for Sin & Innocence5/18 c26 
14TheUnderStudy
Wow what a sequel! This was kickass and sweet and loving and funny and dangerous and just all around badass
14TheUnderStudyWow what a sequel! This was kickass and sweet and loving and funny and dangerous and just all around badass
5/16 c20 TheUnderStudy
I had been reading and not reviewing. However, after this last chapter, I had to say something. You know you have written a character well when a reader will weep for their loss. My heart is broken and there is no way to fill the whole in my soul. Yet I just say that this chapter was amazing. So well written and detailed. I loved it, truly. Even with all the parts that made me stop breathing and think I was having a stroke.
I had been reading and not reviewing. However, after this last chapter, I had to say something. You know you have written a character well when a reader will weep for their loss. My heart is broken and there is no way to fill the whole in my soul. Yet I just say that this chapter was amazing. So well written and detailed. I loved it, truly. Even with all the parts that made me stop breathing and think I was having a stroke.
4/28 c23 PNW Luna
I hope they have a boy and name him after Charlie & Sam, Charles Samuel Cullen?
If Lillith was in Canada, I'm thinking she would have left a trail of dead bodies like bread crumbs on her way back to Seattle...
I hope they have a boy and name him after Charlie & Sam, Charles Samuel Cullen?
If Lillith was in Canada, I'm thinking she would have left a trail of dead bodies like bread crumbs on her way back to Seattle...
4/28 c18 PNW Luna
Jeebus, sounds like they could use some air support, or some drones.
How about some Duddly-Do-Rights? A few Mounties might help save the day...
Jeebus, sounds like they could use some air support, or some drones.
How about some Duddly-Do-Rights? A few Mounties might help save the day...
4/25 c5 SarcasticBimbo
Edward deserved more than just a punch in the nose. He DESERVED all of his crew giving him a beating he would have never forgotten.
Edward deserved more than just a punch in the nose. He DESERVED all of his crew giving him a beating he would have never forgotten.
4/25 c1 1Queen19
My cousin is this smart. At five he could understand another language, his IQ has never been tested though. But sometimes I think that's for the best. :)
1Queen19My cousin is this smart. At five he could understand another language, his IQ has never been tested though. But sometimes I think that's for the best. :)
4/21 c26 hannaha11104
Such a very good sequel! Loved it as much maybe more
Than the first one! Your Edward is just about the most
Perfect man and your constant descriptions of him made
Him also sound like the absolute sexiest man ever! Beautiful
Story loved every minute of both stories I can't wait to read
Your other stories you are an excellent writer!
Melissa
Such a very good sequel! Loved it as much maybe more
Than the first one! Your Edward is just about the most
Perfect man and your constant descriptions of him made
Him also sound like the absolute sexiest man ever! Beautiful
Story loved every minute of both stories I can't wait to read
Your other stories you are an excellent writer!
Melissa
4/13 c26 k1942
Samuel's entry into this world scared hell out of his father, and his grandfather, also! Since they have the perfect replicas of themselves, maybe Bella and Edward should consider him having a vasectomy. The last pregnancy was really hard on Bella! Other than that, life just doesn't get any better than their's. Everyone they care about is happy, healthy and doing what they are good at. Doesn't get any better than that! Thanks again for another wonderful story!
Samuel's entry into this world scared hell out of his father, and his grandfather, also! Since they have the perfect replicas of themselves, maybe Bella and Edward should consider him having a vasectomy. The last pregnancy was really hard on Bella! Other than that, life just doesn't get any better than their's. Everyone they care about is happy, healthy and doing what they are good at. Doesn't get any better than that! Thanks again for another wonderful story!
4/13 c25 k1942
A wonderful Thanksgiving, with everyone they love there with them, except Sam. Edward's toast of thanks was just the best, and when he told them the baby's name, I cried for Sam again. It was beautiful! Kind of like the talk between him and his dad. Stuff like that is priceless!
A wonderful Thanksgiving, with everyone they love there with them, except Sam. Edward's toast of thanks was just the best, and when he told them the baby's name, I cried for Sam again. It was beautiful! Kind of like the talk between him and his dad. Stuff like that is priceless!
4/13 c24 k1942
Breathing huge sigh of relief! So glad that Lilith is no more, and that Edward was the one to assist her to Hell! It was a little scary for a while, but I had faith that Bella would hold her own until her noble hero could get to her! At last, there should be time for peace and quiet and getting ready for the baby. I've been thinking since the last chapter about whether Edward should get the Cullen crest on his bicep, as Bella suggested. I think it would look cool, just like that fourth star he got for Sam.
Breathing huge sigh of relief! So glad that Lilith is no more, and that Edward was the one to assist her to Hell! It was a little scary for a while, but I had faith that Bella would hold her own until her noble hero could get to her! At last, there should be time for peace and quiet and getting ready for the baby. I've been thinking since the last chapter about whether Edward should get the Cullen crest on his bicep, as Bella suggested. I think it would look cool, just like that fourth star he got for Sam.
4/12 c23 k1942
Hope something good happens with Alec and Sarah and little Abby! They are doing a wonderful thing helping out Preacher's neighborhood, with housing and businesses for jobs! It's kind of ironic that Lilith is being sought by both the good guys and the bad guys. Even funnier that neither group cares who gets her as long as she gets caught! As long as Lilith doesn't hurt Bella or Bethy, I don't care what they do to her!
Hope something good happens with Alec and Sarah and little Abby! They are doing a wonderful thing helping out Preacher's neighborhood, with housing and businesses for jobs! It's kind of ironic that Lilith is being sought by both the good guys and the bad guys. Even funnier that neither group cares who gets her as long as she gets caught! As long as Lilith doesn't hurt Bella or Bethy, I don't care what they do to her!