for The Phantoms of Jump City5/15 c6 kingpariah
i love danny's thoughts on letting dani go to the mall, that was hilarious. the ending scene was intense and hilarious at the same time. i think this was an appropriate time to bring sam into the story. looking forward to the next chapter. this is a great story.
i love danny's thoughts on letting dani go to the mall, that was hilarious. the ending scene was intense and hilarious at the same time. i think this was an appropriate time to bring sam into the story. looking forward to the next chapter. this is a great story.
5/15 c5 kingpariah
tension ran high between danny and robin for a sec. looks like choosing beast boy as the main titan is working out well. also about your reasons for not updating, i could see why you may have lost interest. i'm somewhat new to this site so i can't comment that much on it. still i hope you get some interest back and start updating again.
tension ran high between danny and robin for a sec. looks like choosing beast boy as the main titan is working out well. also about your reasons for not updating, i could see why you may have lost interest. i'm somewhat new to this site so i can't comment that much on it. still i hope you get some interest back and start updating again.
5/15 c4 kingpariah
although there isn't any fighting in this chapter, it has to be read. after all, how can the titans deal with danny if they dont know his reasons? speaking of which, why is danny being called dan? danny only has his apearance and maybe his attitude, but hes still danny.
although there isn't any fighting in this chapter, it has to be read. after all, how can the titans deal with danny if they dont know his reasons? speaking of which, why is danny being called dan? danny only has his apearance and maybe his attitude, but hes still danny.
5/15 c3 kingpariah
wow. so much for danny not wanting to be be like dan. he got rid of the jumpsuit, but definitely not of the anger and rage. the hive 5 didn't deserved that level of brutality. wouldnt surprise me if the titans become ever more wary of danny. small curriousity, the new jumpsuits danny and dani are wearing, what do they look like?
wow. so much for danny not wanting to be be like dan. he got rid of the jumpsuit, but definitely not of the anger and rage. the hive 5 didn't deserved that level of brutality. wouldnt surprise me if the titans become ever more wary of danny. small curriousity, the new jumpsuits danny and dani are wearing, what do they look like?
5/15 c2 kingpariah
i find it interesting that beast boy is the one to take charge of the situation and try to defuse it. i also like how protective danny is about dani. great story so far. last chapter i said that dan is in a way in this fic even if he isn't here, and you just proved it by having danny change into dan's uniform. let's see what happens next.
i find it interesting that beast boy is the one to take charge of the situation and try to defuse it. i also like how protective danny is about dani. great story so far. last chapter i said that dan is in a way in this fic even if he isn't here, and you just proved it by having danny change into dan's uniform. let's see what happens next.
5/15 c1 kingpariah
interesting chapter. it definitely captures a reader. poor danny. all he wanted was to help dani aninstead he gets exiled for it, worse yet, he now has dan's appearance. however, as a dan fan, i admit i like that although dan himself is not here, in a way he still is. onto the next chapter.
interesting chapter. it definitely captures a reader. poor danny. all he wanted was to help dani aninstead he gets exiled for it, worse yet, he now has dan's appearance. however, as a dan fan, i admit i like that although dan himself is not here, in a way he still is. onto the next chapter.
4/28 c6 dmc fanboy
finally a writer who see's danny's raw power and write it in a beautifully violent and malicious fashion along with an actual understanding of a guys mind like how you and you're brother can beat each other senseless than hangout like nothing happened and play video games after
finally a writer who see's danny's raw power and write it in a beautifully violent and malicious fashion along with an actual understanding of a guys mind like how you and you're brother can beat each other senseless than hangout like nothing happened and play video games after
4/3 c6 Guest
Great cant have danny without sam
Great cant have danny without sam
2/27 c6 PinkCandy
*shrieks in pure girly joy* Ob my god, I loved that!next chappie please.
*shrieks in pure girly joy* Ob my god, I loved that!next chappie please.
1/16 c6 
11Crystalzap
lol that was great I don't think Danny would turn on everyone like that but I can understand him giving up on humanity after his own parent tried to kill him. I love Dani's relationship with him though SO cute :D
11Crystalzaplol that was great I don't think Danny would turn on everyone like that but I can understand him giving up on humanity after his own parent tried to kill him. I love Dani's relationship with him though SO cute :D
1/4 c6 DarkKingM
Are you kidding me with this "Sam-hate" thing? Who was that dumb to send a rewiews like this? I WAS WAITING FOR THIS DxS MOMENT!*running around screaming like a little girl* Have no idea how loudly I was squeeling then I read 'Sam' in this chapter))) The whole story until that moment was awesome, but now it's even more amaizing! Love it!
And it seems like BB is in trouble right now. Having Dan after myself is my personal nightmare 10. Good luck running away, Beast Boy!
Are you kidding me with this "Sam-hate" thing? Who was that dumb to send a rewiews like this? I WAS WAITING FOR THIS DxS MOMENT!*running around screaming like a little girl* Have no idea how loudly I was squeeling then I read 'Sam' in this chapter))) The whole story until that moment was awesome, but now it's even more amaizing! Love it!
And it seems like BB is in trouble right now. Having Dan after myself is my personal nightmare 10. Good luck running away, Beast Boy!
12/20/2012 c6 3Dragoneisha
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHa
Okay that was funny. I loved the ending, and the author's note was uproarious. Following this story.
3DragoneishaHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHa
Okay that was funny. I loved the ending, and the author's note was uproarious. Following this story.
12/18/2012 c6 ArchangelxAzrael
AWESOME! And I must say you chose the perfect time to bring Sam into the story. Cant wait to read what happens next.
AWESOME! And I must say you chose the perfect time to bring Sam into the story. Cant wait to read what happens next.