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32OneWingedHeron53
Hmm...Banish traps all over the place, strange circular device at the back...Kind of obvious that it is the Orphan's Cradle...I think.
Anyways, nice fic. I always wanted to try something like this, involving the rose and the two.
Curious Note: At that scene where Firion lost his rose to Lightning. Didn't it seem like that Lightning was a bit too...I don't know, happy to talk to Firion?
Happy probably isn't that right word, but you get the idea...
32OneWingedHeron53Hmm...Banish traps all over the place, strange circular device at the back...Kind of obvious that it is the Orphan's Cradle...I think.
Anyways, nice fic. I always wanted to try something like this, involving the rose and the two.
Curious Note: At that scene where Firion lost his rose to Lightning. Didn't it seem like that Lightning was a bit too...I don't know, happy to talk to Firion?
Happy probably isn't that right word, but you get the idea...
7/5/2011 c1 The Devil Butterfly
Aww that was so lovely! Really liked it though it was so bittersweet *Firion I wanna hug you!*
Are you ever going to continue more of Because you are here?
(and skimming through your profile i see you have ideas for more hopurai fics really hope you find the time to do those, especially that one Age change/au story XD i'm most curious to know whether it will have a reverse age flip between hope and light)
anywayz, i so tottes agree about Firion looking like an older Hope with brown golden eyes rather than the turquoise green Hope's got going XD
and I SO LOVED that cutscene too that I'm now a Firion/Light shipper LOL, sadly there aren't ENOUGH fics of these two XD
okay gonna stop talking your ear off now
nice one shot hope to see more from you soon
Alpha out!
Aww that was so lovely! Really liked it though it was so bittersweet *Firion I wanna hug you!*
Are you ever going to continue more of Because you are here?
(and skimming through your profile i see you have ideas for more hopurai fics really hope you find the time to do those, especially that one Age change/au story XD i'm most curious to know whether it will have a reverse age flip between hope and light)
anywayz, i so tottes agree about Firion looking like an older Hope with brown golden eyes rather than the turquoise green Hope's got going XD
and I SO LOVED that cutscene too that I'm now a Firion/Light shipper LOL, sadly there aren't ENOUGH fics of these two XD
okay gonna stop talking your ear off now
nice one shot hope to see more from you soon
Alpha out!
6/28/2011 c1 2Saiyakupo
That is such a beautiful and adorable fanfiction! I love it so much 3333
One shots people make are so cute! Sometimes the sad endings that tug at your heart make you desperate to see them together more, so therefore that's one thing that makes your story so great! ;3; 3333 I love it. Great writing! ^w^
2SaiyakupoThat is such a beautiful and adorable fanfiction! I love it so much 3333
One shots people make are so cute! Sometimes the sad endings that tug at your heart make you desperate to see them together more, so therefore that's one thing that makes your story so great! ;3; 3333 I love it. Great writing! ^w^
6/24/2011 c1 f.hidaka
That was really well written.
It always made my heart hurt to know that the ten warriors that were left could never remember their other companios (who died in order to stop all that manikin infestation and all...). And waht made me hurt most was that part that Firion said to Tidus that something about that pink manikin was familiar to him.
You really portraied his and Cecil's feelings very well. Longing for their lost comrades and all. That kind of fic (about their lost memories) was what I was searching thesse days!
Very well done! Congrats for the grat fic.
p.s: I'm not a native english speaker, so I apologize in advance for any mistakes regarding spelling and grammar... haha...
That was really well written.
It always made my heart hurt to know that the ten warriors that were left could never remember their other companios (who died in order to stop all that manikin infestation and all...). And waht made me hurt most was that part that Firion said to Tidus that something about that pink manikin was familiar to him.
You really portraied his and Cecil's feelings very well. Longing for their lost comrades and all. That kind of fic (about their lost memories) was what I was searching thesse days!
Very well done! Congrats for the grat fic.
p.s: I'm not a native english speaker, so I apologize in advance for any mistakes regarding spelling and grammar... haha...
6/22/2011 c1 3HopelessRomanticist
...wow. That was really, really well done. Characterisation was good, emotions conveyed well, everything was excellent. Congrats on such an awesome first Dissidia fic.
HR
3HopelessRomanticist...wow. That was really, really well done. Characterisation was good, emotions conveyed well, everything was excellent. Congrats on such an awesome first Dissidia fic.
HR