1/31 c2 11MrsMaynard
you are an amazing writer! you should right another one(:

7/11/2011 c2 3loulabel246
OOOOOOOH this is good! loulabel likie! i read the first chapter a few days but i was at school and soryy i gess i never got round to reviewing :(

but anyway, better late than never!

so lets see... i really cant remember anything from the first chapter-except that it was brill-so i'll just review the second chapter instead

firstly, i love the beac scene! awwwwww that just sounds so cute and... family-ish! it made me grin like an idiot!

Secondly, have you read the twilight saga? if so was this alice loosely based on alice cullen? i dunno the kiss-on-the-cheek thing just sounds very alice-y but i still love it as stephanie meyer didnt write that bit! (not that i have anything against steph i actually am a fan of twilight)

thirdly, not quite sure why i ike it so much, but i think the 'yes' thing - ya know wen they all say it at the same time? - is nice :) they were 'bonding' at the beach and it seems like a good place to put it-right after heir 'bonding' session :)

love the story!

hey u sed 'thats it' do u mean thats it for the story! coz i would love it if u could maybe write more :D an if not for this story then wen u get the chance to write a new mediator story?

hardly anyone involves jake an i really think hes nice s he deserves more credit than any one else gives him :(

so please tell me if ur gonna expand this story or make another or watevr as u do the mediator characters really well!

p.s- if its not too much trouble i was wndering- are u a paul fan? jese fan? brad fan? jake fan? or god forbid ur a spike/suze fan! tell me please if u get a chance! if ur too busy though thats fine :)

c ya lv from- loulabel

7/2/2011 c1 shi chan
it's amazing!

not boring at all^^ keep up the good work!

7/1/2011 c1 Angel4eva-15
this is actually interesting! plz continue!