for Red and Green9/9/2012 c2 
5spitfirelover
Hey I read Littleton park and of course red and green and I absolutely loved them I would love it if u continued to this story and I know I am a bit late but I still completely love ur stories X) please write more
5spitfireloverHey I read Littleton park and of course red and green and I absolutely loved them I would love it if u continued to this story and I know I am a bit late but I still completely love ur stories X) please write more
5/18/2012 c2 46Chaos Dragon
Wait, what? That's it? Is there going to be more? Please tell me there's going to be more. I really, really need there to be more. It's a really great premise and I really would like to read more.
-cd
46Chaos DragonWait, what? That's it? Is there going to be more? Please tell me there's going to be more. I really, really need there to be more. It's a really great premise and I really would like to read more.
-cd
1/14/2012 c2 Bookwormluver998
Wen are you going to update?:)
Wen are you going to update?:)
11/19/2011 c1 PerfectlyStrange
I really wondering when you are going to update.I really loved the littleton park one and when you said you were going to continue it i was thrilled.Now PLEASE PLEASE Continue.Also i am really curious on what is going to happen next..
I really wondering when you are going to update.I really loved the littleton park one and when you said you were going to continue it i was thrilled.Now PLEASE PLEASE Continue.Also i am really curious on what is going to happen next..
9/5/2011 c1 Sonic321
Wow! I'm impressed. I'm not exactly great at dealing criticism, so instead I'll tell you the parts I liked. Well, I really liked the descriptions of all the scenes that were going on, I liked the dream that occured in Artemis's head, I enjoyed the classic humor of the lovable speedster Kid Flash, and more. So, great job! Keep up the work! :)
Wow! I'm impressed. I'm not exactly great at dealing criticism, so instead I'll tell you the parts I liked. Well, I really liked the descriptions of all the scenes that were going on, I liked the dream that occured in Artemis's head, I enjoyed the classic humor of the lovable speedster Kid Flash, and more. So, great job! Keep up the work! :)
9/5/2011 c1 Guest
freaken hurry up with the new chapter already!
freaken hurry up with the new chapter already!
8/20/2011 c2 A Spirit of the Stars
Oooh, the plot thickens...
This is looking good!Great characterizations and descriptions! Keep up the good work!
PLEASE update soon!
Oooh, the plot thickens...
This is looking good!Great characterizations and descriptions! Keep up the good work!
PLEASE update soon!
8/20/2011 c2 19Black Licorice Addict
You have a really nice flow to this story so far; I'm absolutely loving it! And I enjoyed Littleton Park. Sportsmaster's reference about Wally being a pain for some time makes sense now. Thanks for the update!
19Black Licorice AddictYou have a really nice flow to this story so far; I'm absolutely loving it! And I enjoyed Littleton Park. Sportsmaster's reference about Wally being a pain for some time makes sense now. Thanks for the update!
8/18/2011 c2 9Rowanfall
Yay! You updated! Honestly, I love just about all your Yj stories, so I'm really happy for a multific! This is very well-written and you described everything very well. I especially liked the 'hope blooming in her chest' and the connection with Wally and Red and Green. Well thought-out! Can't wait to see what happens!
Update soon please.
The Rowan of the Fall
(Rowanfall)
9RowanfallYay! You updated! Honestly, I love just about all your Yj stories, so I'm really happy for a multific! This is very well-written and you described everything very well. I especially liked the 'hope blooming in her chest' and the connection with Wally and Red and Green. Well thought-out! Can't wait to see what happens!
Update soon please.
The Rowan of the Fall
(Rowanfall)
8/18/2011 c2 4yob3
Awesome story thus far! I loved how you referenced Littelton at the very beginning of Artemises dream! Its like the memories are trying to break through the barriers Dubbilex (dont you just love his name?) put up. Maybe when shes about to kill Wally, theyll break through for both of them
4yob3Awesome story thus far! I loved how you referenced Littelton at the very beginning of Artemises dream! Its like the memories are trying to break through the barriers Dubbilex (dont you just love his name?) put up. Maybe when shes about to kill Wally, theyll break through for both of them