for Through The Mirror3/2/2012 c6 Huh
Wheres super sonic :'(
Wheres super sonic :'(
1/25/2012 c6 Ghostkid33
Yay! Another chapter! Finally, things are starting to heat up now, aren't they? I can't wait for more!
Yay! Another chapter! Finally, things are starting to heat up now, aren't they? I can't wait for more!
12/16/2011 c5 
33Scyphi
Yeah, it figures that something like this would choose to appear now and mess things up. :P
Awaiting for more. :)
33ScyphiYeah, it figures that something like this would choose to appear now and mess things up. :P
Awaiting for more. :)
12/6/2011 c5 Ghostkid33
A sad Robotnik? Wow. He seems to lack the self-esteem and perseverence that the evil Robotnik has. And OMG! THAT CREATURE WHO DEFEATED THE CHAOTIX ENFORCERS WAS CHAOS! OH NO! And Tikal is around too...that can't be good. I hope you can update again real soon!
A sad Robotnik? Wow. He seems to lack the self-esteem and perseverence that the evil Robotnik has. And OMG! THAT CREATURE WHO DEFEATED THE CHAOTIX ENFORCERS WAS CHAOS! OH NO! And Tikal is around too...that can't be good. I hope you can update again real soon!
12/6/2011 c1 5Doc. Dump
Damn, ever heard of grammar and spelling? This story sucks huge balls. I could write a better fic blind folded. Listen, heed this advice and you will succeed in all your literary endeavors: Add some kinky scenes and gorey action! I hope this pearl of wisdom doesn't fall on deaf ears!
5Doc. DumpDamn, ever heard of grammar and spelling? This story sucks huge balls. I could write a better fic blind folded. Listen, heed this advice and you will succeed in all your literary endeavors: Add some kinky scenes and gorey action! I hope this pearl of wisdom doesn't fall on deaf ears!
8/9/2011 c4 2956th Reg. Sergeant Epps Hande
Wow, that was some story. I only wish Sonic wasn't all alone. Some of his friends getting here would be nice.
2956th Reg. Sergeant Epps HandeWow, that was some story. I only wish Sonic wasn't all alone. Some of his friends getting here would be nice.
8/9/2011 c4 DanceDream
I don't know how fast you're able to update, but I sure hope it's FAST! ;D This is great! Kind of weird, but in the way that says this is SO an alternate-universe fic. It's awesome! I can't wait to hear more!
I don't know how fast you're able to update, but I sure hope it's FAST! ;D This is great! Kind of weird, but in the way that says this is SO an alternate-universe fic. It's awesome! I can't wait to hear more!
8/9/2011 c4 3Cstan
This is a really cool story. Reminds me of the Sonic Underground episode in which the tripletts were sent to a different world where Robotnik was good and they were bad.
It seems this Robotnik is lacking in the self-esteem "our" Robotnik is swimming in.
Shadow released Mephiles? And you said GUN was formed shortly before the war? That would mean that the ARK was never invaded and Shadow lived, probably peacefully, before disappearing? being caught? Will he appear later? It would be quiet a shock for Sonic to meet a happy Shadow, wouldn't it?
See you next chapter.
3CstanThis is a really cool story. Reminds me of the Sonic Underground episode in which the tripletts were sent to a different world where Robotnik was good and they were bad.
It seems this Robotnik is lacking in the self-esteem "our" Robotnik is swimming in.
Shadow released Mephiles? And you said GUN was formed shortly before the war? That would mean that the ARK was never invaded and Shadow lived, probably peacefully, before disappearing? being caught? Will he appear later? It would be quiet a shock for Sonic to meet a happy Shadow, wouldn't it?
See you next chapter.
8/8/2011 c4 Ghostkid33
So the anti-version of Sonic makes an appearance! This is way past cool! And I wonder what "Grandmaster" Echidna is up to? I can hardly wait for the next chapter!
So the anti-version of Sonic makes an appearance! This is way past cool! And I wonder what "Grandmaster" Echidna is up to? I can hardly wait for the next chapter!
8/8/2011 c4 VioletAssassin
Okay, I just want to say, this is awesome. You, my friend, have a gift. Is Robotnik going to make his version of Metal Sonic? And do you think you could add Bean? Way past cool!
Okay, I just want to say, this is awesome. You, my friend, have a gift. Is Robotnik going to make his version of Metal Sonic? And do you think you could add Bean? Way past cool!
7/8/2011 c3 Ultima
Did Sonic go to Reverse-Mobius? I'd like the see Nazo, Scourge, Lien-da, Enerjak, A.D.A.M., Dr. Finitivous, Nicole, Jeffory St. John, Ixis Nargus, Metal Sonic, Tails Doll, Mecha Knuckles, Iron Nicole, Anti-Tails, and Thrash. Nazo is from the Newgrounds flash animation Nazo Unleased. The rest are from the Archie Comics. Noticed I used a bunch of villians execpt Nicole. But in issue 208, the Iron Queen hacked Nicole to become her evil slave. Thus, Nicole became Iron Nicole, and she turned evil. The next issue, however, she turned good again, and Sonic found out Nicole can do a Spin Dash. That was funny. So in this universe, Nicole is evil, but Iron Nicole is good. Will there be any TailsxNicole? That's my favorite pairing even though it's rarely known and there are barely any fanfics of it. Update soon!
Did Sonic go to Reverse-Mobius? I'd like the see Nazo, Scourge, Lien-da, Enerjak, A.D.A.M., Dr. Finitivous, Nicole, Jeffory St. John, Ixis Nargus, Metal Sonic, Tails Doll, Mecha Knuckles, Iron Nicole, Anti-Tails, and Thrash. Nazo is from the Newgrounds flash animation Nazo Unleased. The rest are from the Archie Comics. Noticed I used a bunch of villians execpt Nicole. But in issue 208, the Iron Queen hacked Nicole to become her evil slave. Thus, Nicole became Iron Nicole, and she turned evil. The next issue, however, she turned good again, and Sonic found out Nicole can do a Spin Dash. That was funny. So in this universe, Nicole is evil, but Iron Nicole is good. Will there be any TailsxNicole? That's my favorite pairing even though it's rarely known and there are barely any fanfics of it. Update soon!
7/6/2011 c3 11sonicxjones
Well I'd love to see either Scrouge(as himself) or better yet Silver! MAybe to help Sonic out?
11sonicxjonesWell I'd love to see either Scrouge(as himself) or better yet Silver! MAybe to help Sonic out?
7/6/2011 c3 12Windsurf
Cool idea! I love how much more competent the big bad guys are in the reflected reality than the evil Eggman in the common Sonic dimension. And being such bad boys, the nicknames Sonic gives them will be even more humiliating!
I mean, Eggman's reaction to 'Egghead,' etc. is kind of cheesy; he doesn't seem to mind too much. I get the feeling that the Grandmaster Echidna would be much more insulted and incensed when called Knucklehead, especially since Sonic seems to have a talent for riling up Knuckles.
Your writing is very fast-paced and action-filled, which is great at keeping our attention and interest, but I wish you would write some more peaceful or contemplative scenes. You know, something that can let the audience breathe for a moment, a little like the last scene in this chapter wherein Knuckles dismisses the Chaotix and then thinks about his next step since the first two failed.
Just a suggestion. And now for some praise: you have an excellent blend of action and emotions. Meaning you discuss both how the events and how the characters feel about the events at the same time instead of separating them into different scenes, which would make the writing more disjointed and kind of boring since no one wants to read several paragraphs of solid emotions; they would just skip to the action parts. In this story, I do not skip any parts.
Great job, and I look forward to finding out how Grandmaster Echidna and Sonic get along when face to face, what King Sonic does abouthis good alternate self and what Shadow's up to in the future!
12WindsurfCool idea! I love how much more competent the big bad guys are in the reflected reality than the evil Eggman in the common Sonic dimension. And being such bad boys, the nicknames Sonic gives them will be even more humiliating!
I mean, Eggman's reaction to 'Egghead,' etc. is kind of cheesy; he doesn't seem to mind too much. I get the feeling that the Grandmaster Echidna would be much more insulted and incensed when called Knucklehead, especially since Sonic seems to have a talent for riling up Knuckles.
Your writing is very fast-paced and action-filled, which is great at keeping our attention and interest, but I wish you would write some more peaceful or contemplative scenes. You know, something that can let the audience breathe for a moment, a little like the last scene in this chapter wherein Knuckles dismisses the Chaotix and then thinks about his next step since the first two failed.
Just a suggestion. And now for some praise: you have an excellent blend of action and emotions. Meaning you discuss both how the events and how the characters feel about the events at the same time instead of separating them into different scenes, which would make the writing more disjointed and kind of boring since no one wants to read several paragraphs of solid emotions; they would just skip to the action parts. In this story, I do not skip any parts.
Great job, and I look forward to finding out how Grandmaster Echidna and Sonic get along when face to face, what King Sonic does abouthis good alternate self and what Shadow's up to in the future!