for The Deal Killer10/15/2012 c21 
45Beth - Geek Chick
Not sure if you plan on continuing this, but I read it completely through today, enjoying every line.
45Beth - Geek ChickNot sure if you plan on continuing this, but I read it completely through today, enjoying every line.
7/15/2012 c21 scubagurl22
I really like the way you write Marshall's temper, it's very believable in its intensity. Great chapter! Looking forward to more since it appears the Habitat scene is coming up!
I really like the way you write Marshall's temper, it's very believable in its intensity. Great chapter! Looking forward to more since it appears the Habitat scene is coming up!
7/15/2012 c20 scubagurl22
I missed updates! Lol, I was wondering what happened to this story. Badass!Marshall was great, as always, and I'm loving the new aspect to their snarky conversations. Looking forward to more of this op!
I missed updates! Lol, I was wondering what happened to this story. Badass!Marshall was great, as always, and I'm loving the new aspect to their snarky conversations. Looking forward to more of this op!
4/29/2012 c21 JJ2008
Sorry for taking so long to review, but i started from chapter one because it's such a great story! Another amazing chapter...this just gets better and better. Love it and can't wait for your next update.
Sorry for taking so long to review, but i started from chapter one because it's such a great story! Another amazing chapter...this just gets better and better. Love it and can't wait for your next update.
4/11/2012 c21 Guest
Wow your story is so amazing! I cannot wait until the next update which will hopefully be very soon. You do a phenomenal job keeping Mary and Marshall in character and I look forward to seeing where you take this story next. Keep up the great work!
Wow your story is so amazing! I cannot wait until the next update which will hopefully be very soon. You do a phenomenal job keeping Mary and Marshall in character and I look forward to seeing where you take this story next. Keep up the great work!
3/26/2012 c21 99Jayne Leigh
Love this fic! It gets better and better! I loved how Marshall made Mary see that she needed to remember she doesn't just put herself in danger but him and others too! I wish we saw more of this in the show! Can't wait to read more!
99Jayne LeighLove this fic! It gets better and better! I loved how Marshall made Mary see that she needed to remember she doesn't just put herself in danger but him and others too! I wish we saw more of this in the show! Can't wait to read more!
3/25/2012 c21 1ksnelders93
please dont have them get in trouble for the op...i dont want internal investigations to suspend either one of them, if thats where your heading with it!
1ksnelders93please dont have them get in trouble for the op...i dont want internal investigations to suspend either one of them, if thats where your heading with it!
3/25/2012 c21 73jekkah
Oh, Mary. Being just so Mary. LOL
Have I mentioned just how much I love that you have Mary and Marshall having such a bumpy ride after getting together? It's refreshing! (I say this even as I never write them that way myself!)
I can't help myself - I love Ronnie. He just cracks me up!
Love me some angry Marshall! I like Mary ignoring Stan's advice. Oh, Mary.
The end - the raw emotion, the uncertainty? No words for how awesome that was!
73jekkahOh, Mary. Being just so Mary. LOL
Have I mentioned just how much I love that you have Mary and Marshall having such a bumpy ride after getting together? It's refreshing! (I say this even as I never write them that way myself!)
I can't help myself - I love Ronnie. He just cracks me up!
Love me some angry Marshall! I like Mary ignoring Stan's advice. Oh, Mary.
The end - the raw emotion, the uncertainty? No words for how awesome that was!
3/25/2012 c21 Sarah
I loved this chapter! You have such a great writing style. I loved how we learn about what actually happened as Marshall works through the day himself.
Mary and Marshall's fight was spot on. They know just what to say so that it hurts the most. And I like their fight so smoothly turns to passion as they work through their emotions.
Can't wait for more!
I loved this chapter! You have such a great writing style. I loved how we learn about what actually happened as Marshall works through the day himself.
Mary and Marshall's fight was spot on. They know just what to say so that it hurts the most. And I like their fight so smoothly turns to passion as they work through their emotions.
Can't wait for more!
3/25/2012 c21 BrittanyLS
Wow! I knew there was a reason he didn't want her to push him!
I love how you have written Mary and Marshall! It's about time someone got it through her head that he doesn't want to lose her anymore than she wants to lose him
Wow! I knew there was a reason he didn't want her to push him!
I love how you have written Mary and Marshall! It's about time someone got it through her head that he doesn't want to lose her anymore than she wants to lose him
3/25/2012 c21 29JMS529
Well done. I like that Marshall turned the tables and forced Mary to see it froom his point of view. Liked Marshall standing his ground with her too. I wished they do that more on the show. Looking forward to the next part.
29JMS529Well done. I like that Marshall turned the tables and forced Mary to see it froom his point of view. Liked Marshall standing his ground with her too. I wished they do that more on the show. Looking forward to the next part.
3/25/2012 c21 15merciki
yay ! Another great chapter :) well done !
I loved Marshall's attitude towards Mary - I could so see him do that. Mary needs to be reminded that Marshall indeed deserves respect :)
And I can't wait to read the next awesome chapter: )
15mercikiyay ! Another great chapter :) well done !
I loved Marshall's attitude towards Mary - I could so see him do that. Mary needs to be reminded that Marshall indeed deserves respect :)
And I can't wait to read the next awesome chapter: )
3/25/2012 c21 athena64
Waow... badass Marshall expressing what he feels... the ending is definitely a cliffhanger... which I am eager to see, or more accurately read! How will it unfold? please make them together... :-) thank you!
Waow... badass Marshall expressing what he feels... the ending is definitely a cliffhanger... which I am eager to see, or more accurately read! How will it unfold? please make them together... :-) thank you!
3/22/2012 c20 1ksnelders93
Pleaseeee update soon... Maybe have Mary hurt or Marshall rescue her pleassseee
1ksnelders93Pleaseeee update soon... Maybe have Mary hurt or Marshall rescue her pleassseee
3/19/2012 c20 tania
its really good love the scenes between marshall and mary...i can imagine..it really descriptive.
its really good love the scenes between marshall and mary...i can imagine..it really descriptive.