for A weird adventure3/23 c8 Guest
i dont know why, but elita one just rubs me the wrong way...
probably bc i read this story where bayverse optimus fell in love with a human, who later became cybertronian, and ratchet was a total HOLE and brought back elita one just to get rid of her. Almost all the bots turned on her, and when optimus saw elita he acted as if his time with the girl had meant nothing to him. But death had made Elita cold and suckish, so optimus figured out he still loved the no-longer-human girl, killed elita cuz she toally freaked out, threatening to kill the girl, and everything worked out :) (dont remember the name of the story)
but even before reading that, i didnt think much of elita one :/
i dont know why, but elita one just rubs me the wrong way...
probably bc i read this story where bayverse optimus fell in love with a human, who later became cybertronian, and ratchet was a total HOLE and brought back elita one just to get rid of her. Almost all the bots turned on her, and when optimus saw elita he acted as if his time with the girl had meant nothing to him. But death had made Elita cold and suckish, so optimus figured out he still loved the no-longer-human girl, killed elita cuz she toally freaked out, threatening to kill the girl, and everything worked out :) (dont remember the name of the story)
but even before reading that, i didnt think much of elita one :/
9/9/2011 c8 
13Cairistona
Oooooo... Cheerios without sugar! I had some once at camp and I thought they were terrible! O_O Orange juice is awesome, though. :D
This was a sweet chapter! And I like how Peaches and Sideways went off to thank Knockout.
And the inter-universal messaging system was clever! :)
13CairistonaOooooo... Cheerios without sugar! I had some once at camp and I thought they were terrible! O_O Orange juice is awesome, though. :D
This was a sweet chapter! And I like how Peaches and Sideways went off to thank Knockout.
And the inter-universal messaging system was clever! :)
9/3/2011 c7 Cairistona
Nice going! :) Peaches is all safe now! -though not quite back home yet. THat was pretty clever, that she transformed into human form to get free of the restraints! I wouldn't have thought of that! X)
And the two Prime's talking was neat. :)
Good luck with the homework, and happy writting on the last chapter. X)
Nice going! :) Peaches is all safe now! -though not quite back home yet. THat was pretty clever, that she transformed into human form to get free of the restraints! I wouldn't have thought of that! X)
And the two Prime's talking was neat. :)
Good luck with the homework, and happy writting on the last chapter. X)
8/27/2011 c6 Prowls-little-hetalian
annoying younger sibilings, thier worse than the Decepticons I tell you that. update wanted!
annoying younger sibilings, thier worse than the Decepticons I tell you that. update wanted!
8/27/2011 c5 Prowls-little-hetalian
Knock Out will save her and if he= tries to hurt her he will deal with a ** off bondmate Ex-D-con
Knock Out will save her and if he= tries to hurt her he will deal with a ** off bondmate Ex-D-con
8/27/2011 c4 Prowls-little-hetalian
sheesh, lose one annoying pain in the aft and you get two more called MECH and Silas AKA the uneverses biggest pain in the aft
sheesh, lose one annoying pain in the aft and you get two more called MECH and Silas AKA the uneverses biggest pain in the aft
8/27/2011 c3 Prowls-little-hetalian
Silas, you hurt her badly and not only will Sideways get you, I will to
Silas, you hurt her badly and not only will Sideways get you, I will to
8/27/2011 c2 Prowls-little-hetalian
Oh.My.Primus. you made an Decepticon, though adimitdly it IS an ex D-con sing an diesny song. a DIESNY song. I was LOLing soooooo hard. Silas is an aft headed jerk
Oh.My.Primus. you made an Decepticon, though adimitdly it IS an ex D-con sing an diesny song. a DIESNY song. I was LOLing soooooo hard. Silas is an aft headed jerk
8/27/2011 c1 Prowls-little-hetalian
its not short, its longer than some chapters ive read. like the way you did OP
its not short, its longer than some chapters ive read. like the way you did OP
8/27/2011 c6 13Cairistona
YaYhahaha! I knew the holograph guy was Knockout's! :D And I like the "Cybertronian Code of Interplanetary Conflict"; that was cool!
Aw, poor Ratchets, getting stuck with the kids. :)
And that was neat, Knockout and Sideways chatting a bit. I liked that.
Good luck with the chores, homework, and siblings! ;)
13CairistonaYaYhahaha! I knew the holograph guy was Knockout's! :D And I like the "Cybertronian Code of Interplanetary Conflict"; that was cool!
Aw, poor Ratchets, getting stuck with the kids. :)
And that was neat, Knockout and Sideways chatting a bit. I liked that.
Good luck with the chores, homework, and siblings! ;)