for Fan Fiction, Sex Gods and Single Girls9/29/2012 c10 MelsTwilight
Haha! I love the Eiffel Tower keychain was talking to her! And she said "Eiff off"
I shall be saying that from now on, definately, lol
Watch out Belllaaaaa... He's COMING for you, or he will be ;)
Loving this story so much xox
Haha! I love the Eiffel Tower keychain was talking to her! And she said "Eiff off"
I shall be saying that from now on, definately, lol
Watch out Belllaaaaa... He's COMING for you, or he will be ;)
Loving this story so much xox
9/29/2012 c42 
5MeFromMars
You can't imagine how often your chapters left me laughing, squealing or just completely baffled! Especially the revelations about all those fan-fic readers...I had my suspicions about Alice, but I definitely didn't expect the rest of them to be reading Bella's stories. Mostly Emmett surprised me ;) Then of course the slowly moving romance between Bella and Edward that finally led to that definitely swoon-worthy kiss! I'm so excited about the date and can't wait for the next chapter.
Although I'm still quite scared about Edward telling Bella about him being STARDUSTED. I don't know I would react if I'd find out he'd known all along...but I really hope she'll understand and won't be TOO mad. At least not for long ;)
I absolutely loved the barbecue and everything that happened. Everyone found someone to take home ;) Also, I like the fact that your James doesn't seem to be the completely bad guy here. What a nice twist that he's with Jane! The playlist was amazing and fit just perfectly :)
I often had to laugh at your funny name-twistings. I especially liked "Jefferson Rawbone", I have no idea why ;) The fan-fic-within-fan-fic is truly amazing, you're so creative!
Anyway, I'll end my rambling by saying that I have enjoyed reading FFSGSG immensely up until now, I really like your style of writing and the "one-of-a-kind-storyline" you made up. Please update soon! :)
5MeFromMarsYou can't imagine how often your chapters left me laughing, squealing or just completely baffled! Especially the revelations about all those fan-fic readers...I had my suspicions about Alice, but I definitely didn't expect the rest of them to be reading Bella's stories. Mostly Emmett surprised me ;) Then of course the slowly moving romance between Bella and Edward that finally led to that definitely swoon-worthy kiss! I'm so excited about the date and can't wait for the next chapter.
Although I'm still quite scared about Edward telling Bella about him being STARDUSTED. I don't know I would react if I'd find out he'd known all along...but I really hope she'll understand and won't be TOO mad. At least not for long ;)
I absolutely loved the barbecue and everything that happened. Everyone found someone to take home ;) Also, I like the fact that your James doesn't seem to be the completely bad guy here. What a nice twist that he's with Jane! The playlist was amazing and fit just perfectly :)
I often had to laugh at your funny name-twistings. I especially liked "Jefferson Rawbone", I have no idea why ;) The fan-fic-within-fan-fic is truly amazing, you're so creative!
Anyway, I'll end my rambling by saying that I have enjoyed reading FFSGSG immensely up until now, I really like your style of writing and the "one-of-a-kind-storyline" you made up. Please update soon! :)
9/29/2012 c42 chicalicious
Gah! I am so excited about the date but I'm also holding onto a little reserve of nerves and anxiety for when Edward reveals the truth about the fanfic secret that everyone except Bella knows.
-C
Gah! I am so excited about the date but I'm also holding onto a little reserve of nerves and anxiety for when Edward reveals the truth about the fanfic secret that everyone except Bella knows.
-C
9/29/2012 c41 chicalicious
INCREDIBLE FIRST KISS! I am just like Bella, I would've been cataloging the entire event so I would never forget a second of it. I love that he already wants to go to breakfast tomorrow morning, its kind of a bummer that she needs to spend time with Angela, lol.
-C
INCREDIBLE FIRST KISS! I am just like Bella, I would've been cataloging the entire event so I would never forget a second of it. I love that he already wants to go to breakfast tomorrow morning, its kind of a bummer that she needs to spend time with Angela, lol.
-C
9/29/2012 c42 Vanessa Cook
I have just found your story and am really enjoying it! Its so creative its amazing, ive just spent the last 2 days reading it non stop even on my phone whilst at work! Your story leaves me smiling and and some point laughing out loud and people giving me strange looks :) thank you for sharing can not wait for a new update...no pressure :)
I have just found your story and am really enjoying it! Its so creative its amazing, ive just spent the last 2 days reading it non stop even on my phone whilst at work! Your story leaves me smiling and and some point laughing out loud and people giving me strange looks :) thank you for sharing can not wait for a new update...no pressure :)
9/29/2012 c42 garddita17
These two really are cute. It will be a shame if Bella gets upset at Edward for discovering her fanfic and not saying anything sooner. If she thinks clearly, she will realize that being angry at him would be a bit hypocritical. She is writing about him secretly afterall. I just hope when he tells her, it doesn't derail all the progress they have made.
These two really are cute. It will be a shame if Bella gets upset at Edward for discovering her fanfic and not saying anything sooner. If she thinks clearly, she will realize that being angry at him would be a bit hypocritical. She is writing about him secretly afterall. I just hope when he tells her, it doesn't derail all the progress they have made.
9/29/2012 c2 smileyface12797
I laughed so hard when E was walking across the street barefoot while going on his rant.
I laughed so hard when E was walking across the street barefoot while going on his rant.
9/28/2012 c7 MelsTwilight
Jefferson Rawbone and Pat Robinson, Ha!
I laughed so hard at that! Your warning for plastic sheeting and tissues was definately needed.
I am loving this story so far, great work.
xox
Jefferson Rawbone and Pat Robinson, Ha!
I laughed so hard at that! Your warning for plastic sheeting and tissues was definately needed.
I am loving this story so far, great work.
xox
9/28/2012 c42 Twi207
I absolutely adore this story! Can I please have your edward for my own? He is so sexy! I promise not to hurt him...much. ;) I await the next chapter with baited breath. You are awesome! Keep up the wonderful writing like you have to try. :D
I absolutely adore this story! Can I please have your edward for my own? He is so sexy! I promise not to hurt him...much. ;) I await the next chapter with baited breath. You are awesome! Keep up the wonderful writing like you have to try. :D
9/28/2012 c38 letsjustdance
Oh yes, glaze me baby! Loving the whole story, but had to review since I get Edward-glazed! *hugs*
Oh yes, glaze me baby! Loving the whole story, but had to review since I get Edward-glazed! *hugs*
9/27/2012 c34 2Holly-Ro5
Oh dear sweet holy hell, I just couldn't stop laughing at the end of this chapter. Everything is just so hilarious. I was pretty certain Alice was Star-A-Holic but I was completely oblivious to Emmett being Stargazer91. This is "totes awesome" as would say Jess ! I'm sure Rosalie is also reading it. Maybe she's the one delivering only small reviews every time, I don't know. I can really picture her as this particular reader. I'll see !
Moving on to the next chapter, I can't wait to know what Bella overheard of the conversation. Or maybe she's just coming to complain about James giving her the creeps !
2Holly-Ro5Oh dear sweet holy hell, I just couldn't stop laughing at the end of this chapter. Everything is just so hilarious. I was pretty certain Alice was Star-A-Holic but I was completely oblivious to Emmett being Stargazer91. This is "totes awesome" as would say Jess ! I'm sure Rosalie is also reading it. Maybe she's the one delivering only small reviews every time, I don't know. I can really picture her as this particular reader. I'll see !
Moving on to the next chapter, I can't wait to know what Bella overheard of the conversation. Or maybe she's just coming to complain about James giving her the creeps !
9/27/2012 c42 1BelatedLove
I love this story! I can't wait for the next update. I started reading it two weeks ago and I finally got here! I anxiously await the next beguiling chapter.
1BelatedLoveI love this story! I can't wait for the next update. I started reading it two weeks ago and I finally got here! I anxiously await the next beguiling chapter.
9/27/2012 c42 Cynisca
All caught up now and ready for breakfast! .750 batting average for guessing the reviewers cause I'm 99% sure I was initially wrong about HOT4EC. Still that's way better than most major league guessers! Now that I'm all caught up I guess it's time to click the follow button and wait not so patiently for an update :)
Cyn
All caught up now and ready for breakfast! .750 batting average for guessing the reviewers cause I'm 99% sure I was initially wrong about HOT4EC. Still that's way better than most major league guessers! Now that I'm all caught up I guess it's time to click the follow button and wait not so patiently for an update :)
Cyn
9/27/2012 c40 Cynisca
After last chapter's dancing I decided you got one more chapter for a first kiss. So glad you did it! lol Obviously Edward and Ben never hung out with any of the guys I know because everyone knows Chuck Norris would win even against the Invisible Man and in a cloak of invisiblity. It's just a fact. Only two chapters and I'm all caught up! Cyn
After last chapter's dancing I decided you got one more chapter for a first kiss. So glad you did it! lol Obviously Edward and Ben never hung out with any of the guys I know because everyone knows Chuck Norris would win even against the Invisible Man and in a cloak of invisiblity. It's just a fact. Only two chapters and I'm all caught up! Cyn