for Fan Fiction, Sex Gods and Single Girls9/30/2012 c43 mrsm0803
Oh, man. Are you going to have Bella do that thing where she wraps her arms around her middle and folds in on herself? That breaks my heart. I hope she doesn't let the glamazons ruin her confidence. Ai, ai, ai ... Edward. Worlds colliding.
Edwards dream is pretty interesting! He should start writing down notes when he wakes. You never know .. He could turn it into a worldwide best seller that spawns a cultural phenomenon that discovers the hottest guy alive and becomes the inspiration for Fanfiction ... Oh, wait ...
LMAO!
Oh, man. Are you going to have Bella do that thing where she wraps her arms around her middle and folds in on herself? That breaks my heart. I hope she doesn't let the glamazons ruin her confidence. Ai, ai, ai ... Edward. Worlds colliding.
Edwards dream is pretty interesting! He should start writing down notes when he wakes. You never know .. He could turn it into a worldwide best seller that spawns a cultural phenomenon that discovers the hottest guy alive and becomes the inspiration for Fanfiction ... Oh, wait ...
LMAO!
9/30/2012 c43 Twi-Holic68
Dun dun dun! So the sisters... yikes this is going to be fun...not! Poor Eddie not wanting that part of his life effecting Bella and the Bella's own self-esteem issues...not good... But then Bella just may surprise me!
Then Renee and all her stuff...I was sure she was asking about the massive peen in Eddie's pants just like Eddie was!
I can't wait to see what happens!
Congratulates on all the reviews... how could you doubt it being that popular...everywhere I look it is on someones fav list!
Dun dun dun! So the sisters... yikes this is going to be fun...not! Poor Eddie not wanting that part of his life effecting Bella and the Bella's own self-esteem issues...not good... But then Bella just may surprise me!
Then Renee and all her stuff...I was sure she was asking about the massive peen in Eddie's pants just like Eddie was!
I can't wait to see what happens!
Congratulates on all the reviews... how could you doubt it being that popular...everywhere I look it is on someones fav list!
9/30/2012 c43 
5MeFromMars
Oh no! Poor Bella! Can't wait to find out what Edward will do about that situation ;)
5MeFromMarsOh no! Poor Bella! Can't wait to find out what Edward will do about that situation ;)
9/30/2012 c43 fireagate
Loved the ogling of organs and the coffee spilling :) And Domme Enforcer Barbie update soon.
Loved the ogling of organs and the coffee spilling :) And Domme Enforcer Barbie update soon.
9/30/2012 c43 jwevans
You are so funny and the characters are funny and very sweet, especially E & B. I can't wait for more. Thank you for writing.
You are so funny and the characters are funny and very sweet, especially E & B. I can't wait for more. Thank you for writing.
9/30/2012 c43 nix69
Walk out on him Bella! He is just a guilty man-whore! You deserve better than someone who has been ridden by most of the female population of Seattle!
Walk out on him Bella! He is just a guilty man-whore! You deserve better than someone who has been ridden by most of the female population of Seattle!
9/30/2012 c43 Talia
...Bella knows Eddie is/was a player, what you all should be worried about is what will happen when she finds out what Edward is reading.
...Bella knows Eddie is/was a player, what you all should be worried about is what will happen when she finds out what Edward is reading.
9/30/2012 c43 Cynisca
Poor Edward! Can he ever escape his past? Hopefully Bella takes it in stride and comes to his rescue! Looking forward to what's next. I have a few theories of course ;) Cyn
Poor Edward! Can he ever escape his past? Hopefully Bella takes it in stride and comes to his rescue! Looking forward to what's next. I have a few theories of course ;) Cyn
9/30/2012 c43 Canyaceme
I love getting update for this Fic. You write with such delightful, sometimes sutle humor that I realize I'm actually smiling! Domme Enforcer Barbie, huh? Maybe Bella should show her domme side and take charge of the situation since Edward is a little afraid of what's going to happen next. As they say, your past always comes back to bite you in the ass!
I love getting update for this Fic. You write with such delightful, sometimes sutle humor that I realize I'm actually smiling! Domme Enforcer Barbie, huh? Maybe Bella should show her domme side and take charge of the situation since Edward is a little afraid of what's going to happen next. As they say, your past always comes back to bite you in the ass!
9/30/2012 c43 AllyVera
We all knew that Edward's past would catch up to him somehow.. but Bella has known about that already and she hasn't been put off - lets see how she deals with it next chapter shall we?
I can see a very interesting time coming ahead ;) As always - loved the chapter - and I love the new (or the real) Edward - I loved the old "assholish" one too, but this one is sweet :)
Until next time, *hugs* AV xo
We all knew that Edward's past would catch up to him somehow.. but Bella has known about that already and she hasn't been put off - lets see how she deals with it next chapter shall we?
I can see a very interesting time coming ahead ;) As always - loved the chapter - and I love the new (or the real) Edward - I loved the old "assholish" one too, but this one is sweet :)
Until next time, *hugs* AV xo
9/30/2012 c43 naughtynati
"And so, with thoughts of sexual stimulation while exercising his imagination, combined with varied self manipulation, Edward brought himself to intense ejaculation. Twice." - That was way to textbook for a Sex God...the man needs to getting laid, and I mean NOW! And poor 24 year old Bella needs to be devirginized before she ignites. I'm so looking forward to what Edward thinks about popping her cherry...please add a side dish of humor to his freak out :)
Nati
"And so, with thoughts of sexual stimulation while exercising his imagination, combined with varied self manipulation, Edward brought himself to intense ejaculation. Twice." - That was way to textbook for a Sex God...the man needs to getting laid, and I mean NOW! And poor 24 year old Bella needs to be devirginized before she ignites. I'm so looking forward to what Edward thinks about popping her cherry...please add a side dish of humor to his freak out :)
Nati
9/30/2012 c43 GottaLoveFanFiction
Your right it would happen and all the time, Seattle or Chicago I think, he has girls ever where. That will be tough for Bella. Wonder what Edward is thinking.
Your right it would happen and all the time, Seattle or Chicago I think, he has girls ever where. That will be tough for Bella. Wonder what Edward is thinking.