for Hanging by a Moment9/30/2011 c1 
2Doodle87
so, it is my understanding that this story STARTS at the point of when Damon was bitten by Tyler and everything else that happened before still happened? Correct? So far it's a good story.
2Doodle87so, it is my understanding that this story STARTS at the point of when Damon was bitten by Tyler and everything else that happened before still happened? Correct? So far it's a good story.
9/29/2011 c30 Kymberleii
So I found this story today. Just to let you know how much I loved it, I read it all today. At the expense of part of my work day, my commute home on the train and before and after I watched tonight's episode. :-)
LOVED IT! My only constructive "criticism" would be: there were a few times where you switched POV accidentally, or switched past / present tense. So I don't know if you have a Beta or not, but that would help. Also, there were some words that were spelled correctly, but incorrect like "his" versus "her," etc.
My question would be: so what was that journal page that she ripped out and stuck in her pocket? That didn't seem to come back up. I wasn't sure if it was something about her feelings for Damon or...?
Also, LOVED when Stefan did the beach scene for Elena where she was happy and with Damon, but in the dream, she mentioned being scared of the beach. But then in the last chapter(s) she found solace in the water. So that was confusing.
But other than that (hey you asked for it!) I really loved the story. I love how you resolved things with Stefan and Damon and Elena as well as the whole demon thing which was new.
I also had to laugh at the Supernatural references. I'm currently starting season 5 and LOVE that show. I read another fic that involved a mirror for TVD, but didn't know it was also in SPN. There was another TV reference you made which made me laugh, but now I am forgetting what it was.
Anyways, I loved the story and it was really cool to read it all the way through!
So I found this story today. Just to let you know how much I loved it, I read it all today. At the expense of part of my work day, my commute home on the train and before and after I watched tonight's episode. :-)
LOVED IT! My only constructive "criticism" would be: there were a few times where you switched POV accidentally, or switched past / present tense. So I don't know if you have a Beta or not, but that would help. Also, there were some words that were spelled correctly, but incorrect like "his" versus "her," etc.
My question would be: so what was that journal page that she ripped out and stuck in her pocket? That didn't seem to come back up. I wasn't sure if it was something about her feelings for Damon or...?
Also, LOVED when Stefan did the beach scene for Elena where she was happy and with Damon, but in the dream, she mentioned being scared of the beach. But then in the last chapter(s) she found solace in the water. So that was confusing.
But other than that (hey you asked for it!) I really loved the story. I love how you resolved things with Stefan and Damon and Elena as well as the whole demon thing which was new.
I also had to laugh at the Supernatural references. I'm currently starting season 5 and LOVE that show. I read another fic that involved a mirror for TVD, but didn't know it was also in SPN. There was another TV reference you made which made me laugh, but now I am forgetting what it was.
Anyways, I loved the story and it was really cool to read it all the way through!
9/26/2011 c24 10spiritedghost
Funny thing as Elena and Stefan are talking to each other each trying to justify (well in Stefan's case more so then Elena's) what they were feeling while Elena was held by Klaus. I kept feeling that Stefan was so full of **. His argument was weak and I felt he was justifying but in reality once you get over it and think and consider and put yourself in his shoes, you begin to see something that has been there all along. He may have done it badly, but then again he did what he had to do, he couldn't really tip his true hand to her or Klaus because then it would have signed his death warrant and she would have been worse off. He had to do what he did to protect her and to love her. All his arguments whether you like them or not were valid, just not something we as readers or as participants want to admit too. You don't have to like Stefan to see he is right, once you calm down and walk in his shoes. So I think in this round while I feel for Elena she almost died she was made to believe she could not count on Stefan. She was made to suffer and fear for her life in a way she probably (at least I hope) never had to fear for it before. So while Stefan may feel in talking it over with her trying hard to prove his point he hates that she called out for Damon, but I believe it was at that moment, the love she felt and trust she had in Damon became absolute. It was at that precise moment in time that her heart called out to the one she felt safest with, the one she trusted to save her above all others, the one she loved with every fiber of her being. That was just so fantastically done. Emotions through out were heightened for us as readers as time and time again a tear was shed as we read and became so involved in your story that all else ceased to exist for that moment, by moment by moment in time that your story lived through us your readers and we lived through your work as a writer. So, thank-you!...Ghost!
10spiritedghostFunny thing as Elena and Stefan are talking to each other each trying to justify (well in Stefan's case more so then Elena's) what they were feeling while Elena was held by Klaus. I kept feeling that Stefan was so full of **. His argument was weak and I felt he was justifying but in reality once you get over it and think and consider and put yourself in his shoes, you begin to see something that has been there all along. He may have done it badly, but then again he did what he had to do, he couldn't really tip his true hand to her or Klaus because then it would have signed his death warrant and she would have been worse off. He had to do what he did to protect her and to love her. All his arguments whether you like them or not were valid, just not something we as readers or as participants want to admit too. You don't have to like Stefan to see he is right, once you calm down and walk in his shoes. So I think in this round while I feel for Elena she almost died she was made to believe she could not count on Stefan. She was made to suffer and fear for her life in a way she probably (at least I hope) never had to fear for it before. So while Stefan may feel in talking it over with her trying hard to prove his point he hates that she called out for Damon, but I believe it was at that moment, the love she felt and trust she had in Damon became absolute. It was at that precise moment in time that her heart called out to the one she felt safest with, the one she trusted to save her above all others, the one she loved with every fiber of her being. That was just so fantastically done. Emotions through out were heightened for us as readers as time and time again a tear was shed as we read and became so involved in your story that all else ceased to exist for that moment, by moment by moment in time that your story lived through us your readers and we lived through your work as a writer. So, thank-you!...Ghost!
9/16/2011 c30 Karkoolka
I just found this story but I love it :D
your Damon and Elena were amazing :D
I just found this story but I love it :D
your Damon and Elena were amazing :D
9/16/2011 c25 spiritedghost
Why do you all use reviews as emotional blackmail to continue a story that you want to continue anyways? Personally I like the story and it is complete at this point in time. I just think emotional blackmail is lower then low. However, FANTASTIC JOB! Damn it, I caved to blackmail, I need a drink...Ghost!
Why do you all use reviews as emotional blackmail to continue a story that you want to continue anyways? Personally I like the story and it is complete at this point in time. I just think emotional blackmail is lower then low. However, FANTASTIC JOB! Damn it, I caved to blackmail, I need a drink...Ghost!
9/16/2011 c20 spiritedghost
I think the mirror was brilliant and I do mean that. Trapping Klaus that way is inspirational, however if you want to make sure he can never get out, bury the mirror in concrete in the foundation of a new building, that way it can't be opened. Here is food for thought. Klaus is immortal and cannot die, to our knowledge, however there was another way to immobilize him, permanently. Little know fact of physic's Dig a hole a really deep hole, place his body in it with his hands ridged at his side as are his legs, pack the earth tightly and come on you have a wqitch that could do that. While the bastard lives, he can not get the leverage needed to get out. Thus he is trapped. Now add to that a cloaking spell so no witch can detect him and for all of eternity the bastard is trapped, he can't move thus he cannot escape, to really make sure encase him in concrete or as I said you have a witch encase him in molten steel when it dries he is stuck for ever again a cloaking spell would be needed after all he is a supernatural in a world of witches, thus they would be able to find him, but cloaked not so much. Think about it. It is a brilliant idea and you know it. Come on say, Ghost is brilliant! Go on say it. I like your solution however it was ingenious mine is just a bit well you get the picture but seriously if I wanted him gone forever with no hope of escape bury it in concrete or steel and cloak it...Ghost!
I think the mirror was brilliant and I do mean that. Trapping Klaus that way is inspirational, however if you want to make sure he can never get out, bury the mirror in concrete in the foundation of a new building, that way it can't be opened. Here is food for thought. Klaus is immortal and cannot die, to our knowledge, however there was another way to immobilize him, permanently. Little know fact of physic's Dig a hole a really deep hole, place his body in it with his hands ridged at his side as are his legs, pack the earth tightly and come on you have a wqitch that could do that. While the bastard lives, he can not get the leverage needed to get out. Thus he is trapped. Now add to that a cloaking spell so no witch can detect him and for all of eternity the bastard is trapped, he can't move thus he cannot escape, to really make sure encase him in concrete or as I said you have a witch encase him in molten steel when it dries he is stuck for ever again a cloaking spell would be needed after all he is a supernatural in a world of witches, thus they would be able to find him, but cloaked not so much. Think about it. It is a brilliant idea and you know it. Come on say, Ghost is brilliant! Go on say it. I like your solution however it was ingenious mine is just a bit well you get the picture but seriously if I wanted him gone forever with no hope of escape bury it in concrete or steel and cloak it...Ghost!
9/14/2011 c30 15Tinkerbell90
I didn't expect the story to be over now and I'm kinda sad it is. I really enjoyed reading it. The ending was so sweet and fluffy I really loved it. The love confessions were amazing and it was just a good way to end this awesome story.
15Tinkerbell90I didn't expect the story to be over now and I'm kinda sad it is. I really enjoyed reading it. The ending was so sweet and fluffy I really loved it. The love confessions were amazing and it was just a good way to end this awesome story.
9/13/2011 c30 4Her-Imaginarium
Amazing story! I've spent the last 3 days reading it and I was completely enthralled. Easily one of the best fics I've read. Thanks for making these last few days before the premier barerable.:)
4Her-ImaginariumAmazing story! I've spent the last 3 days reading it and I was completely enthralled. Easily one of the best fics I've read. Thanks for making these last few days before the premier barerable.:)
9/13/2011 c30 6cherryox
This was brilliant! (: so, was that the last chapter? Your really talented :D
Much love, as always, Cherry xoxo
6cherryoxThis was brilliant! (: so, was that the last chapter? Your really talented :D
Much love, as always, Cherry xoxo
9/12/2011 c30 Dramionelover01
you should write a sequel where elena gets turned into a vampire and they could officialy spendtheir eternity together.
you should write a sequel where elena gets turned into a vampire and they could officialy spendtheir eternity together.