7/6/2011 c1 38Laura Scofield
Lovely take on the Armje scene! XD Its an unwritten rule in Dan/Tay fanfiction, that most writers are bound to tackle writing Armje at some point.

I like the mix of emotions in the story, the fact that it's not just romance. I liked how you re-worked the original scene, and wrote it in your own way how Dannyl reveals that he's a lad and he's been repressing his feelings all these years. It worked very well, and obviously it was great to see Dannyl admit his feelings for Tayend, something which (most Dan/Tay fans would agree) should have been in the book, dammit! But fanfiction like yours keeps us from going crazy, so well done XD

And I like how you handled the part at the end too ;D