for The Same Things8/6/2011 c3 
30Spirit Bagle of Death
Well, I definitely liked the Charles/Erik exchanges. And that Charles has such a hard time sans telepathy. But the Raven and Charles reunion, especially Erik's perspective, didn't feel...right. I feel like Charles would try to respect Raven's new name, it being a rather harmless change and especially since some of his own students, like Alex and Sean, have mutant names. I also don't see Erik forbidding Raven to see Charles, especially since he obviously still cares about the other man's feelings. I get that you were trying to establish the MalcolmX=Magneto thing, but it came off a bit strong.
Still, I def agree that Magneto is a man who holds his pain for a long time and am not at all surprised that he can't move on. Bottle up, yes. Move on, no. lol. I look forward to the next chap!
30Spirit Bagle of DeathWell, I definitely liked the Charles/Erik exchanges. And that Charles has such a hard time sans telepathy. But the Raven and Charles reunion, especially Erik's perspective, didn't feel...right. I feel like Charles would try to respect Raven's new name, it being a rather harmless change and especially since some of his own students, like Alex and Sean, have mutant names. I also don't see Erik forbidding Raven to see Charles, especially since he obviously still cares about the other man's feelings. I get that you were trying to establish the MalcolmX=Magneto thing, but it came off a bit strong.
Still, I def agree that Magneto is a man who holds his pain for a long time and am not at all surprised that he can't move on. Bottle up, yes. Move on, no. lol. I look forward to the next chap!
8/6/2011 c2 Spirit Bagle of Death
Really enjoyed it. Erik's POV is clipped, choppy, kind of tense and scattered...like Erik. ^^ Well done there. I also really loved "...feeling oddly cheated,' and how the students perceive him. Well done. *Continues*
Really enjoyed it. Erik's POV is clipped, choppy, kind of tense and scattered...like Erik. ^^ Well done there. I also really loved "...feeling oddly cheated,' and how the students perceive him. Well done. *Continues*
7/31/2011 c3 25Evildarkwolf
:( Whaaaa! I want more! haha Please update its getting so good I can not wait for the good fighing!
25Evildarkwolf:( Whaaaa! I want more! haha Please update its getting so good I can not wait for the good fighing!
7/11/2011 c3 31Dreams-of-Oompa-Loompas
I love this so far! I do believe Erik would come back to Charles. I don't think they're enemies yet, although that beach scene tore my heart apart. Can't wait for more! Although i can sense it will end angsty given how they were in the future /3
31Dreams-of-Oompa-LoompasI love this so far! I do believe Erik would come back to Charles. I don't think they're enemies yet, although that beach scene tore my heart apart. Can't wait for more! Although i can sense it will end angsty given how they were in the future /3
7/9/2011 c3 7Payce D. Elui
Hah, I thought the original drabble in Thought of That was pretty interesting- an expansion on that is nice to see. It's pretty interesting thus far- nice work.
7Payce D. EluiHah, I thought the original drabble in Thought of That was pretty interesting- an expansion on that is nice to see. It's pretty interesting thus far- nice work.
7/7/2011 c3 18I.C.2014
... This is all really awkward... not at all like the way it was portayed in the original X-men movies... but this is definitely more realistic to me. Keep up the good work
18I.C.2014... This is all really awkward... not at all like the way it was portayed in the original X-men movies... but this is definitely more realistic to me. Keep up the good work
7/7/2011 c3 15Deathless Wraith
I'm so glad you made this into its own story! I got teary-eyed when Erik revealed that he had hoped Charles would visit someday, enough to connect his personal room to a vacant one. I can easily see the hope for reconnection flare strongly in him. I like the humorous things you throw in- Borco and the M initial.
15Deathless WraithI'm so glad you made this into its own story! I got teary-eyed when Erik revealed that he had hoped Charles would visit someday, enough to connect his personal room to a vacant one. I can easily see the hope for reconnection flare strongly in him. I like the humorous things you throw in- Borco and the M initial.
7/6/2011 c3 Henry A
I like this fic, thanks for writing it.
As for slash...the presence (or absence) of it shouldn't make or break your story. I don't think you should be letting other people write the plot for you, as these are YOUR ideas.
In my opinion, an intriguing idea with good execution should depend on alot of things, but least among them slash - there's generic smut for that sort of focus.
If it fits, write it in. If not, fudge all the detractors, they can read something else.
I like this fic, thanks for writing it.
As for slash...the presence (or absence) of it shouldn't make or break your story. I don't think you should be letting other people write the plot for you, as these are YOUR ideas.
In my opinion, an intriguing idea with good execution should depend on alot of things, but least among them slash - there's generic smut for that sort of focus.
If it fits, write it in. If not, fudge all the detractors, they can read something else.