for Because of a Scar5/20 c20 Nissa-Cullen
Sound like they had a great time. She barely made it to the car so she was definitely worn out. I'm glad she had fun though. They deserve some happy time together. I have a feeling some bad stuff is fixing to start happening so they need some good stuff first.
Sound like they had a great time. She barely made it to the car so she was definitely worn out. I'm glad she had fun though. They deserve some happy time together. I have a feeling some bad stuff is fixing to start happening so they need some good stuff first.
5/19 c20 WhitlocksHevyn
Absolutely loved Bella introducing herself after she saw the ice skates, that was awesome.. Love the way your Jasper is showing her how to be confident and try things she would normally shy away from because of her clumsiness.. Enjoyed the jumps and spins he did for her as well, can picture it in my head and I find that mental image rather yummy..
The bracelet with his crest was a perfect gift and him stating it was the only one there would ever be gave me an attack of the warm fuzzies.. Am looking forward to what happens next..
Sorry this review is so late.. RL has been rather bizarre and I am just now playing catch up with everything.. Til next time.. xoxo
Absolutely loved Bella introducing herself after she saw the ice skates, that was awesome.. Love the way your Jasper is showing her how to be confident and try things she would normally shy away from because of her clumsiness.. Enjoyed the jumps and spins he did for her as well, can picture it in my head and I find that mental image rather yummy..
The bracelet with his crest was a perfect gift and him stating it was the only one there would ever be gave me an attack of the warm fuzzies.. Am looking forward to what happens next..
Sorry this review is so late.. RL has been rather bizarre and I am just now playing catch up with everything.. Til next time.. xoxo
5/16 c20 
9Fleur24
I LOVe how he took her ice skating for her birthday and then gave her a bracelet with his family crest on it.
9Fleur24I LOVe how he took her ice skating for her birthday and then gave her a bracelet with his family crest on it.
5/12 c20 Brazos
I know I've been commenting alot, but I just wanted to wish everyone Happy Mother's day. Take care of our special ladies and show them how much we care.
I know I've been commenting alot, but I just wanted to wish everyone Happy Mother's day. Take care of our special ladies and show them how much we care.
5/13 c20 beth626
awesome! so much better than a bday party...she's just not the type for a big or small hoopla
awesome! so much better than a bday party...she's just not the type for a big or small hoopla
5/12 c5 2ericzmic
Ok, first off I don't review too often, but damn you should really put a warning at the beginning of this chapter to 'not drink or eat in front of computer while reading'. That shit was funny. Thanks I needed that laugh.
2ericzmicOk, first off I don't review too often, but damn you should really put a warning at the beginning of this chapter to 'not drink or eat in front of computer while reading'. That shit was funny. Thanks I needed that laugh.
5/12 c20 NatalieLynn
That was the perfect end to her special day! You're much better at coming up with creative, fun and fitting ideas for celebrations than Alice.
That was the perfect end to her special day! You're much better at coming up with creative, fun and fitting ideas for celebrations than Alice.
5/1 c20 Alliesmom07
I don't usually read in progress stories (because of slow updates), but I am glad I stumbled onto this one. Your story flows very nicely and it's written well. Some people try to hard to seem...cool, or modern and they go overboard with it; your story is current without being annoyingly "hip". I like your Bella's backbone, she's tough without being a bitch and Alice and Edward are wonderfully vile. You love to hate them. I really hate Alice, but I'm a bit ambivalent about Edward-maybe. I think he's somewhat a victim of his situation and lack of maturity, whereas Alice is horrible. I love Jasper, Peter, Charlotte, Emmett and Rose. Peter's hilarious and I'd love to have a friend like him.I'm one of the lucky ones and have my very own Jasper, my husband would do anything for me. Anyhow, I digress. I love your story and keep updating!
I don't usually read in progress stories (because of slow updates), but I am glad I stumbled onto this one. Your story flows very nicely and it's written well. Some people try to hard to seem...cool, or modern and they go overboard with it; your story is current without being annoyingly "hip". I like your Bella's backbone, she's tough without being a bitch and Alice and Edward are wonderfully vile. You love to hate them. I really hate Alice, but I'm a bit ambivalent about Edward-maybe. I think he's somewhat a victim of his situation and lack of maturity, whereas Alice is horrible. I love Jasper, Peter, Charlotte, Emmett and Rose. Peter's hilarious and I'd love to have a friend like him.I'm one of the lucky ones and have my very own Jasper, my husband would do anything for me. Anyhow, I digress. I love your story and keep updating!
4/30 c20 hellothreeheads
Wow. This story is fantastic! I only started reading this two hours ago and didn't stop until I finished it! Bella's birthday was fantastic and I really like how you've made her stronger than SM's version of her. I think it makes the story more interesting if she stands on her own two feet and put Edward in his place. Her friends are awesome - I like this Rosalie! Alice is a major cow, I kinda hope she gets what's coming to her. Such a variation from the book, but the overall story line is amazing and I will be waiting for the next chapter - no matter how long it takes!
Wow. This story is fantastic! I only started reading this two hours ago and didn't stop until I finished it! Bella's birthday was fantastic and I really like how you've made her stronger than SM's version of her. I think it makes the story more interesting if she stands on her own two feet and put Edward in his place. Her friends are awesome - I like this Rosalie! Alice is a major cow, I kinda hope she gets what's coming to her. Such a variation from the book, but the overall story line is amazing and I will be waiting for the next chapter - no matter how long it takes!
4/29 c20 TwistedNeiviv
Awwww! What a great birthday! I get a kick out of Charlie. :) Loved the cupcake and hot chocolate. And the crest.
Awwww! What a great birthday! I get a kick out of Charlie. :) Loved the cupcake and hot chocolate. And the crest.