for Just a Coverup7/31/2011 c11 
8AlmeidaFluff
You had me laughing here...
"Jack, do you have any kings?" Michelle asked Jack.
"Go fish," Jack replied.
(LOL. I remember that card game from when I was a kid. And that whole Jack/Tony dialog was hilarious.)
But then... OMG! DiNozzo gets shot? Pls. update soon!
8AlmeidaFluffYou had me laughing here...
"Jack, do you have any kings?" Michelle asked Jack.
"Go fish," Jack replied.
(LOL. I remember that card game from when I was a kid. And that whole Jack/Tony dialog was hilarious.)
But then... OMG! DiNozzo gets shot? Pls. update soon!
7/31/2011 c10 AlmeidaFluff
I think Emily and DiNozza should elope. I don't think Gibbs would be able to do much about that. I hope that's what happens. ;D
I think Emily and DiNozza should elope. I don't think Gibbs would be able to do much about that. I hope that's what happens. ;D
7/30/2011 c10 Nazanin
oh,no its not fair,i think one of them should be transfered so they can keep their relationship.
oh,no its not fair,i think one of them should be transfered so they can keep their relationship.
7/29/2011 c9 AlmeidaFluff
""Won't tell Gibbs what?" Gibbs's voice said approaching their position."
Hahaha! Cute bit and a nice chapter, overall.
""Won't tell Gibbs what?" Gibbs's voice said approaching their position."
Hahaha! Cute bit and a nice chapter, overall.
7/29/2011 c2 crazy424
lol i get mixed up with the tonys but i love both Tonys so that is ok. :)I love all the characters in this, Chloe, Jack, Tony,Michelle & Emily feels like a great girlfriend for him!
lol i get mixed up with the tonys but i love both Tonys so that is ok. :)I love all the characters in this, Chloe, Jack, Tony,Michelle & Emily feels like a great girlfriend for him!
7/29/2011 c1 crazy424
I want you to continue pls. 24 & NCIS are 2 of my favourite shows. I'm so happy i found this story! Every body is in it, even McGee. lol
I want you to continue pls. 24 & NCIS are 2 of my favourite shows. I'm so happy i found this story! Every body is in it, even McGee. lol
7/29/2011 c8 AlmeidaFluff
Tony smiled, "You're crazy, Em,"
"You're just figuring that out," She replied, closing her eyes, feeling herself drift off.
LOL. Emily IS a cute, slightly crazy character. I like when she calls Tony "DiNozzo." It lessens the confusion of the two Tonys.
Tony smiled, "You're crazy, Em,"
"You're just figuring that out," She replied, closing her eyes, feeling herself drift off.
LOL. Emily IS a cute, slightly crazy character. I like when she calls Tony "DiNozzo." It lessens the confusion of the two Tonys.
7/29/2011 c9 michelle-fan
Great chapter! I love that this story is very exciting!:D
I hope´they can find the person who did it!:D
Update soon!:D
Great chapter! I love that this story is very exciting!:D
I hope´they can find the person who did it!:D
Update soon!:D
7/28/2011 c7 AlmeidaFluff
"So you did have sex!" Emily blamed, a devious smile on her face."
Hahahaha! I love your Emily character. This story is great fun. I'm really enjoying it. ;D
"So you did have sex!" Emily blamed, a devious smile on her face."
Hahahaha! I love your Emily character. This story is great fun. I'm really enjoying it. ;D
7/26/2011 c8 michelle-fan
Great chapter!:D I'm glad their dad is ok!
Really looking forward to more!:D
Great chapter!:D I'm glad their dad is ok!
Really looking forward to more!:D
7/22/2011 c7 Nazanin
oww,poor dad! But the good point is that tony confessed his love for michelle...!
oww,poor dad! But the good point is that tony confessed his love for michelle...!
7/20/2011 c7 michelle-fan
GREAT!:D I feel sorry for them about their dad!:(
I hope everything works out!:D
This story is very good and exciting! Looking forward to wee where you will take it!:D
GREAT!:D I feel sorry for them about their dad!:(
I hope everything works out!:D
This story is very good and exciting! Looking forward to wee where you will take it!:D
7/19/2011 c6 AlmeidaFluff
This was really interesting, the way you bleneded the characters from the two shows together and linked them together through Emily. I really enjoyed it (love both shows). It was funny that two of your main characters had the same name: Tony. Hahahaa! I'll bet that was hard to keep them straight.
Oh, the part with the infected stitches was making me wince in pain! LOL. You really brought it life. Owwww! ;D
This was really interesting, the way you bleneded the characters from the two shows together and linked them together through Emily. I really enjoyed it (love both shows). It was funny that two of your main characters had the same name: Tony. Hahahaa! I'll bet that was hard to keep them straight.
Oh, the part with the infected stitches was making me wince in pain! LOL. You really brought it life. Owwww! ;D
7/18/2011 c6 Nazanin
wow...these guys are cute!i like them,poor jack is alone,as u know im a big fan of tony and michelle and i was wondering if u could right more details about them probably like the way u do for emilie and tony!thanxx
wow...these guys are cute!i like them,poor jack is alone,as u know im a big fan of tony and michelle and i was wondering if u could right more details about them probably like the way u do for emilie and tony!thanxx