for Secret Twin
24/3/2012 c3 flaimingdarkfox
i dont like cliffhangers but i know they grap the readers interest, i cant wait to see what you write next.
i dont like cliffhangers but i know they grap the readers interest, i cant wait to see what you write next.
4/1/2012 c3 Jessica
I really want to see their reunion and their reactions to seeing each other, and it would be funny if they were to go to the same school, and having her dressed in the boys uniform, because she's starting to seriously hate skirts LOL It would also be funny if Ryoma's teammates were second guessing themselves when hey see Ryoma's feminine twin. XD
I really want to see their reunion and their reactions to seeing each other, and it would be funny if they were to go to the same school, and having her dressed in the boys uniform, because she's starting to seriously hate skirts LOL It would also be funny if Ryoma's teammates were second guessing themselves when hey see Ryoma's feminine twin. XD
4/1/2012 c3 DragonFire Princess
Love the story, Hope you'll uploads the story soon, I want to know what happen next in the story. So Please update the story ASAP.
When will you continue this story?
I want to know what will happen next in the story.
Love the story, Hope you'll uploads the story soon, I want to know what happen next in the story. So Please update the story ASAP.
When will you continue this story?
I want to know what will happen next in the story.
4/1/2012 c3 Martyna1
nice story but short chapters. what you have in all 3 should be in 1. but I hope next ones will be longer.
nice story but short chapters. what you have in all 3 should be in 1. but I hope next ones will be longer.
7/7/2011 c1 Luna
hmmm...I think your idea is good but the composition could be better...there wasn't much in the chapter and transitions were sloppy...but it's a great idea and I'm sure you'll improve
hmmm...I think your idea is good but the composition could be better...there wasn't much in the chapter and transitions were sloppy...but it's a great idea and I'm sure you'll improve