hope you get around to finish this someday.
Great plot, looks even better than the first one. Harry Headmaster rocks!
Till your next update.
Cheers
So I just read both this ff and it's prequel. It seems that you haven't updated this since last year. Could you please consider continuing this story pretty please? :P
I hope you get around to finish this someday.
Great plot, looks even better than the first one. Harry Headmaster rocks!
Till your next update.
Cheers
3/31 c8 redfenix238
Good chapter and good story. It's difficult to find something original, but your story is a good one.
I hope the story is not abandoned and we will see a new chapter soon.
Good chapter and good story. It's difficult to find something original, but your story is a good one.
I hope the story is not abandoned and we will see a new chapter soon.