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1Vincent Claudius
This has been one of the best KisaIta fanfictions ever! Other than the other ones I read also by you! You rock!
1Vincent ClaudiusThis has been one of the best KisaIta fanfictions ever! Other than the other ones I read also by you! You rock!
2/1 c28 Guest
CUTE! Really liked it c:
CUTE! Really liked it c:
6/11/2012 c5 3Adamantyne
Awww, I wouldn't mind looking after Hidan and Deidara when they're drunk xD
I'm not sure if you do this purposely, but when your character say something you always write "he said/he asked" afterwards. I don't know if this is just your personal style, but usually it isn't necessary because you've indicated beforehand who's talking. Or maybe you could use some other verbs to spice things up. Anyway, just a suggestion :)
3AdamantyneAwww, I wouldn't mind looking after Hidan and Deidara when they're drunk xD
I'm not sure if you do this purposely, but when your character say something you always write "he said/he asked" afterwards. I don't know if this is just your personal style, but usually it isn't necessary because you've indicated beforehand who's talking. Or maybe you could use some other verbs to spice things up. Anyway, just a suggestion :)
6/11/2012 c4 Adamantyne
Gaah! Poor Itachi! Creepy that the guy knows where he works. I really wouldn't know how to handle that.
Gaah! Poor Itachi! Creepy that the guy knows where he works. I really wouldn't know how to handle that.
6/5/2012 c23 May
they mention a few times that Kisame is a bad cook but a few chapters back he made a fantastic breackfast for Itachi and him self, a minor detail in an other wise imaculat story, over all it is one of my all time favorites
they mention a few times that Kisame is a bad cook but a few chapters back he made a fantastic breackfast for Itachi and him self, a minor detail in an other wise imaculat story, over all it is one of my all time favorites
5/25/2012 c28 17Hevith de Zar
Hello, I read you fic in one go and, unlike most of the AU Naruto, I liked it. Of course, I hate the OC and alternate universes, but I felt good management you gave to the plot and the relationship of the leading couple.
I want to tell you have a good time reading my review and if no consistency is that, English is not my mother tongue, so I went to a translator to communicate with you. I have read most, if not all, of your fics KisaIta and are really sweet.
I'm not going to lie, sometimes baffles me that the characters are not entirely in its original character, but the reading is very good because of the care you give from start to finish.
I hope you keep writing more fics KisaIta, and very much regret not being able to comment you all, but did not speak or write English and I can hardly dwell, as I do.
I wish you all the luck in the world. Farewell, Hevith.
17Hevith de ZarHello, I read you fic in one go and, unlike most of the AU Naruto, I liked it. Of course, I hate the OC and alternate universes, but I felt good management you gave to the plot and the relationship of the leading couple.
I want to tell you have a good time reading my review and if no consistency is that, English is not my mother tongue, so I went to a translator to communicate with you. I have read most, if not all, of your fics KisaIta and are really sweet.
I'm not going to lie, sometimes baffles me that the characters are not entirely in its original character, but the reading is very good because of the care you give from start to finish.
I hope you keep writing more fics KisaIta, and very much regret not being able to comment you all, but did not speak or write English and I can hardly dwell, as I do.
I wish you all the luck in the world. Farewell, Hevith.
5/19/2012 c1 3Adamantyne
First of all, is it safe for me to read this? I'm still in part one of the series (season 7 or something) and I just wanted to know if I can read this without being spoiled?
Anyway, um... The relationship between Itachi, Hidan and Deidare seems.. really, really close xD? I'm looking forward to be introduced to Kisame, I like him for some reason xD!
Promising start, though you could've thrown in a couple more mysteries so we've got something to solve :p
3AdamantyneFirst of all, is it safe for me to read this? I'm still in part one of the series (season 7 or something) and I just wanted to know if I can read this without being spoiled?
Anyway, um... The relationship between Itachi, Hidan and Deidare seems.. really, really close xD? I'm looking forward to be introduced to Kisame, I like him for some reason xD!
Promising start, though you could've thrown in a couple more mysteries so we've got something to solve :p
5/16/2012 c28 21Alexa Hiwatari
wow pretty cool really i enjoyed a lot reading you fict! it was fantastic!
21Alexa Hiwatariwow pretty cool really i enjoyed a lot reading you fict! it was fantastic!