for Just a Coverup10/19/2011 c17 michelle-fan
Thanks for updating! Very good and exciting!:D I hope you will update soon again! :)
Thanks for updating! Very good and exciting!:D I hope you will update soon again! :)
8/13/2011 c15 michelle-fan
Very good update! very exciting! Looking forward to read the next chapter! very good job!:D
Very good update! very exciting! Looking forward to read the next chapter! very good job!:D
8/13/2011 c9 crazy424
I like this so much, McGee is my favorite NCIS character so its fun to see him in this story:):)
Emily & Tony are a great couple, she's xcellnt working in the field.
I like this so much, McGee is my favorite NCIS character so its fun to see him in this story:):)
Emily & Tony are a great couple, she's xcellnt working in the field.
8/9/2011 c14 michelle-fan
Very good and exciting!:D I really looking forward to see what happens! please update soon! exciting to now what's next!:D
Very good and exciting!:D I really looking forward to see what happens! please update soon! exciting to now what's next!:D
8/8/2011 c14 
8AlmeidaFluff
Great action in this chapter. It's fun seeing them all working together.
Cracked ribs. Ouch. Emily's great in the field, though.
Looking forward to your next chapter! ;D
8AlmeidaFluffGreat action in this chapter. It's fun seeing them all working together.
Cracked ribs. Ouch. Emily's great in the field, though.
Looking forward to your next chapter! ;D
8/4/2011 c13 michelle-fan
Very exciting!:D I can't belive nina is back! very interesting!:D I really hope the can find Jack! please update soon!:)
Very exciting!:D I can't belive nina is back! very interesting!:D I really hope the can find Jack! please update soon!:)
8/4/2011 c13 Guest
hey,good for you,this story is just getting better and better,and it really makes me wanna follow it,so its really good,but i was surprised when they didnt do any thing when they took jack,i mean its not a wise idea to not deal with this situation in the right time,and just go back to sleep like nothing happend,...! ;-D keep good job
hey,good for you,this story is just getting better and better,and it really makes me wanna follow it,so its really good,but i was surprised when they didnt do any thing when they took jack,i mean its not a wise idea to not deal with this situation in the right time,and just go back to sleep like nothing happend,...! ;-D keep good job
8/3/2011 c13 AlmeidaFluff
"After Jack's vision cleared he looked up at the two large men standing next to a petite women, "Nina?""
Oh, wow! Great surprise! Evil Nina! Looking forward to the next chapter! Nina was always my favorite all-time evil traitor! ;D
"After Jack's vision cleared he looked up at the two large men standing next to a petite women, "Nina?""
Oh, wow! Great surprise! Evil Nina! Looking forward to the next chapter! Nina was always my favorite all-time evil traitor! ;D
8/2/2011 c12 AlmeidaFluff
"Jack carefully got out of bed, and grabbed his gun, turning the safety off. He carefully crept over to the window and peered out of it. Just then, a hand shot through the glass, and wrapped itself around his neck, and pulled him out of the window, cutting him badly from the broken glass."
Great action! I can just see that happening. Very startling to have a hand come through the glass.
I'm glad DiNozzo got off easy and was able to get home. I'm eagerly awaiting your next chapter. I don't know who snatched Jack, but they sure picked the wrong guy and backup team to mess with. ;D
"Jack carefully got out of bed, and grabbed his gun, turning the safety off. He carefully crept over to the window and peered out of it. Just then, a hand shot through the glass, and wrapped itself around his neck, and pulled him out of the window, cutting him badly from the broken glass."
Great action! I can just see that happening. Very startling to have a hand come through the glass.
I'm glad DiNozzo got off easy and was able to get home. I'm eagerly awaiting your next chapter. I don't know who snatched Jack, but they sure picked the wrong guy and backup team to mess with. ;D
8/1/2011 c11 michelle-fan
OMG!
poor Emily! I hope tony is going to be okay! and that he and Emily are going to get toghether again!:D
I Love the cute Tony and Michelle moments!:D
please update soon!:)
OMG!
poor Emily! I hope tony is going to be okay! and that he and Emily are going to get toghether again!:D
I Love the cute Tony and Michelle moments!:D
please update soon!:)