for Fan Fiction, Sex Gods and Single Girls4h ago c50 Tgc
Omg so so cute love the personal experience
Omg so so cute love the personal experience
6h ago c59 Rachel Garber
I can't belive I read this far and forgot that I read this far, cause I totally forgot that they showered together, hmmm what does that mean? Nothing was familiar until I got to this chapter, wow, holy hell, I recognized nothing from ch 56 on, wow, weird.
I can't belive I read this far and forgot that I read this far, cause I totally forgot that they showered together, hmmm what does that mean? Nothing was familiar until I got to this chapter, wow, holy hell, I recognized nothing from ch 56 on, wow, weird.
7h ago c58 rachel garber
that was hot, and adorable, I love his shyness, just reminds me of someone we know, lol, great ch. we know he is going to tell her he loves her, worth the wait and suspense,
that was hot, and adorable, I love his shyness, just reminds me of someone we know, lol, great ch. we know he is going to tell her he loves her, worth the wait and suspense,
9h ago c50 An
Oooohhh so cute! Happy aniversary!
Oooohhh so cute! Happy aniversary!
5/20 c40 Tgc
Love this chapter!
Love this chapter!
5/20 c56 rachel Garber
Forgot that I read this, I have to figure out where I left off, forgot to write it down or where I put it if I did, great chapter to read (again)
Forgot that I read this, I have to figure out where I left off, forgot to write it down or where I put it if I did, great chapter to read (again)
5/20 c61 goodgirl24
Very creative idea a story within a story. Can not wait for the next chapter. Any more bimbos on the loose? Bella needs to show off her back bone some.
Very creative idea a story within a story. Can not wait for the next chapter. Any more bimbos on the loose? Bella needs to show off her back bone some.
5/20 c61 kelly
I love this story :)
I love this story :)
5/20 c34 raa15473
Hello! Yes...I am a lurker...of stories, that is. Before reading this chapter (I have loved every chapter before this one, so you know!), I was figuratively jumping up and down with giddy clapping hands (a characteristic of mine kept behind closed doors or in front of my family who already know I'm nuts) in anticipation of the chaos that was bound to ensue at the BBQ. Oh Man! You did not let me down! I was laughing so hard that I DID have to take a pee pee break! LMAO I wanted to let you know that the story so far is AWESOME! Well, back to reading I go. YOU ARE HA-HA-LARIOUS!
Hello! Yes...I am a lurker...of stories, that is. Before reading this chapter (I have loved every chapter before this one, so you know!), I was figuratively jumping up and down with giddy clapping hands (a characteristic of mine kept behind closed doors or in front of my family who already know I'm nuts) in anticipation of the chaos that was bound to ensue at the BBQ. Oh Man! You did not let me down! I was laughing so hard that I DID have to take a pee pee break! LMAO I wanted to let you know that the story so far is AWESOME! Well, back to reading I go. YOU ARE HA-HA-LARIOUS!
55/20 c25 Guest
Hi,
I've been reading this story for the past couple of days (I'm sorry I haven't had time to review!) and although I'm only up to chapter 26 I'm loving it so far. I been cracking up laughing since though. I've had to ensure that I'm quiet so that my family don't think that I'm mad )
can't wait to read the rest
Reader
Hi,
I've been reading this story for the past couple of days (I'm sorry I haven't had time to review!) and although I'm only up to chapter 26 I'm loving it so far. I been cracking up laughing since though. I've had to ensure that I'm quiet so that my family don't think that I'm mad )
can't wait to read the rest
Reader
5/19 c61 NikkiBabie4
LMAO! How could I forget about scatter brained Renee. Yeah I definately need some Renee/Edward face to face time in my life.
LMAO! How could I forget about scatter brained Renee. Yeah I definately need some Renee/Edward face to face time in my life.
5/19 c61 Cory5300
I had wondered what happened to the outtake, but figured there was a mixup somewhere. What a wonderful treat to find that you posted it instead.
I enjoyed the nugget of conversation between Edward and Renee. I must say that the conversation I am really looking forward to is the one with Esme regarding the Dartmouth sweatshirt.
Thank you for sharing more of your story.
Cory
I had wondered what happened to the outtake, but figured there was a mixup somewhere. What a wonderful treat to find that you posted it instead.
I enjoyed the nugget of conversation between Edward and Renee. I must say that the conversation I am really looking forward to is the one with Esme regarding the Dartmouth sweatshirt.
Thank you for sharing more of your story.
Cory