for Fan Fiction, Sex Gods and Single Girls5/20 c34 raa15473
Hello! Yes...I am a lurker...of stories, that is. Before reading this chapter (I have loved every chapter before this one, so you know!), I was figuratively jumping up and down with giddy clapping hands (a characteristic of mine kept behind closed doors or in front of my family who already know I'm nuts) in anticipation of the chaos that was bound to ensue at the BBQ. Oh Man! You did not let me down! I was laughing so hard that I DID have to take a pee pee break! LMAO I wanted to let you know that the story so far is AWESOME! Well, back to reading I go. YOU ARE HA-HA-LARIOUS!
Hello! Yes...I am a lurker...of stories, that is. Before reading this chapter (I have loved every chapter before this one, so you know!), I was figuratively jumping up and down with giddy clapping hands (a characteristic of mine kept behind closed doors or in front of my family who already know I'm nuts) in anticipation of the chaos that was bound to ensue at the BBQ. Oh Man! You did not let me down! I was laughing so hard that I DID have to take a pee pee break! LMAO I wanted to let you know that the story so far is AWESOME! Well, back to reading I go. YOU ARE HA-HA-LARIOUS!
5/20 c25 Guest
Hi,
I've been reading this story for the past couple of days (I'm sorry I haven't had time to review!) and although I'm only up to chapter 26 I'm loving it so far. I been cracking up laughing since though. I've had to ensure that I'm quiet so that my family don't think that I'm mad )
can't wait to read the rest
Reader
Hi,
I've been reading this story for the past couple of days (I'm sorry I haven't had time to review!) and although I'm only up to chapter 26 I'm loving it so far. I been cracking up laughing since though. I've had to ensure that I'm quiet so that my family don't think that I'm mad )
can't wait to read the rest
Reader
5/19 c61 NikkiBabie4
LMAO! How could I forget about scatter brained Renee. Yeah I definately need some Renee/Edward face to face time in my life.
LMAO! How could I forget about scatter brained Renee. Yeah I definately need some Renee/Edward face to face time in my life.
5/19 c61 Cory5300
I had wondered what happened to the outtake, but figured there was a mixup somewhere. What a wonderful treat to find that you posted it instead.
I enjoyed the nugget of conversation between Edward and Renee. I must say that the conversation I am really looking forward to is the one with Esme regarding the Dartmouth sweatshirt.
Thank you for sharing more of your story.
Cory
I had wondered what happened to the outtake, but figured there was a mixup somewhere. What a wonderful treat to find that you posted it instead.
I enjoyed the nugget of conversation between Edward and Renee. I must say that the conversation I am really looking forward to is the one with Esme regarding the Dartmouth sweatshirt.
Thank you for sharing more of your story.
Cory
5/17 c61 amybelikov1
Ok I must say wow it probably took me a week to read all the story so fr..you know with kids,school and husband but I just love your story..I mean who would have thought that half of the characters read bella's story and the sexy hunky Edward ..just wow
Well loved the whole conversation between rennee and edward and I loved it so much that I shared your story with my twin sis an she loved it too can't wait for ur next update... toddless your new fan
Ok I must say wow it probably took me a week to read all the story so fr..you know with kids,school and husband but I just love your story..I mean who would have thought that half of the characters read bella's story and the sexy hunky Edward ..just wow
Well loved the whole conversation between rennee and edward and I loved it so much that I shared your story with my twin sis an she loved it too can't wait for ur next update... toddless your new fan
5/17 c4 Kene
Totally just sang to Mr. Big Stuff lol
Totally just sang to Mr. Big Stuff lol
5/16 c61 
24IThinkINeededThat
Okay *giggling* what with all the writing and publishing of my own work that I have been doing over the last year, I am like 30 chapters behind on this story. I wasn't originally planning on reading today, but I am so glad i did! OMG where do I start? No, wait. This was a great outtake/conversation. But the best part was Edward's cockiness followed by:"So, I'm just wondering…are you having sex with my daughter?" Edward nearly swallowed his tongue. (ROFLMAO I love that! Especially as just few seconds later when Edward is able to foist her on Bella she never even thinks to mention she asked such a question. Loving this Renee!)
I so need to find the time to pick up where I left off... I think it was during Edward's Labor Day celebration...
24IThinkINeededThatOkay *giggling* what with all the writing and publishing of my own work that I have been doing over the last year, I am like 30 chapters behind on this story. I wasn't originally planning on reading today, but I am so glad i did! OMG where do I start? No, wait. This was a great outtake/conversation. But the best part was Edward's cockiness followed by:"So, I'm just wondering…are you having sex with my daughter?" Edward nearly swallowed his tongue. (ROFLMAO I love that! Especially as just few seconds later when Edward is able to foist her on Bella she never even thinks to mention she asked such a question. Loving this Renee!)
I so need to find the time to pick up where I left off... I think it was during Edward's Labor Day celebration...