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4BraiiWriting
Look, I don't know where you learned you english, but where I'm from (and every other part of the damn world) when some one new starts talking you START A NEW PARAGRAPH! You can easily do that by pressying you "Enter" button which is located on the RIGHT side of your keyboard. Please make sure that you make you fanfictions as amazing as this one but make it clear, and follow the rules of the english language.
4BraiiWritingLook, I don't know where you learned you english, but where I'm from (and every other part of the damn world) when some one new starts talking you START A NEW PARAGRAPH! You can easily do that by pressying you "Enter" button which is located on the RIGHT side of your keyboard. Please make sure that you make you fanfictions as amazing as this one but make it clear, and follow the rules of the english language.
8/31/2012 c1 Schenlark
I so overwhelmingly Like-Like this fic!
I so overwhelmingly Like-Like this fic!
7/2/2012 c1 Guest
That was utterly adorable! Great job, thank you for posting.
That was utterly adorable! Great job, thank you for posting.
6/20/2012 c1 13CHiKa-RoXy
Awww, so cute! Seriously loved it, and I hope you write more for this pairing! :P
13CHiKa-RoXyAwww, so cute! Seriously loved it, and I hope you write more for this pairing! :P
4/13/2012 c1 Alah L Haru
D'oh! That was super cute! “I must like you twice to kiss you?” Best line ever :)
D'oh! That was super cute! “I must like you twice to kiss you?” Best line ever :)
10/20/2011 c1 40TheWickedWizardOfOz
I totally agree with SongSix, this fic needs more reviews (I'm sure it's favourite count is not low, however).
Anyways~ I love that immediately you have Conner be jealous of the relationship that Robin and Batman has ^.^ Of course, the first thing that Conner does to vent is go train LOL It seems like such a Robin thing to do, but it fits them both ^.^
And you've captured Conner's frustration at Superman really well too! I can feel that Conner's angry at Superman. I can feel that Conner wishes he were any of the others with /caring/ mentors.
One thing I would say is that everytime a new person is talking, you require a new paragraph, it's a lot easier to read that way.
Oh yes, Robin has quite the mastery of the English language, he can manipulate any sort of words to mean anything~ (Apparently, he can make "You took off your socks" sound like flirting LOL)
Robin's explanation seems...true LOL I dunno why that's a surprise, practically everything else is fairly in-character~
Conner's so adorablly naive ^.^ I love taking advantage of his "Social ineptness"; but, we all know that's not entirely true: he /knows/ the social tendancies, but that isn't to say he uses them LOL
The kisses were adorable ^.^ And I love the description of how Conner's lips are rough, yet the kiss was gentle, I love contrasts like that ^.^
Robin and Conner just DIVE right into the relationship, I love it~ ^.^
Great work here, I'm a little sad I haven't read and reviewed before LOL
-TWWOO
40TheWickedWizardOfOzI totally agree with SongSix, this fic needs more reviews (I'm sure it's favourite count is not low, however).
Anyways~ I love that immediately you have Conner be jealous of the relationship that Robin and Batman has ^.^ Of course, the first thing that Conner does to vent is go train LOL It seems like such a Robin thing to do, but it fits them both ^.^
And you've captured Conner's frustration at Superman really well too! I can feel that Conner's angry at Superman. I can feel that Conner wishes he were any of the others with /caring/ mentors.
One thing I would say is that everytime a new person is talking, you require a new paragraph, it's a lot easier to read that way.
Oh yes, Robin has quite the mastery of the English language, he can manipulate any sort of words to mean anything~ (Apparently, he can make "You took off your socks" sound like flirting LOL)
Robin's explanation seems...true LOL I dunno why that's a surprise, practically everything else is fairly in-character~
Conner's so adorablly naive ^.^ I love taking advantage of his "Social ineptness"; but, we all know that's not entirely true: he /knows/ the social tendancies, but that isn't to say he uses them LOL
The kisses were adorable ^.^ And I love the description of how Conner's lips are rough, yet the kiss was gentle, I love contrasts like that ^.^
Robin and Conner just DIVE right into the relationship, I love it~ ^.^
Great work here, I'm a little sad I haven't read and reviewed before LOL
-TWWOO
8/21/2011 c1 4Aramirandme
Awww!
I like it very very much.
there should be a sequel...yes there should. X-D
4AramirandmeAwww!
I like it very very much.
there should be a sequel...yes there should. X-D
6/20/2011 c1 54song six
WHAT THE HECK? NO REALLY? WHY DON'T YOU HAVE MORE REVIEWS FOR THIS! Shame on any of the readers of fanfiction that are SuperboyxRobin fans that have passed over this, they are missing out!
There's one thing in particular I would like to say i really enjoy in your oneshots or stories. You always started out in a nice setting that doesn't completely dive into the subject right away. Instead you lead into it, like starting off with them having a full conversation about Superman and Batman. it wasn't even a short conversation like most writers would do, you made it an important part of the oneshot. You know, as if it could stand alone as it's own story, and than you let it go into the part everyone clicked on the title for (the slash).
I love the understanding Robin has for Superboy and Superman. he definitely had a way in words in this, and I liked your explanation of what could possibly causing Superman to behave the way he does. I really bought it. The whole idea of knowing someone is 'you' and you have to exist they exist or 'you' exist and you have to take care of 'you' is pretty trippy.
I adore the cuteness and the blissful ignorance Superboy has in his actions to kissing Robin. Sure, later on he finds out he enjoys it, but it's cute that he has no clue what it meant at first. unfortunately, I have to reiterate my comment in your kaldurxSuperboy story that Superboy doesn't seem to be too dense on social interaction in the cartoon. i mean he doesn't understand the little things like 'carrying books' but I think he does have enough understanding of what a kiss means. however, once again, this doesn't really bother me because it lead to a great story like this! The only reason I keep pointing it out is because you are a fantastic writer with a sense of humor and style I really enjoy and I would LOVE to see you write a story that really gives Superboy a well rounded personality with his broodiness, charm (oh you know he's charming! we all saw the latest episode), and protectiveness along with 'I'm so cool' demeanor. It's usually a bit difficult to really grasp the conmplexity of Superboy, but I think you are one of the few who could do it and with flair! Although he was kind of dense to miss the 'Kent' part, but than again that was mostly because Megan missed it!
I liked how Superboy decides to kiss Robin again to make sure he "like-like's" him it almost seemed like an unsubconscience excuse just to be able to kiss the bird boy once more. I was also gidd over the fact that Robin finds out Superboy likes him and he had to explain to him what a kiss means and Superboy was happy to hear he liked him back! EEEEEEH! haha, mostly becase I love Robcentric fanfics (your fic is not robcentric by the way don't worry) therefore I love it when people characterize Robin as this wantable boy who's dreamy, charming, perfect, whatever! You know, even if he is a nerd!
Thankyou for writing this, there's not much else I can say without repeating myself in my last reviews for your other stories. Thankyou for writing I hope to see more as always!
- songsix
54song sixWHAT THE HECK? NO REALLY? WHY DON'T YOU HAVE MORE REVIEWS FOR THIS! Shame on any of the readers of fanfiction that are SuperboyxRobin fans that have passed over this, they are missing out!
There's one thing in particular I would like to say i really enjoy in your oneshots or stories. You always started out in a nice setting that doesn't completely dive into the subject right away. Instead you lead into it, like starting off with them having a full conversation about Superman and Batman. it wasn't even a short conversation like most writers would do, you made it an important part of the oneshot. You know, as if it could stand alone as it's own story, and than you let it go into the part everyone clicked on the title for (the slash).
I love the understanding Robin has for Superboy and Superman. he definitely had a way in words in this, and I liked your explanation of what could possibly causing Superman to behave the way he does. I really bought it. The whole idea of knowing someone is 'you' and you have to exist they exist or 'you' exist and you have to take care of 'you' is pretty trippy.
I adore the cuteness and the blissful ignorance Superboy has in his actions to kissing Robin. Sure, later on he finds out he enjoys it, but it's cute that he has no clue what it meant at first. unfortunately, I have to reiterate my comment in your kaldurxSuperboy story that Superboy doesn't seem to be too dense on social interaction in the cartoon. i mean he doesn't understand the little things like 'carrying books' but I think he does have enough understanding of what a kiss means. however, once again, this doesn't really bother me because it lead to a great story like this! The only reason I keep pointing it out is because you are a fantastic writer with a sense of humor and style I really enjoy and I would LOVE to see you write a story that really gives Superboy a well rounded personality with his broodiness, charm (oh you know he's charming! we all saw the latest episode), and protectiveness along with 'I'm so cool' demeanor. It's usually a bit difficult to really grasp the conmplexity of Superboy, but I think you are one of the few who could do it and with flair! Although he was kind of dense to miss the 'Kent' part, but than again that was mostly because Megan missed it!
I liked how Superboy decides to kiss Robin again to make sure he "like-like's" him it almost seemed like an unsubconscience excuse just to be able to kiss the bird boy once more. I was also gidd over the fact that Robin finds out Superboy likes him and he had to explain to him what a kiss means and Superboy was happy to hear he liked him back! EEEEEEH! haha, mostly becase I love Robcentric fanfics (your fic is not robcentric by the way don't worry) therefore I love it when people characterize Robin as this wantable boy who's dreamy, charming, perfect, whatever! You know, even if he is a nerd!
Thankyou for writing this, there's not much else I can say without repeating myself in my last reviews for your other stories. Thankyou for writing I hope to see more as always!
- songsix
6/14/2011 c1 1CarnivalxLove
And this is why I adore Super Boy and Robin. Their romance is so awkward and perfect! Amazing job! Please continue to write the these two.
1CarnivalxLoveAnd this is why I adore Super Boy and Robin. Their romance is so awkward and perfect! Amazing job! Please continue to write the these two.
6/14/2011 c1 1SpazticTwitchNinja
Cute story. The only thing wrong with it is that when two different people are talking, you're supposed to seperate the dialogue into a new line/paragraph/whatever.
1SpazticTwitchNinjaCute story. The only thing wrong with it is that when two different people are talking, you're supposed to seperate the dialogue into a new line/paragraph/whatever.